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You Got the Silver. – Chapter Five
“I’m going to use this as my escape to go dance.” Clara said
before excusing herself from the intense situation surrounding her.
“Bette”
began while staring at her hands. “Tina
and Shane are just.Tina and Shane.”
“I know their names, thanks.” Bette responded sarcastically
while focusing her attention back towards her wife and her old friend.
“Bette,” Dana started.
“Things have changed since you left.
Did you honestly expect to waltz back here and Tina would have supper
waiting?”
Bette couldn’t form a response to Dana’s words. The truth cut through her defenses and
managed a direct hit. The only thing
Bette could manage to do was stare at Tina as if she was the last person on
earth.
Bette noticed that the throng of admirers seemed to be
increasing around Shane and Tina. The
pair didn’t seem to be affected by the crowd of women literally throwing
themselves at their mercy. To Shane,
this situation wasn’t anything out of the ordinary, but Bette was surprised
that Tina seemed to be just as comfortable as Shane. Bette watched as Tina brushed women off
casually as if it was part of her daily routine. She wasn’t rude. There were virtually no traces of emotion on
her face at all. She was just so.not
Tina.
“This is a bad idea.
We need to get out of here.”
said as she saw Bette staring at Tina.
“There is no way this is going to end well tonight.”
“I didn’t want to come here in the first place.” Dana said.
“Ha! Liar!”
yelled as she pointed at Dana accusingly. “You were the one who insisted that
we go over to Tina and Shane’s.”
“I wanted to go swimming and” Dana managed before Bette
whipped around and glared into Dana’s eyes.
“They live together?” Bette questions as if she was about to
be sick.
“Bette, it’s really not a big deal.” Dana said.
“It’s notthey don’t live in our” Bette stammered, trying
to get her question out, but fearing the answer.
“What? No, no.”
responded. “They live somewhere else.
Bette, they are friends. They
live together.”
“You should see the house.” Dana said. “It’s
un-*****-believable! It’s got to be
one of the most amazing places I’ve ever seen.
They have this”
“Dane. You really
aren’t helping at all over there, you know?”
sighed.
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Awesome, you ould cut the tension and anticipation with a knife, PLEASE CONTINUE SOON…This story is HOT!!!
Would Shane protect a heartbroken friend she cares a great deal about from the person who hurt her? You bet your ass she would. You don’t know Shane as well as you think you do, Hopeful.
Well, Carmen/Bette, even just as a friendship somewhat like Shane and Tina’s, would work. I mean, Tina was let down by Bette, now Bette is shocked by Tina. Carmen has probably been really let down by Shane, and there is probably a lot for her and Bette to bond over and spend long nights at bars talking about.
WTF post now!!!!!!!!!!1
Three years six months and 3 days! I love this..just read all the chapters and I’m addicted..Thanks Alot!!!!lol Please continue, anyway you like!
LOVE IT! You gotta give us more. I love this new Tina, very sexy.
Been there, done that, Bette. I feel ya, girl!
Shane is cock-blocking like a big dog…
Sweet jesus what are you trying to do to us?..lol ofcourse you have to continue i really have to see where this ones going…lol very good though thanks
Surreal and suspenseful. Tina and Shane just don’t add up. A non-equation. Get Bette and Tina back together, please.
Damm I hate cliffhangers.
Continue? OF COURSE!!!
And a tease? Me? … Yes!
I think Shane’s a hypocrite(sp?) she’s no saint. Of course you can use ‘sexing her way through WeHo’ I probably heard it somewhere else any way :-)
YES PALEEEZE CONTINUE!! Damn this is good! BTW your Dana makes me LOL!!
A sit-in, yeah? I’m impressed.
DON’T STOP NOW..PLEASE KEEP IT GOING..I’M WITH SHIFTY..SIT IN TIME…..
…..still sitting!!! waiting…
I don’t understand why authors put a question mark next to TBC. If you have a story you want to tell, then tell it. You shouldn’t decide whether you will finish telling a story you started based on what a couple of people say. We can tell you what we think of the storyline, how much we enjoy your writing, but we shouldn’t be making the decision for you on whether or not to continue. Again IMHO.
Why is a part of me wishing this were a bad dream. Still another part finds it interesting that Tina’s picking up and molesting baby-Bette clones in public. A third part of me (I’m feeling quite shattered tonight) is curious as to why Shane’s so anti-Bette if there is no Shane and Tina. I think that’s at least 2/3rd of a yes, if not more.
