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You Got the Silver. – Chapter Five
“ButwhaWhat is she doing with thatgirl?!?!” Bette yelled.
“Umthe better question would be ‘What is her tongue doing
with that girl?’ and from over here it looks very enjoyable.” Dana remarked.
“Helpful you are not,
“I’m just saying.
Tina has remarkable technique.”
Dana laughed.
“You would know.”
grumbled.
“Here we go again.” Dana sighed. “Do I need to remind you that you know as
well?”
“What?” Bette screeched.
“You slept with my wife?!”
“What?!?”
yelled. “Ew!”
“Ew? Please
I don’t even believe that. She’s *****
hot.” Dana said nonchalantly as she stirred her drink. “You so would.”
“I’m not saying I wouldn’t.
It’s justshe’s Tina.”
explained.
“That’s it.” Bette said finally. “I don’t know what ***** is happening
anymore. The only thing I know right now
is that I’m going to talk to Tina. I
need to talk to her.”
“That’s a really, really bad idea.” Dana said as she watched
Tina and Shane next to the bar.
“I need to talk to her.” Bette said with force. “I tried and tried to get her to listen three
years ago and she refused to even see me.
I’m not giving her the chance to avoid me now.”
“No.”
said.
“It will never happen.”
Dana agreed.
“What is wrong with you two?” Bette asked accusingly. “I love her and I don’t care what I have to
do to prove it to her, but I’ll do it.”
“Do not go down there Bette.”
warned. “I know you guys need to talk,
but don’t do it here. I know you love
her, but do you really think that storming down there in a jealous rage after
three years is going to help the situation?”
Bette turned her attention back to the fair skinned
blonde. Tina seemed to be alone for the
moment and almost immediately Bette took this as a sign for her approach. Bette was enthralled by Tina’s presence. She heard the warnings and words of advice from
her friends, but couldn’t seem to stay away from Tina. Something was pulling her and Bette had no
choice to stand up and begin her journey back to her wife.
Bette needed to touch Tina.
Her body was screaming for proof that the sight before her wasn’t a
dream. Proof that Tina, her love, her
wife, her soul mate, was in fact, standing before her. When she was less than twenty feet from her
destination, Bette collided with a body that had slid in between her and Tina.
“Excuse me.” Bette said as she attempted to move around the
person blocking her goal of reaching Tina as soon as possible. As Bette moved to the left, the body
followed. Bette looked up to meet the
eyes of the intruder.
“Shane.” Bette said as she stared at the turned head the
taller woman who seemed to have no desire to look at Bette. “Hey.
I was just going to talk to Tina.”
At the verbalization of Tina’s name, Shane snapped her eyes
to Bette’s. Shane did not speak, but her
eyes and body language screamed the message she wanted Bette to hear. The unspoken warning of ‘Stay the ***** away’
was loud and clear.
“Shane.” Bette
pleaded. She was confused to why she was
asking permission to speak to Tina, but was willing to do what she had to do.
“No.” Shane said icily.
“You’ve done enough.”
As fate would have it, Tina chose that exact moment to
notice that Shane had been gone longer than expected. Tina scanned the club looking for Shane and
finally noticed her talking to someone with her back to Tina.
Noticing Shane’s defensive stance and body language, Tina
made her way towards Shane to see who or what was upsetting her. The idea that someone was causing Shane pain
or stress immediately resulted in a rising anger from Tina.
Upon reaching the taller woman, Tina wrapped a slender arm
around Shane’s waist and turned to face the cause of Shane’s anger. Ready to defend the younger woman, Tina
snapped her eyes towards the offender and was not expecting what she saw. For the first time in three years and six
months, Tina Kennard was face to face with Bette Porter.
You decide.
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(61 votes, average: 3.56 out of 5)
Awesome, you ould cut the tension and anticipation with a knife, PLEASE CONTINUE SOON…This story is HOT!!!
Would Shane protect a heartbroken friend she cares a great deal about from the person who hurt her? You bet your ass she would. You don’t know Shane as well as you think you do, Hopeful.
Well, Carmen/Bette, even just as a friendship somewhat like Shane and Tina’s, would work. I mean, Tina was let down by Bette, now Bette is shocked by Tina. Carmen has probably been really let down by Shane, and there is probably a lot for her and Bette to bond over and spend long nights at bars talking about.
WTF post now!!!!!!!!!!1
Three years six months and 3 days! I love this..just read all the chapters and I’m addicted..Thanks Alot!!!!lol Please continue, anyway you like!
LOVE IT! You gotta give us more. I love this new Tina, very sexy.
Been there, done that, Bette. I feel ya, girl!
Shane is cock-blocking like a big dog…
Sweet jesus what are you trying to do to us?..lol ofcourse you have to continue i really have to see where this ones going…lol very good though thanks
Surreal and suspenseful. Tina and Shane just don’t add up. A non-equation. Get Bette and Tina back together, please.
Damm I hate cliffhangers.
Continue? OF COURSE!!!
And a tease? Me? … Yes!
I think Shane’s a hypocrite(sp?) she’s no saint. Of course you can use ‘sexing her way through WeHo’ I probably heard it somewhere else any way :-)
YES PALEEEZE CONTINUE!! Damn this is good! BTW your Dana makes me LOL!!
