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You and me – Part seven
“Its an emergency Bette. Our little friend who’s name is Shane seemed to drank too much tonight”, Kit smiled through the cell.
“She’s with you?”, Bette shouted through her cell. Carmen looked up at Bette with hope in her beautiful brown eyes.
“You don’t have to shout. Can you just catch her up, we are standing in front of the Planet and its still raining cats and dogs”, Kit asked laughing.
“Yeah sure, Ill be there in a minute”, Bette said and closed her phone.
“Shane is with Kit”, she announced smiling.
Tears of joy were flowing down Carmens cheeks.
At Alice face appeared a big smile and Dana and Tina let out a released sigh.
Bette grabbed her car keys and made her way to the door.
“Can I come with you”, Carmen asked who followed Bette to the door.
“Im sorry Carmen, but I first want to talk to Shane. I hope you understand this”, Bette said trying not to hurt Carmen.
Tina came towards Carmen and laid a arm around her shoulders. “I think Bette is right, Carmen”, Tina agreed and held Carmen close.
“That’s okay. Yeah I think its better if you talk to her first”, Carmen answered understandably.
Bette nodded and turned but stopped abrupt in her movement. She grabbed her cell and looked at the display.
She looked at Tina.
“What?”, Tina asked.
“Ahh…nothing. I’ll be back soon”, Bette shook her head and rushed out of the front door.
“We are at the Planet?”, Shane asked astonished and looked over to the caf. She had run in circles.
“They seemed to already miss you. And yeah we are at the Planet. How much have you drunk, baby girl”, Kit replied grinning.
“I didnt drink”, Shane replied serious as she sat down at the curb again.
“Oh okayI think I’ll ask Bette tomorrow what happened”, Kit said concerned and stepped in front of Shane.
“You don’t look good, Shane. Bette should drive you to the hospital. And come on let’s go into the Planet, little one. You are freezing like *****” Kit watched worried at Shanes head and body.
“I just wanna go to Carmen”, Shane replied to herself holding her head.
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(81 votes, average: 3.30 out of 5)
Wow.. you did a fast upgrade. I wanted to comment on your last chapter but I missed. BTW It freaks me out what Bette said about her cellphone. It’s really good to feel how Carmen connects with Shane supernaturally. Shane has a brain concussion? I believe that Carmen will take care of her and am also worried if Shane’s wound is worse than she looks. Thanks for your great job and sorry for my poor English.
This is called needing you. The phone on silence We need Windrider for this one. Love how the whole gang was so worried about one of there own. Thanks
That was really cute. I was dying to know how Carmen and Shane were to react .. and guess what.. that was perfect. I really like your writing style, it’s direct and useful. It’s crazy who, by that way of writing, there is a lot of action in a chapter. So, I really liked your chapter and I’m waiting for the next one. Post soon please.
Great chapter ! Im glad Carmen felt that Shane needed her..no wonder she heard Bettes soundless cell ;) Post soon!.
shane and carmen have a great bond that noone will break this is great please post soon