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WTF?!?
“*****! I ***** can’t believe it.” Tina sat down in the armchair and tried to calm her thoughts. “I ***** fucked Bette!”
But she could believe it. “Two minutes. I’m alone with her for two minutes. I could have stopped it. *****! I started it. I kissed her! I ***** kissed Bette Porter!”
But, wow. Bette. “No wonder I’ve been avoiding her. I should have known where it would go. It went right to where I expected – right to the bedroom!
“*****!”
What am I going to ***** do now? What does Bette think of today? What does Bette think of me?
“I can’t believe we gave each other that lameass ‘let’s not let this mess us up’ *****. Does either of us actually buy that?
“*****!
“Ok, Tina, breath. You can figure this out. You’re a smart woman.”
Tina got up, and started pacing through the apartment. And she still only came to one conclusion. “*****!”
Somehow, one little trip to the OB/GYN had turned into one massive afternoon of *****. One incredible, mindblowingly off-the-charts *****, but an afternoon of ***** nonetheless.
And to cap things off, it was an afternoon of ***** Bette Porter.
That Bette Porter. Her wife. At one point, her life.
More recently, the woman who had shattered their lives together, trading seven years for ***** with a carpenter.
But could ***** with the carpenter have been like that? Was today’s ***** not enough for Bette? Tina knew that it wasn’t like she could really compare this afternoon’s encounter to any that she’d had with Helena.
“Helena! *****!
“Helena’s going to come over later. What the ***** do I tell her? And *****! Will she know something’s up? Will she be able to tell?”
As the memories of her encounters with Helena flashed through her thoughts, Tina knew that for all of their physical satisfaction, none of them connected her to Helena. The connection with Bette, however. That was there. Pow! Instantaneous.
Starting with the looks, and then the hug. And, damn! “How was I supposed to resist that?” Tina licked her lips at the thought of that first kiss with Bette.
From there, things only intensified. Tina smiled, remembering how Bette explored, worshipped, even, her expanded girth. Bette was so eager to please, and even willing to be pleased. That was different; something new. And damn it was hot!
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(115 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
Wow! A great story and I could clearly see Tina thinking these thought. Great job!
Great story Pseud. Is it just me or did everyone see the longing in Beth’s face. I could just cry. Her facial features were so expressive. I could feel how much she wanted to preserve that moment with Tina. Oh and Tina, how could she try to dismiss what just happened with a simple “We are doing good — don’t let this change us” bullshit. Anyway I’m ranting — probably should save it for one of the TLW discussions. That’s for the story. I made me feel alittle better thinking, maybe, just maybe Tina wanted Bette as much as before (even with the “Maleficent Dreammaker” Helena at her heels.)
Damn, I want to see 2.09 so bad now………desperate to download it………and watch it all tonight! :D
Great use of the Fuck word. Loved seeing something like this after watching last nite.
Havnt seen the episode yet but cant wait now great chapter thanks
would love to read Bettes thoughts on the sexy afternoon??? please
Thank you all for the kind words. I contemplated doing a companion piece for Bette, but decided not to for two reasons. First, there was the Foxworthy bit, which addressed things actually in the show.
Second, I’ve just read skipton’s “No Knowing” and feel that my skills are not needed in this department since it’s been addressed so well already. (Plus, skipton clearly knows more vocabulary words than I, given my singular reliance on one word. I was in a mood and I went with it.)
I guess I’ve killed the comments again. I really do appreciate anything you folks have to say…and sometimes I will act upon it.
You know Tina so well. These are definitely the thoughts that went through her head. Makes you wonder if she was using aggressive lust to hide what else went on in that apartment earlier in the day. Great story.
LoL…Never saw any use “Fuck” so many times in one story…but I loved it;P Kick ARSE job Psued.
haven’t even seen the ep yet, but i’m SOOOOOO *FUCK*ing happy to know that they hooked up.. even if it was a *FUCKED* up hook up.. b&t 4ever!!
oh, oops.. i got ahead of myself.. i also wanted to say that it’s impressive that you were able to channel your emotions into something so coherent and well-written lol especially after such a *FUCK*ed up episode :D love your writing
Woowww!…Really??!…Wow! I’m at a loss for (coherent) words. Thanks for posting.
Oh Fuck it right. That was hot sex and you view on Tina’s thoughts is so much better. Thanks
Wowza! Nice, I could see Tina wondering all of that, maybe not so many fucks in her thoughts, but thinking it just the same. Excellent!
Great job. I wish the writers would have taken a moment to give us this insight into Tina’s thoughts.
Great writing. Great characterisation. Good job.
I,m with Amanda she sid it all, the best.
very nicely done. i too wish that the writers would spend more time taking us through the thoughts of each woman. thanks for this!
This was …. how should i say it? Fuuuuuuucccckkkiiiinggg Amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazing!!!!
Fuck indeed =)