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WTF…is goin’ on here ch 5
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Kit wondered to the back of the gallery and stopped when she heard moans coming from the back room. She wondered closer to the door. And her eyes widened at what she heard next. Fury in her eyes she swung the door open to find
Candace and Helena going at it like nobodys business.
OH ***** NO!! Hearing Kits voice raise Shane flew around the corner to see what happened. She ran up to Kit.
Whats wrong? Kit didnt say anything; she just pointed in side the closet. Irritated than her playtime with Candace was being interrupted, Helena reached for the doorknob.
Humm, do you mind?
What the ***** do you me, do I mind? You think Im just going to sit here and let you disrespect my sister in her own gallery on her big night.
Look this has nothing to do with you. Why dont you make yourself useful and go get me a drink. Im going to need it when Im dont with her. Candace was just standing there, saying nothing. Shocked that she was caught.
Oh no you didnt. Kit exclaimed reaching out to grab Helena, but Shane grabbed her.
Whoa Kit. Clam down shes not even worth it.
When I beat the living ***** outta her itll be worth it. Hearing the commotion Alice and Dana ran up to Kit and Shane to see what was going on. When Alice saw Helena and Candace half naked still draped over each other she lost it.
Oh no, Kit I say we beat both their asses. Dana was just starring.
Look, lets not ruin Bettes night. Lets take this outside and talk it out, Shane was the voice of reason. They all agreed and started to walk outside.
Meanwhile in Bettes office, her and Tina were sitting on the couch talking quietly when James ran in to get Bette.
Bette you have to come out here now. Bette jumped up.
Whats wrong?
Oh nothing but theres a buyer out here that wanted to get your opinion on something.
Oh, ok. Ill be there in a minute. Bette turned back to Tina, sorry duty calls.
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It has got to be Peggy. Come on Peggy – kit the rest of her sorry ass!
Peggy!?
WooHoo!!! This was fun. I hope it’s Peggy taking care of business.
I think that Candana and Helena deserve each other and would make a good couple. I don’t see why Kit wanted to kick Helena’s but because she was playing right into their hands. Oh by the way, the expression is “There aint nonething between us but air and opportunity”. Come on and clean it up Peggy.
Fight scene, hilarious. Good Job.
K
That was hilarious. Just loved it. Can’t wait for more. I hope you have a wonderful birthday!
Peggy to the rescue..lol..OMG…great chapter..i love it..post soon and happy birthday Neq i wish you all the lucky in the world.. ;-)
oh man, your story really made my day! that was to funny, thanx for making me laugh, I needed that! continue soon please, I just love it!
cool can’t wait to see who it is but i do think that it is peggy aswell. well can’t wait to find out so please post soon
Happy 18th Birthday Neq!!!! As expected, you’ve left us with another cliffy. Have a wonderful today and I hope you post soon.
No they di’int!
Bette and Tina shoulda just passed them like a test and kept goin’
Kit takin’ up for her baby sis – Kit is cool like that…
Fun!
Glad to see Kit and Bette kick some ass. No one deserves it more than Helena and Candace. Great update!
LMAO. Great job. Have a good B-day tomorrow. One small request, please drop the “ya’ll”.
Oh god this is so fucking funny. Helena play kung fu and Kit went crazy, I jsut love this line it just so funny, Candace hit Kit, Bette kick Candace’s ass, and both Porter sisters kick Helena and Candace’s ass like a ball, love it. I love this chapter, is so hiliarious, I almost fall out my chair, love it. Ok I think I know who said the last line is Peggy, and she’s gonna kick Helena’s ass too, love it. Post soon, thanks! HAVE A WONDERFUL BIRTHDAY!
Just been reading your 5 chapters and good god girl this is a wonderful story. What a twist you have build up here – I love it. Now is Peggy comming into the picture. Please post soon – we want more more more. we simply can´t get enough.
Hey Neq!!! A promise is a promise right? ;) Why u leaving us hangin babe?
Is it peggy or sumeone else? hmm u are getting real good at these cliffhangers!!! Waiting for your post! hope u had a good bday!!!! N hope you’re smiling now
it’s about time bette put the beat down on somebody…with all that bullshit…i have been waiting too long for that…thank you.
that was so funny
Hey…Me loved it..twas fun reading how kit beat candyass..he he…oh before i forget ‘Happy Birthday Neq’…may this year bring you utmost happiness, peace ..and abundant ideas for fanfic stories.. ; ))..have a blast!!
Happy birthday! Cant believe someone else had the same request as me: pleeeeeeease no more “ya’ll”!
Yeah, it’s about time foxy brown and flashdance came out to play. I was laughing so hard, I had to sallow my drink cause I didn’t want to spit it out but choked on it anyways. Still LMAO