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Would She? Part 13
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“Stand up, Snappy. Stand up so we can see.”
Henry pushed himself to his feet. His crotch came level with John’s face. John rocked on his one old knee and reached out to Henry for balance.
“Help me ol’ General up, Snappy.”
Henry grabbed hold of John’s hand and pulled him to his feet.
“Thanks, Snappy,” John said, and patted Henry on the head.
“Let’s move over to the light so that we can see better, okay?”
Henry remembered he felt like he should have left. He opened the drawer on the coffee table and reached for the silver heavy metal. He held the cold, heavy object in his hand and ran his finger tip along the head.
The tears began to run down quicker now as he continued to remember.
Instead of leaving, Henry followed John over to the lamp. John touched his shoulders, a light squeeze and then another pat on the head before he came around him and eased himself back down into the chair.
He picked the bottle up and poured the last of the Scotch into the glass, and Nina Simone began to sing in a language Henry had never heard before.
“Well, go on,” John said after he’d drained the glass and set it back down on the crate and folded his hands neatly in his lap.
Henry shrugged his shoulders and turned his head toward the stairs. It was suddenly too cool in the basement.
“You need help?”
Henry didn’t say a word. He wanted to walk to the stairs so badly, his feet began to shuffle.
John grabbed his hand and gently pulled him closer.
“What’s wrong, Snappy? You embarrassed?”
Henry nodded his head without looking at John. Tears were beginning to well up in his eyes.
“You shouldn’t be,” John said, and stroked Henry’s fingers.
“You should never be embarrassed with me.” he purred.
Henry blinked back the tears. John reached out and with this index finger pulled apart the opening at the front of Henry’s shorts.
“I see your little man, Snappy,” John laughed.
“Well, it’s not so little now, is it?” he said as he pushed his finger through and poked at Henry’s penis.
Henry’s body jerked and a tear escaped and crept its way down his cheek. John’s heart skipped a beat as he took a deep breath and moved his hand to the waistband of Henry’s shorts.
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To answer some of you guys PM’S about what song Tina was humming in Chapter Two. Well it was ‘Over The Rainbow’.
i LOVE this story, its so sad, cant wait for the next chapter!
Michellia…..This a wonderful story, so many layers and subplots. PPS. I had to go back and reread the previous chapter to get up to speed again. lol.
Geez, that was so heavy and hard to read, but I think it was necessary insight into Tina’s life (via Henry’s). At this point, I’m kind of just hoping Bette lets her in.
awe goodness please dont say u’re gonna include the rape of Angelica or any of the B & T squad in this!!!!!!
Now it all makes sense. I kept thinking the comment about penguins set Henry off, but that wasn’t it. It was the panther comment. Damn girl this is rough. This story is far from sucking, but definitely rough. Looking forward to the next chapter.
They need to talk even after all these years. Maybe they can get some clouser on the past. After all Bette has been writing Angie all these yrs and Marcus is in the picture .for Tina. thanks
you know i love your work… and this story is right there on top… please please don’t make us wait to long for them to finally talk… and i have a feeling angelica walked in on henry killing him self… tough stuff…
Wow…so deep! Of course, baby, one cliffhanger wasn’t enough for you! What a web you are weaving in this story, and we are all ensnared! Please don’t let any distractions–or the flu–get in the way of a quick follow-up to this story. Get well soon!
WOW!!!!!! PPS
This was a tough chapter to get through. You brought Tina and Bette together. There’s hope for the future if it’s not overwhelmed by the past.
Wow….so detailed, painful…full of emotion….Wow.
way too much Henry time..sorreeeee…more Angel, more B and T please…25 years later huh?? how old does that make ’em?
You most definitely have my attention!! PPS!
Poor Henry, is he kill himself. B&T need to talk and let see whats happen!
It was a long time coming, and truly worth the wait! Its chapters like this which causes one to literally feel Henry’s pain. Baby, this was excellent. Although Henry is a grown man, I sat here feeling like I was reading the actual FEAR a 9 yr old would have had. Henry didn’t seem to have a storyline; yet the one you gave him raises the question of how he was able to handle this all of his life? YOU know I am not a Henry fan, but this chapter was so deep that I didn’t care if Bette and Tina never saw each other in the hallway. But, now that they have, let’s talk about it. 25 years go by and Tina has the nerve to stand there and ask herself, “What the fuck just happened. Why couldn’t she say anything?” For clarity sake, was Tina asking this of herself or wondering it of Bette? You know I have more questions; ones you’re NOT going to answer so HURRY UP & POST AGAIN!!
wow Mich baby this is beyond words. I really don’t like Henry butt he things he went through you don’t wish upon your worst enemy. Your stories are so wonderful and I realy keep enjoying them. PPS thanks
I forgot to add…I am loving this story. PPS
Damn this story is like watching a train wreck – or season 3 – are you IC in hidding? giving us little bits of hope. Making us feel something for the unliked character (IC Jenny – you – Henry).Please give us some B&T happiness…
Wow…I held my breath this whole chapter…the writing was so awesome. No one should have to go thru what Henry went thru. I am anxious to see what kind of conversation Bette & Tina will have. I can understand Bette’s pain still being fresh…she lost her daughter for 25 years (I know she connected with a pen pal but she didn’t know who she was). Please post soon …like today.
great update.. i am glad the prev is dead bette and tina need to talk longer you need to post more often 4 this story
You’ve made me speechless…and I can tell you this isn’t happening frequently. But damn those cliffhangers, girl you’re killing me overhere.
Painful memories for everyone….please post soon.