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Would She? Part 14
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How can two people who went their separate ways and led different lives still have feelings this strong?
How can one’s heart beat this fast? How can two women who once shared everything in the beginning, loved each other unconditionally, now stand here not knowing what to say?
Who was going to be the brave one and speak first? Who was going to be the bigger person and say “I’m sorry.”
Henry & Angelica
Seconds before Angelica had entered the house, Henry began to hear John’s voice again.
“Hi Snappy. It’s just between you and me. I won’t tell anyone what you did. Friends share, don’t they?”
That voice wouldn’t stop. John just kept on talking.
“PLEASE JUST GO AWAY,” Henry shouted.
“Please just leave me alone,” he sobbed.
“I will never tell.”
Fed up with the voices and the memories, Henry stood up and began to shoot in the direction he thought the voices were coming from. This happened to be at the time Angelica walked through the door.
Angelica walked in and she heard–and felt–the first shot. The bullet hit the outside of her right arm, fracturing the radius bone when exiting out the forearm. The bullet affected the muscles that controlled thumb movement, so she lost her grip of the door knob.
The second shot sounded louder and closer. The bullet entered her upper arm, passed through the biceps muscles and exited below her armpit. It then entered the muscles in the side of her chest and came to rest in the soft tissues of the right side of her back just below the shoulder blade.
Angelica fell first against the door, then to the floor.
Bette & Tina
Tina stood there looking all innocent. This is what sent Bette over the edge. Standing there as if she was really concerned about her. Like she even gave a damn about the fact that she was crying.
Bette neither wanted nor needed anything from Tina. She didn’t need her to find Angelica. She didn’t need her for love. She absolutely didn’t want anything.
“Tina, it would be best that you just leave.”
Tina looked up from her shaking hands. Her eyes were blood red from all the alcohol she had accumulated earlier.
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1st…..BRB!! Thank YOU Baby!
michy can I kill tina now? They haven’t seen each other in 25 years, Bette lost her daughter, and the first words out of Tina’s mouth were about Candace? I hope tina has been happy in her little world of eternal victimization and wanting to make Bette pay. I would have slapped her when she said that is why she set Angie up as Bette’s penpal..Bette is Angie’s mother, for god’s sake!! Feel better michy!
Oh..She knew Angelica was writing Bette..That’s why she didn’t question her naming the childrean after Bette and Candace.But shit Hanry is tripping and shooting.. I can’t beleive that for all these years Tina know whe could contact Bette and let Angelica and Bette see each other but didn’t. The pen pal was okay but how ’bout some face to face contact. I’m not liking Tina right about now
Sweetie, you most certainly surprised me. My imagination, brought on from the previous chapter, had me thinking that Henry might be taking a bullet to the head; I didn’t expect this. Now, I know you wouldn’t be so cruel as to have Henry accidentally kill Angelica; so I read this with the belief and hope that although her body has just taken 2 bullets, she will not die. I have to say that I am surprised Bette nor Tina didn’t feel some sort of pain the minute the first bullet struck Angelica. On another note, how long does one apologize for a mistake? I’m sure not you or anyone else can’t possibly answer that, but can Tina be so serious as to believe that it was ok to hurt Bette like she has done? Admittedly, Bette cheated, yet I cannot come to any discernable reason for Tina not being able to let it go. Bette was never her enemy, she just made a mistake; one that she has always regretted. I think Tina needs to finally come down off her cross.
I cant believe that Tina after 25 yrs Threw Candace in Bette face She is sick. Henry is sick, Bette is greaving for her wife and Tina is telling her shit that she knew that Angie was Bettes Pen Pal They are so messed up. Now Angie has been shot by Henry and who is there to help her ? iF i WAS bETTE i WOULD RUN LKE A FOREST FIRE WAS AFTER ME. I feel like I’m full of rage and would like to slap some sense into Tina. thanks
shit…these mothers betta stop fighting and tune into little girl b4 that mental case kills her!!!!great post…take some more cough medicine…lmao
dam girl… your killing me here… i hope someone heard all of the shots and the cops are on the way.. and henry… i hope he eats his gun… because first tina and then bette are going to kill him… take some more meds and continue writing…
OMG. So good. PPPS
Sorry your feeling poorly…crackers and 7Up might help…sorry but I am being selfish…I want you to get better so you can keep posting. Love the twist with Henry and Angie…and with the Bette and Tina thing. I can actually see this kind of thing happening. Some wounds are not healed with time and can feel as if they happened yesterday even though time has passed. Please post soon.
