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You (Part the Eighth)
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“Fuck,” Alice muttered as Dana walked out the door. She knew she had to go after her, but Dana obviously wanted some space. Still, she shouldn’t be out there by herself too long. “Carmen! Shane! Hey! Can you guys take me to find Dana? I’d take the Mini but she’d see it and hide.” Shane started for the door immediately, so Carmen and Alice just kind of fell into step behind her.
“Shit. Alice, I’m so sorry. I wasn’t thinking. I didn’t mean to upset her…” Carmen pleaded, and it was pretty obvious she’d been crying.
“Hey, it’s okay. I know you didn’t mean it. Dana knows that too, she’s just not exactly rational right now. I mean, we all know she kicked Lara out, but I think she was still surprised when she actually left. It’s been a really rough day for her, that’s all. And Shane’s just worried about Dana. Those two are a lot closer than people give them credit for being,” Alice answered as she climbed into the back of the Jeep.
“It’s more like the three of you are. You all kinda close ranks if one of you is hurting. Makes me love you.” Carmen responded, smiling over at Alice and squeezing her hand in gratitude.
“Yeah, we do, don’t we? We’re like the Three Dyke Musketeers or something. I’m sorry I got pissed, Carm. I’m just worried about her; she’s not in any shape to be wandering around West Hollywood at night. Al, you have any idea where she might be going?” The concern was evident in Shane’s voice as she started the Jeep up and made her way out of the Planet’s parking lot.
“No clue…but she couldn’t have gotten too far.”
Shane just sighed, and they rode silently for about ten minutes before finding Dana a few blocks away. “Dana! I’m really fucking sorry, I wasn’t thinking! Will you please let us give you a ride home?” Carmen asked, out of the car before Shane came to a complete stop. Dana turned and looked at her with tears in her eyes, but she allowed herself to be hugged. “I’m not mad at you, Carmen. I’m just all fucked up right now,” she whispered as she hugged her.
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Great job, the connection is real! Gives me hope for happy endings.
WOW muted im so very proud of you at this moment! I know that had to be tough to write,but you did it and it was the best update! Im sorry i havent been around ,wishing i was there for you to write this chapter.HUGS and just remember its almost 6 months!! Love ya!!! PPS
Wow Temp this was really really good and im not just saying that i truly mean it.I know what its like to write your own experiences in your story its kinda like an outlet and I know it mustve really been hard for you to write this, especially since youve lived through it. I love the way you ended this chapter. We all have that friend like shane that seems to always be right when you dont want them to be LOL
Wow! This is beautifully written. I loved it. Alice verbiage always make me smile. More Please.
Phenomenal update. It broke my heart, and gave me hope all at the same time. You did a wonderful job, and I really enjoyed reading it. I can only imagine how difficult this was to write, with having your own experiences with cancer. For that I applaude you. Thank you very much for sharing. Keep up the great writing. I can’t wait to see what’s going to happen. Sorry, but I don’t have any good ideas about the Foamcore Dana. Although, I always did have this picture of Alice playing “dress up” with Foamcore Dana. You know…Dana’s pants and shirt? That way it not only looked like Dana, but smelled like her too. Weird right? Wait a sec…that didn’t actually happen right? I seem to have a whole bunch of season 3 memory lapses. Oh well. :) Loved it.
This update brought tears to my eyes. I absolutely loved it! It’s all in the small gestures that emphasis the strong bong between these women (and ofcourse especially Dana and Alice). I was glad to see that Alice replaced Bette. And Alice comforting Dana at any time…they’re just meant to be. *sigh* And I also loved the fact that they went looking for Dana after Carmen’s remark. The original storyline will only fade more to the background from now on. And don’t be scared, you will do just fine on your own. You already did a superb job with this one!
I am totally loving this story!!!
So sweet!! i hope you have a happy ending tho..my hopes are so high lol:)
This is a beautiful story, no matter how you end it. Thank you.
Beautiful Simpy Beautiful….(And I hope all is well with you)
im really liking this story. like how it goes from what was actually happening int he series to your own interpretation of it.
Awesome story. I was so sad by the way things ended in S3 and you gave me hope…Hope for the Danish love to survive even in the worst moments…Please change the IC´s end.Give us Danish fans this happines.
I love love love, this story. It’s so interesting how you take the characters along season 3 but in a different way with alice and dana. I LOVE IT! I’ve had to catch up on the last couple chapters and i just want to read more and more. You’re doing a great job and this story has become one of my favorites. Can’t wait to see what happens next. gotta love the love…:)