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WTF…is goin’ on here ch 5
What a night, Tina whispered into Bettes ear.
You aint seen nothing yet, Bette said and they shared a soft kiss on the lips. When Helena saw them kiss she just snapped. Red flashed in her eyes.
Bette is my woman!!! she yelled running towards Tina. Hearing and seeing Helena run towards Tina Kit stepped in the way and clothes lined Helena.
HOLY *****!!! Everyone yelled.
Yea you aint like that did you Kit said standing over her. Cmon get up. Get you punk ***** up and fight. Helenas ego wouldnt let here just sit back she stood and lunged for Kit. She tackled Kit to the ground. They were rolling all over the place. They un tangled themselves from each other and stood up. Helena. Went kung fu and Kit went crazy. Helena kicked Kit in the mouth.
OH NO. IMMA ***** YOU UP NOW!!! Kit got in her stance and hit Helena with a tow-piece in her jaw. Both punches landed Kit proceeded to kick Helenas *****. Finally getting up enough nerve Candace jumped in and grabbed Kits shoulders and threw her away from Helena. She turned to help Helena off the ground, when she turned back around Bettes fist and her face met.
HOLY *****!! That was like one of the best punches ever”, Tina said. Alice, Dana and Shane couldnt believe their eyes and the scene that was unfolding in front of them. Alice and Shane were laughing as they watched the two sisters get down and Dana just stared wide eye.
Bette and Candace exchanged jabs and slaps until Bette had enough and hit Candace in the jaw with a right hook. Candace went tumbling to the ground. Helena jumped to her rescue. Bette and Kit continued to beat the living ***** out of them just as Kit promised.
After figuring Helena and Candace had enough of a beating Shane and Tina broke it up. Bette and Kit were both still on fire. Tina pulled Bette to the side and grabbed both sides of her face.
BabyBette, clam downs its ok. Yall beat their *****’ Bette didnt here anything Tina said she was just starring daggers at Helena and Candace. Tina grabbed Bette behind the head and kissed her with all the passion and love her body had.
Kit looked over at Helena and Candaces beatin and bruised bodies and smirked. Both had a look o horror on their faces. The rest of the gang just looked at each other and smiled.
Bette surprised at first, but soon gave in and kissed Tina back. After a few extended moments they pulled away.
Better?
Yup.
Ok lets go back inside and get you both cleaned up. Tina grabbed Bettes hand and they started to make their way back.
You two go ahead. Live your happy little life. You wont live too much longer. I will make your lives a living *****. Helena said getting up and dusting herself off.
If you come near my sister, her woman or anybody else in this family, Imma knock your ***** into the middle of next week
And Imma beat your ***** on Thursday, Shane said
***** all of yall. I do what I want and cant anybody stop me. This gallery will be mine, and you wont have *****, Ill take you.
Is that right? The voice came from the door to the gallery. They all turned to see.
TBC
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It has got to be Peggy. Come on Peggy – kit the rest of her sorry ass!
Peggy!?
WooHoo!!! This was fun. I hope it’s Peggy taking care of business.
I think that Candana and Helena deserve each other and would make a good couple. I don’t see why Kit wanted to kick Helena’s but because she was playing right into their hands. Oh by the way, the expression is “There aint nonething between us but air and opportunity”. Come on and clean it up Peggy.
Fight scene, hilarious. Good Job.
K
That was hilarious. Just loved it. Can’t wait for more. I hope you have a wonderful birthday!
Peggy to the rescue..lol..OMG…great chapter..i love it..post soon and happy birthday Neq i wish you all the lucky in the world.. ;-)
oh man, your story really made my day! that was to funny, thanx for making me laugh, I needed that! continue soon please, I just love it!
cool can’t wait to see who it is but i do think that it is peggy aswell. well can’t wait to find out so please post soon
Happy 18th Birthday Neq!!!! As expected, you’ve left us with another cliffy. Have a wonderful today and I hope you post soon.
No they di’int!
Bette and Tina shoulda just passed them like a test and kept goin’
Kit takin’ up for her baby sis – Kit is cool like that…
Fun!
Glad to see Kit and Bette kick some ass. No one deserves it more than Helena and Candace. Great update!
LMAO. Great job. Have a good B-day tomorrow. One small request, please drop the “ya’ll”.
Oh god this is so fucking funny. Helena play kung fu and Kit went crazy, I jsut love this line it just so funny, Candace hit Kit, Bette kick Candace’s ass, and both Porter sisters kick Helena and Candace’s ass like a ball, love it. I love this chapter, is so hiliarious, I almost fall out my chair, love it. Ok I think I know who said the last line is Peggy, and she’s gonna kick Helena’s ass too, love it. Post soon, thanks! HAVE A WONDERFUL BIRTHDAY!
Just been reading your 5 chapters and good god girl this is a wonderful story. What a twist you have build up here – I love it. Now is Peggy comming into the picture. Please post soon – we want more more more. we simply can´t get enough.
Hey Neq!!! A promise is a promise right? ;) Why u leaving us hangin babe?
Is it peggy or sumeone else? hmm u are getting real good at these cliffhangers!!! Waiting for your post! hope u had a good bday!!!! N hope you’re smiling now
it’s about time bette put the beat down on somebody…with all that bullshit…i have been waiting too long for that…thank you.
that was so funny
Hey…Me loved it..twas fun reading how kit beat candyass..he he…oh before i forget ‘Happy Birthday Neq’…may this year bring you utmost happiness, peace ..and abundant ideas for fanfic stories.. ; ))..have a blast!!
Happy birthday! Cant believe someone else had the same request as me: pleeeeeeease no more “ya’ll”!
Yeah, it’s about time foxy brown and flashdance came out to play. I was laughing so hard, I had to sallow my drink cause I didn’t want to spit it out but choked on it anyways. Still LMAO