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Would She? Chapter 15
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Bette looked at Tina. She didn’t know how to react. Should she have been grateful or mad? Bette didn’t know. One thing she did know was that she should have been there instead of a letter. She should have been there when Angelica was crying instead of a letter.
“So, you want me to thank you for that?”
“No…..yes……I mean, because of me, you were a big part of her life. I didn’t shut you out completely.”
Bette swallowed what was left in her glass. She couldn’t believe what she was hearing. Did she actually think she was doing her a favor?
“Tina, I think you better leave.”
“What? Why?”
“Because I don’t want to say something I’ll regret.”
“No, Bette, I won’t. You will stand or sit and hear what I’ve got to say.”
Bette began to laugh.
“What is so fucking funny, Bette?”
“You…….here…..demanding to talk! When I wanted to talk years ago, you didn’t want to hear a damn thing. When I came around to see Angelica, you always called the police. WHEN I TRIED AGAIN, YOU JUST UP AND LEFT WITH NO FORWARDING ADDRESS. AND NOW, YOU’VE GOT THE NERVE TO STAND HERE AND DEMAND THAT I LISTEN TO YOU? TINA, GET THE FUCK OUT!”
Tina wanted to talk. She needed to explain her actions. She needed to hear Bette’s side of things.
“Why did you marry Candace, Bette?”
Henry & Angelica
Three police officers entered the house with their guns ready.
“Put down the gun!” one officer demanded.
Henry opened his eyes but didn’t remove the gun from his mouth. He couldn’t live with himself if Angelica didn’t make it. He couldn’t face his kids or Tina.
“I said, put the gun down, Sir…”
The officers surrounded him with two on both sides and one in front.
“Sir, whatever happened here can be fixed. You need to put the gun away so the paramedics can take care of this woman right away. She looks badly wounded.”
Henry once again opened his eyes and looked down at Angelica. He swore he didn’t want anyone to get hurt. He slowly removed the gun from his mouth.
“Ok…….good. Now place the weapon on the table next to you.”
As Henry starting to put the gun down he broke out in a sweat, his whole body shaking. This was exactly what happened when he woke up the next morning after John’s abuse.
“SIR, PLACE THE GUN ON THE TABLE!”
“Now, look what you’ve done. Now you have to tell them our secret. What would they think, Henry? What would your grandmother think of you now?”
Henry raised the gun and once again pointed at the voices.
“Noooooooooooooooooooooo!” Henry shouted.
POW…POW….POW…..POW…..POW……POW!
Five minutes later, Angelica was in the ambulance, on her way to the hospital.
“We have to get her there quick. She’s lost a lot of blood, and her pulse is low,” the paramedic yelled from the back.
Angelica could barely hear what was going on. She was slipping away.
“Mom…” she moaned before she went to that dark place.
Bette & Tina
“What does my wife have to do with this, Tina?”
For some reason, the room went dark. Pain and a burning sensation surrounded them. In a stone panic, Bette and Tina looked at each other.
“Angel,” they both whispered.
TBC
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omg post right freaking now!!!!!!!!!!!! longer
your killing me… with both stories now… and i love them both… please continue… oh and please keep angel alive…
glad to see your back with this story, please post soon….
glad to see your back with this story, please post soon….
chill out! mich. isnt going to let anything happen to angel.it will bring tibette closer…thanks for the update!
Yes thank you Teresa for editing. We have missed you Michellia…I really love this story and I have been looking for it for awhile. Please don’t let Angelica die. Is Tina punch drunk? Does she think that a pen pal letter could possibly replace Bette as a parent? She’s crazy if she does. Out of all the things she could ask she’s gonna ask why Bette married Candace. after she left her and took her child away from her what did she expect her to do? You have to post soon and Teresa has to edit.
Hey You, thanks for the shout out. A great chapter but you dropped another cliffie on my head and left so many questions. You must post soon.
That was awesome…and I hope B & T leave together to get to Angelica. Thanks for the update
Please let Angie be ok don’t let her die please. B&T need to talk and work thing out. I think hendick is dead. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Thanks for continuing – I have been missing your story. This was a great update.
Thank the stars that u posted at last. I just totally hang about waiting 4 this story…is Henry out of his misery…my god what was tina thinking being with him…she should have sensed there was a problem there…betta get those warring mamas back to their baby…Did u get the message about your other story? can repost bcuz i’m hooked on finding thatinding out who the winner is even tho i’ve read chapter 57/67
sorry about the mess of my comment…your other story is messed up, can u repost or fix please…i so want to read it and eventually find out who the winner is…
Great update! Please don’t keep us waiting too long.
Great an update. Now I will patient wait for another. Hopefully it won’t be tooooooo long. Love your writing.
Angie cant die. Her Mothers needs her. Hope this gets them back together. thanks
=O Angelica definitely doesn’t deserve to die. Bette lost Candace and it would kill her to lose the daughter she only knew through letters.
HEy Mich, You are both wmoderful and wicked. Love it! WOnderful for continuing this terrific tale and wicked for leaving me in such suspense. Did Henry kill himself or did the officers do they duty? WIll Angelica survive? Why the hell did the room go dark for both her parents? A power outage or a dark foreboading of what was to come? Spooky. As always I really adore your skills and usage of words. The dialogue pitches the correct amount of emotion whether it be anger, fear or frustration. Please post more soon. Many thanks, Your Loyal Fan.
Great update. Now thats some connection they all have. I hope Angelica doesnt die that would be to much for both of them to handle. I hope you dont wait as long to post the next chapter. PPS
Glad to see this story back!..hope Angelica makes it and Bette and Tina can reconnect. PPS
I agree with Lament–it would just be too cruel for Angelica to die! Bette is still grieving Candace and to lose her daughter this way would be COLD BLOODED! And Tina had already lost Henry to the prison of his own mind. THAT WOULD JUST BE WRONG, BABY! But it’s your story…PPS and more often!
I love the gun sound effects :P It felt so wrong to chuckle at them during such a serious moment :X I’m not sure if I can exhale until I know things are okay so post soon, yeah?
I’m so ashamed now…I was waiting and waiting on an update and I missed this one. Poor Henry, poor Bette, poor Angelica and also poor Tina. Strange how life goes sometimes, when you think you hold it in your hand, then it suddenly slips away. Great update, thanks a lot.