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You (Part the Eighth)
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“Fuck, Al, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean for that to be…like that. Fuck. I don’t know what the hell’s wrong with me. Well, I mean, I know I have cancer and it’s making me nuts but that’s no excuse for me kissing you when I know that’s not a good idea with everything we’ve just been through and I – “
“Dana, really, you have to stop these babble sessions. You don’t get any air at all while you give them, and I’m afraid you’re going to kill yourself from failure to breathe before you have a chance to even worry about the cancer,” Alice broke in, laughing a little as Dana pulled back to look at her, her eyes brimming with tears again.
“I’m such a bad friend, I’m sorry. I know you’ve made a lot of progress lately and I know what I just did might hurt that, so if you want to leave and not come back you can and it’s fine.”
“You know something, Dana? Fuck you. I promised I’d stay, and I will. That’s all there is to know. Yeah, that kiss probably wasn’t the best plan of the century, but since when have we really planned anything? I know you weren’t trying to seduce me or anything, it’s just emotional for you right now and I get that. Besides, I’ve moved on enough to where I’m okay being here, even if shit like that happens every now and again. It doesn’t have to mean anything. You’re vulnerable right now and neither one of us should make any of those types of decisions until all this other shit is worked out, okay?” And it surprised her to realize that she really did mean that. She was comfortable enough to have either type of relationship with Dana, but she wasn’t going to let anything beyond friendship happen until Dana was a hell of a lot less scared.
“Okay,” Dana whispered, then gave in to how she was feeling. “I’m fucking exhausted, Al. Can you just hold me until we have to get ready tonight?”
“Duh,” Alice replied, pushing Dana over so she’d be on the correct side.
“Hey, I’m the sick one here, and this is my bed. Shouldn’t I get to decide which side I’m on?”
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Great job, the connection is real! Gives me hope for happy endings.
WOW muted im so very proud of you at this moment! I know that had to be tough to write,but you did it and it was the best update! Im sorry i havent been around ,wishing i was there for you to write this chapter.HUGS and just remember its almost 6 months!! Love ya!!! PPS
Wow Temp this was really really good and im not just saying that i truly mean it.I know what its like to write your own experiences in your story its kinda like an outlet and I know it mustve really been hard for you to write this, especially since youve lived through it. I love the way you ended this chapter. We all have that friend like shane that seems to always be right when you dont want them to be LOL
Wow! This is beautifully written. I loved it. Alice verbiage always make me smile. More Please.
Phenomenal update. It broke my heart, and gave me hope all at the same time. You did a wonderful job, and I really enjoyed reading it. I can only imagine how difficult this was to write, with having your own experiences with cancer. For that I applaude you. Thank you very much for sharing. Keep up the great writing. I can’t wait to see what’s going to happen. Sorry, but I don’t have any good ideas about the Foamcore Dana. Although, I always did have this picture of Alice playing “dress up” with Foamcore Dana. You know…Dana’s pants and shirt? That way it not only looked like Dana, but smelled like her too. Weird right? Wait a sec…that didn’t actually happen right? I seem to have a whole bunch of season 3 memory lapses. Oh well. :) Loved it.
This update brought tears to my eyes. I absolutely loved it! It’s all in the small gestures that emphasis the strong bong between these women (and ofcourse especially Dana and Alice). I was glad to see that Alice replaced Bette. And Alice comforting Dana at any time…they’re just meant to be. *sigh* And I also loved the fact that they went looking for Dana after Carmen’s remark. The original storyline will only fade more to the background from now on. And don’t be scared, you will do just fine on your own. You already did a superb job with this one!
I am totally loving this story!!!
So sweet!! i hope you have a happy ending tho..my hopes are so high lol:)
This is a beautiful story, no matter how you end it. Thank you.
Beautiful Simpy Beautiful….(And I hope all is well with you)
im really liking this story. like how it goes from what was actually happening int he series to your own interpretation of it.
Awesome story. I was so sad by the way things ended in S3 and you gave me hope…Hope for the Danish love to survive even in the worst moments…Please change the IC´s end.Give us Danish fans this happines.
I love love love, this story. It’s so interesting how you take the characters along season 3 but in a different way with alice and dana. I LOVE IT! I’ve had to catch up on the last couple chapters and i just want to read more and more. You’re doing a great job and this story has become one of my favorites. Can’t wait to see what happens next. gotta love the love…:)