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Would She? Chapter 15
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Previously
Bette took this time to sip on her drink. She couldn’t go through this now. She was there to mourn Candace’s death, not visit with Tina.
“Bette, you hurt me. Something that I thought was solid and strong melted down in a matter of weeks. I would have never thought you would cheat on me.”
“So, I guess we’re even?
“Even?”
“Yes. I cheated on you, and you took my child away.”
“I didn’t take Angelica completely away from you”
Bette wasn’t sure if she was ready to spill the beans on her connection with Angelica yet. She hadn’t come up with a plan. This trip was about letting go of Candace. Being able to move on with her life.
“Completely? What do you call it then?”
“Bette, who do you think suggested Angelica to write to a pen pal?”
“What do you mean?”
“I remembered the time you used to spend writing your pen pals. I just hoped that one day, she would reach you. And as it turns out, she did.”
Chapter 15
Angelica & Henry
Once Angelica hit the floor, she felt a burning sensation take over her body. What was this? What happened? She looked around and saw Henry standing with the gun pointed to the floor.
Henry couldn’t move; he couldn’t speak.
“Please…help me!” Angelica moaned.
She squeezed her arm to stop the blood from spreading around her on the floor. She applied as much pressure as she was able.
“Please, Henry.”
She felt searing pain and was weak from blood loss. Henry saw all the blood and heard her pleas, but he froze then started shaking. What have I done? I had to stop the voices.
“What did you make me do, John?”
Henry raised the gun, put it in his mouth and tightened his finger on the trigger.
Bette & Tina
“So…you’re saying it was you that starting her writing to a pen pal?” Bette asked.
“Yes, Bette. She was going though changes Henry and I couldn’t help her with. One day I remembered all those pen pals you used to tell me about, and hoped that one from her would reach you. It did.”
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omg post right freaking now!!!!!!!!!!!! longer
your killing me… with both stories now… and i love them both… please continue… oh and please keep angel alive…
glad to see your back with this story, please post soon….
glad to see your back with this story, please post soon….
chill out! mich. isnt going to let anything happen to angel.it will bring tibette closer…thanks for the update!
Yes thank you Teresa for editing. We have missed you Michellia…I really love this story and I have been looking for it for awhile. Please don’t let Angelica die. Is Tina punch drunk? Does she think that a pen pal letter could possibly replace Bette as a parent? She’s crazy if she does. Out of all the things she could ask she’s gonna ask why Bette married Candace. after she left her and took her child away from her what did she expect her to do? You have to post soon and Teresa has to edit.
Hey You, thanks for the shout out. A great chapter but you dropped another cliffie on my head and left so many questions. You must post soon.
That was awesome…and I hope B & T leave together to get to Angelica. Thanks for the update
Please let Angie be ok don’t let her die please. B&T need to talk and work thing out. I think hendick is dead. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Thanks for continuing – I have been missing your story. This was a great update.
Thank the stars that u posted at last. I just totally hang about waiting 4 this story…is Henry out of his misery…my god what was tina thinking being with him…she should have sensed there was a problem there…betta get those warring mamas back to their baby…Did u get the message about your other story? can repost bcuz i’m hooked on finding thatinding out who the winner is even tho i’ve read chapter 57/67
sorry about the mess of my comment…your other story is messed up, can u repost or fix please…i so want to read it and eventually find out who the winner is…
Great update! Please don’t keep us waiting too long.
Great an update. Now I will patient wait for another. Hopefully it won’t be tooooooo long. Love your writing.
Angie cant die. Her Mothers needs her. Hope this gets them back together. thanks
=O Angelica definitely doesn’t deserve to die. Bette lost Candace and it would kill her to lose the daughter she only knew through letters.
HEy Mich, You are both wmoderful and wicked. Love it! WOnderful for continuing this terrific tale and wicked for leaving me in such suspense. Did Henry kill himself or did the officers do they duty? WIll Angelica survive? Why the hell did the room go dark for both her parents? A power outage or a dark foreboading of what was to come? Spooky. As always I really adore your skills and usage of words. The dialogue pitches the correct amount of emotion whether it be anger, fear or frustration. Please post more soon. Many thanks, Your Loyal Fan.
Great update. Now thats some connection they all have. I hope Angelica doesnt die that would be to much for both of them to handle. I hope you dont wait as long to post the next chapter. PPS
Glad to see this story back!..hope Angelica makes it and Bette and Tina can reconnect. PPS
I agree with Lament–it would just be too cruel for Angelica to die! Bette is still grieving Candace and to lose her daughter this way would be COLD BLOODED! And Tina had already lost Henry to the prison of his own mind. THAT WOULD JUST BE WRONG, BABY! But it’s your story…PPS and more often!
I love the gun sound effects :P It felt so wrong to chuckle at them during such a serious moment :X I’m not sure if I can exhale until I know things are okay so post soon, yeah?
I’m so ashamed now…I was waiting and waiting on an update and I missed this one. Poor Henry, poor Bette, poor Angelica and also poor Tina. Strange how life goes sometimes, when you think you hold it in your hand, then it suddenly slips away. Great update, thanks a lot.