This Shane isn’t familiar to me. I understand that she would want to be there for Tina, protect her. But the Shane in TLW screwed anyone with a vagina. Who is she to be so judgemental with Bette. Never even having a conversation with her, a woman that is supposed to be one of her best friends, to see what her side of the story is. I am enjoying the story, but am having a hard time seeing this as the same Shane.
HELL YEA. Get your ass to writting. TEASE. THIS HURTS BUT ITS SOOOOO GOOD!!!
OHH You ARE SOOO BAD!!! You have to post now this every second…..you cannt leave us like that…..I am not leaving my computer until you do, I am staging a sit in!!! Who is with me!!!
AAAGGGHHH!!!!! Don’t stop now. May I have some more, Please?
I have been waiting all fucking day so get your ass to writing and posting more right now LMAO
Now that I got that out of my system
ok please post soon, see I asked nicely
oh I wanted to ask if the story you were talking about is the WeHo tango??
all I have to say is shane and tina would be hot. It’s your story. And I can dream all I want LMAO
And I love this dana it’s about time she has some kind of brains, and smart comments
Damn Girl don’t leave us hanging there! EXCELLENT!! Writing very exciting.. Please post soon
HELL YEAH!
Hey Thanks for posted again of course we Love it Please continue I don’t think that Shane like this at all LOL! to see Bette she don’t have a chance in Tina and Bette LOVE for each other Shane she look like real LISBO LOL! OMG yeak! I don’t think SO but it’s your Story So go for it Thanks.
Come on M. you could not bring yourself to write a Bette/Carmine coupling (Not that I would like, because I wouldn’t. But I could see it as a pre Tina fling before I could see a Shane/Tina match.), but you can write a Shane/Tina paring. It seems that you are inplying that Shane has turned or helped Tina become a Shane clone, where she just cruz bars picks up women. No committment, no pain. That Shane and Tina are just roommates. I could undrestand how as a friend, Shane helped Tina get thru a very difficult time and maybe protective of her, but to cross that line of friendship when she knows how deep Tina and Bette’s love runs—TOO messy. There are some lines in life that you DO NOT cross if you want to maintain some since of stabitity and balance. This is looking kind of UGLY, but I am willing to give you a couple of more chapters to state your case since you say that you are a true B/T fan.
Why of course we want you to continue? Looks like Bette and Tina are in for a fight of their life! Okay….more please….pretty please?
Thanks
yes, yes continue. Can’t wait to see how this turns out….and if Shane has to punch Bette at one point, don’t let her touch her beautiful face! LOL.
Wauw, you definitely caught my attention. I can hardly wit to see what will happen in your next chapters. Will B & T work it out and what´s the story between Shane and Tina. Quite interesting beginning so keep up the good work and please post soon.
Still commited to my sit in….No food i am getting hungry!! That is the least of my problems i also need to go to the bathroom……so please hurry and post….
Please Continue. Im starting to become addicted to this fic. I love this new Tina.
well, of course, can’t wait
Alice and Dana very nice…is Dana keeping a scorecard on Tina?.. what are the numbers… I hope there’s not going to be a smackdown between our favourite couple…how about a dance instead…
LMAO at shifty’s comments come on M put the poor girl out of her misery..
Thanks again for the update.
ok i jsut have one thing to say BETTE BELONGS TO TINA AND VISA VERSA..period
I absolutely love your idea’s girl! Of course in the end we all want B&T together, but right now I like where you are at. Showing that Tina didn’t just sit and sulk for the past three yerars while Bette was living it up in New York. And as for as someone saying Tina is a clone of Shane. I think totally differently. Tina has been with the same woman for almost 8 years. She has EVERY right to go out and explor her woman hood. She ain’t getting any younger. And I love it that she is the desire of every woman around her. And I think Shane and Tina are so hott togherher. Maybe not in a relation type of thing, but an intimate friendship type of thing if you know what I mean. I guess friends who don’t have sex but are extremely close in every other sense.
I know I am going completely off track here. I guess I’m just saying keep doin’ what you doin’! I have faith in you that you will put B&T back together in time. But as for know…explor all your thoughts girl! Cause I’m lovin’ em!!
Damn so good, post sooon, thanks!