“…” No words, just feelings [of :( :( :( :*( :*****( :O @_@ :****( :(] for all…
Is Angelica gonna be okay? And that is deep that Tina knew but didn’t contact Bette directly! So much anger… Get well, baby–please post quickly. My pleasure!
hey women! im sorry your feeling bad,get well soon babe.. please god let angel will be alright,and hendick better shoot hinself cause if tibette get a whole of him hes DEADMEAT! LOL P.P.S.
Damn
Very deep, some of these people are trying to kill each other physically and metaphysically. Such a painful mess. Was this medicinally induced? Take care of yourself and Angelica, Bette, Tina and Henry need lots of help.
Sorry that you are not feeling well, but let me just say that you have not missed one beat. All I can say is, WOW! I have no guesses as to where this is going…actually I am like that with all of your fics, but as always I am very happy to be along for the ride.
I wish I could throw Tina off the cliff at Rick’s cafe! What a fucking bitch? Does she honestly fucking think a penpal, who Bette only found out recently was Aneglica makes everything all hunky dory? Please! Post soon of course when you feel better!
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr tina
I was thinking what snQQpy was thinking that at least one of them would have felt a twinge when Angelica was shot. Does Tina REALLY think that Bette being a pen pal was gonna make up for 25 years of not seeing her daughter? She is worse off than I thought. I can’t believe she actually knew and didn’t say anything to anyone. So if she knew that then she must know that Bette & Candace got married. She probably knows all about their lives but Bette wasn’t allowed jack. Henry might as well call the ambulance for Angelica and then turn the gun on himself because he is as good as dead. I hope you get to feeling better real soon. I think the more you write the better you will feel. And don’t even THINK of killing off Angelica.
WOW Michellia you threw me for a lopp this chappy AND I LIKE IT. Hope you feel better soon!
Oh Tina, not so bright, penpals, you set them up to be penpals?? oh my god, she’s insane!!
Damn this is bad, and please don’t kill Angel and hope someone will call 911 and take her to the hospital. B&T need to stop fighting and get ready to go to see Angel. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Holy crap… ok, I don’t even know what to say… obviously, I hope Angelica’s ok… and I want to smack Tina around for being a fool and bringing up something SO old that she’s already punished Bette for enough. i hope Bette at least explodes at her, considering the situation… wow… can’t wait for more… feel better!
I likie. I just read the whole story well up intill this part. but i was very surprised with Bette and Candace. good writing I might add. ^_^
Hello Gorgeous. An amazing chapter; but then again I’m not suprised with your wonderful talent. Just catching up and I feel as if I could use a drink myself ;-) I hope you are feeling better. I am always available to give you some TLC ;-))) Next chapter please. Don’t keep me waiting for too long!!!
WOW!!! I am so with skycap on this. Hope you get well soon. I do hope Angel os going to be OK. Thanks PPS
First of all get better soon sweetie. WOW this is one hell of a chapter, so many emotions, so many feelings. i really hope backné didn’t kill Angel in his rage. And Tina yeah what can I say about Tina only that I hate her even more than before. After all this years she still can’t stop hurting Bette. How much more does Bette has to take from this woman??? Please Bette throw her out of your room and move on without her, you’re better off. And like SnQQpy and Sky said they should feel their baby is in danger. Please get well soon and post soon thanks.
Hope you’ll be alright and feeling better soon. Poor Henry all this anger coming out now, anger that grew above his head all these years…and how can he survive when he finds out he shot Angelica, this is very deep girl. Bette & Tina looking at each other wanting to say sweet things but blurting out anachronisms because their minds are giving wrong impulses to their mouth. The attraction is still there but is covered with anger. Girl you did it again, great chapter, thanks.
First you are amazing and this story is great. Secondly, I sure hope you feel better soon. Thanks.