A sit-in, yeah? I’m impressed.
DON’T STOP NOW..PLEASE KEEP IT GOING..I’M WITH SHIFTY..SIT IN TIME…..
…..still sitting!!! waiting…
I don’t understand why authors put a question mark next to TBC. If you have a story you want to tell, then tell it. You shouldn’t decide whether you will finish telling a story you started based on what a couple of people say. We can tell you what we think of the storyline, how much we enjoy your writing, but we shouldn’t be making the decision for you on whether or not to continue. Again IMHO.
Why is a part of me wishing this were a bad dream. Still another part finds it interesting that Tina’s picking up and molesting baby-Bette clones in public. A third part of me (I’m feeling quite shattered tonight) is curious as to why Shane’s so anti-Bette if there is no Shane and Tina. I think that’s at least 2/3rd of a yes, if not more.
This Shane isn’t familiar to me. I understand that she would want to be there for Tina, protect her. But the Shane in TLW screwed anyone with a vagina. Who is she to be so judgemental with Bette. Never even having a conversation with her, a woman that is supposed to be one of her best friends, to see what her side of the story is. I am enjoying the story, but am having a hard time seeing this as the same Shane.
HELL YEA. Get your ass to writting. TEASE. THIS HURTS BUT ITS SOOOOO GOOD!!!
OHH You ARE SOOO BAD!!! You have to post now this every second…..you cannt leave us like that…..I am not leaving my computer until you do, I am staging a sit in!!! Who is with me!!!
AAAGGGHHH!!!!! Don’t stop now. May I have some more, Please?
I have been waiting all fucking day so get your ass to writing and posting more right now LMAO
Now that I got that out of my system
ok please post soon, see I asked nicely
oh I wanted to ask if the story you were talking about is the WeHo tango??
all I have to say is shane and tina would be hot. It’s your story. And I can dream all I want LMAO
And I love this dana it’s about time she has some kind of brains, and smart comments
Damn Girl don’t leave us hanging there! EXCELLENT!! Writing very exciting.. Please post soon
HELL YEAH!
Hey Thanks for posted again of course we Love it Please continue I don’t think that Shane like this at all LOL! to see Bette she don’t have a chance in Tina and Bette LOVE for each other Shane she look like real LISBO LOL! OMG yeak! I don’t think SO but it’s your Story So go for it Thanks.
Come on M. you could not bring yourself to write a Bette/Carmine coupling (Not that I would like, because I wouldn’t. But I could see it as a pre Tina fling before I could see a Shane/Tina match.), but you can write a Shane/Tina paring. It seems that you are inplying that Shane has turned or helped Tina become a Shane clone, where she just cruz bars picks up women. No committment, no pain. That Shane and Tina are just roommates. I could undrestand how as a friend, Shane helped Tina get thru a very difficult time and maybe protective of her, but to cross that line of friendship when she knows how deep Tina and Bette’s love runs—TOO messy. There are some lines in life that you DO NOT cross if you want to maintain some since of stabitity and balance. This is looking kind of UGLY, but I am willing to give you a couple of more chapters to state your case since you say that you are a true B/T fan.
Why of course we want you to continue? Looks like Bette and Tina are in for a fight of their life! Okay….more please….pretty please?
Thanks
yes, yes continue. Can’t wait to see how this turns out….and if Shane has to punch Bette at one point, don’t let her touch her beautiful face! LOL.
Wauw, you definitely caught my attention. I can hardly wit to see what will happen in your next chapters. Will B & T work it out and what´s the story between Shane and Tina. Quite interesting beginning so keep up the good work and please post soon.
Still commited to my sit in….No food i am getting hungry!! That is the least of my problems i also need to go to the bathroom……so please hurry and post….
Please Continue. Im starting to become addicted to this fic. I love this new Tina.
well, of course, can’t wait
Alice and Dana very nice…is Dana keeping a scorecard on Tina?.. what are the numbers… I hope there’s not going to be a smackdown between our favourite couple…how about a dance instead…
LMAO at shifty’s comments come on M put the poor girl out of her misery..
Thanks again for the update.
ok i jsut have one thing to say BETTE BELONGS TO TINA AND VISA VERSA..period
I absolutely love your idea’s girl! Of course in the end we all want B&T together, but right now I like where you are at. Showing that Tina didn’t just sit and sulk for the past three yerars while Bette was living it up in New York. And as for as someone saying Tina is a clone of Shane. I think totally differently. Tina has been with the same woman for almost 8 years. She has EVERY right to go out and explor her woman hood. She ain’t getting any younger. And I love it that she is the desire of every woman around her. And I think Shane and Tina are so hott togherher. Maybe not in a relation type of thing, but an intimate friendship type of thing if you know what I mean. I guess friends who don’t have sex but are extremely close in every other sense.
I know I am going completely off track here. I guess I’m just saying keep doin’ what you doin’! I have faith in you that you will put B&T back together in time. But as for know…explor all your thoughts girl! Cause I’m lovin’ em!!
Damn so good, post sooon, thanks!