Fan Fiction
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You break it, you replace it
“You sound like you were out all night and I know that you weren’t ‘cause I would have seen you”
“I’m just not sleeping well”
“Well that makes three of us” Alice countered
“How is she, Alice?” Bette asked as she locked the front door and headed down the steps to her car.
“Never better.” Alice’s sarcasm wasn’t lost on Bette, but for good measure the blonde added, “Jesus how do you think she is?”
“Can I speak to her?” She asked.
“No, I don’t think…”
“Alice please…put Tina on the phone.” Bette instructed, no isn’t an answer she was prepared to accept today. There was silence at the other end as Bette hoped with all her heart that Alice would relent.
“I wish to God I could Bette but she won’t…at least not yet.” Alice whispered.
“It’s been ten days since…***** Alice, I’m dying here without her. How the ***** am I supposed to make this right if she won’t even speak to me?” Her voice was beginning to raise in sheer frustration, Bette’s limited patience was running thin.
“Bette…” Alice began and then sighed.
“What Al?”
“I don’t know.” Frustration laced her voice.
“What is it?” Bette prompted, willing to hear the smallest detail that she would offer about Tina’s state of mind.
“What if this can’t be fixed?” She whispered sadly.
“Don’t be stupid of course it can.” The nerve Alice hit was raw and it showed.
“This isn’t some Art show that you can just pull out of thin air. You’ve been lucky up until now. You had it all Bette, you had the whole package deal and you discarded it like it was last years fashion. How did you forget that you stood before all of us and promised that you would honor Tina, that you would protect her? You were supposed to love and be faithful to her for the rest of your life.”
“I know” Bette whispered her voice wavering as tears loomed again.
“But you couldn’t do that, you betrayed her and made a mockery of that commitment. She’s broken, Bette. What the ***** makes you think that you can even begin to fix this?” Alice’s anger was justified and Bette knew it.
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(27 votes, average: 3.44 out of 5)
almost 3 years to the day, I decided to start your story again, right from the very beginning. This is how much I miss your writing. Please write more.
Great first chapter, will be looking for the 2 chapter. Thanks
We all have read the beginning a dozen times.Yet they all are different. Really like the first chapter.Hope to see more in the future. Thanks
Like this very much..your version is very interesting.. keep going…
Hey great can’t wait for the next chapter.
Ahhh…it’s amazing how the same story can be written dozens of times but each can come at a different angle…I like your angle…can’t wait to see what you’ve got next.
This is pretty good and looks like it’s going to be a great story. Looking forward to the next one.
please don’t keep us waiting for more……i love your stories!!
This is a fantastic start. I’m hooked after the first chapter. Excellent writing…thanks!
you seem vaguely familiar
Just saw you as the spotlight author of the month and looked up your stories. I decided to read this one and “If it makes you happy”, this one looks enticing.