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You’re my home – chapter 29
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You’re my home
Chapter 29
“Come on Angie ! “
Bette held on tight to Tina’s hand as they watched their daughter running to collect a small ball and racing back to put it in a box. It was her pre-school open day/fete and Helena and Alice were there to support their “ earth daughter “ and keep Bette and Tina calm during the races and events that Angie was taking part in. Bette glanced at Alice who was yelling louder than anyone else – Helena was holding her hands to her face trying to stop herself screaming. Beside her Tina was just watching the race and beaming – that was their little girl. Bette squeezed Tina’s hand – the blonde looked at her for a few seconds
“I think she’s inherited her competitive streak from you “ Tina said
Bette laughed “ And you don’t like to win ?”
“I never said that “
“She has your genes Kennard “
“That’s why she’s so fast “ Tina looked back at Angie running to collect the next ball and racing back to deposit it in the box before she took off after the next item. Bette couldn’t stop herself
“Come on honey “
Angie ran to the final item and picked up the final ball and was first back with the last ball and across the line
“WAY TO GO ANGIE “ Alice yelled
“Yes “ Helena punched the air
Bette hugged Tina
“God – that was tense “
“You are going to be so freaking bad when she’s in real races “ Tina said
“At least I am not crying “
Tina rubbed the tears from her eyes
“I am proud of our daughter “
“Lets go and see her “
Bette released Tina and waited for Angie to come across – she was clearly on a massive high
“I won – did you see me ?”
“We all saw you and you were fantastic “ Alice reached Angie first and picked her up and hugged her. Angie was beaming – she hugged Alice and kissed her. Helena kissed her on the hair and looked across at Bette and Tina. It was so clear just how devoted they both were to their daughter – and to one another. They had held hands all afternoon and Helena thought that they were happier now than she had ever seen them.
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Love your version AllyE and agree with fergz1, “bring them all back, including Dana,” but not Candace, please. Yes you could do that better than IC. Would love to read that. Great update. Take care and have a great weekend.
lovely family day. nice way to bring dylan back but hope helena doesn’t get hurt. great fun teasing the dean and so nice Ange got a cup. enjoying this story very much.
Hey Ally!! Glad to see you are posting again. And as Dainty says.. this version is getting really good. Hope to see more of this soon. Have a nice weekend and post soon! Caro
Ally, you are one of my favorite fan fic writers…thank you for sharing your unique and always fresh stories.
Nice post Ally and I like the very clever way you are bringing Dylan back. Personally, I would nix the idea of bring Dana back because I think that they have successfully moved on from her death. You might want to subsitute “Boo” for “Punkin” in your story, because Angelica is out Boo, LOL. PPS :o).
That was wonderful and funny!
Phenomenal as always, Ally! I am just thrilled to get a chance to cathc up on this wonderful story.
I love them all teasing Bette. At least she’s a fairly good sport about it. Bringing Dylan back would be interesting. Bring it on! Thanks for posting.
Yes, Dylan was THE ONE for Helena and Carmen was THE ONE for Shane, so Ally they should be back. Great update!
woulod love for dylan and helena to be together, perhaps shane could use carmen but she really hurt carmen…awesome. can imagine angie telling kit about bette,lol:)PPS
Ally—bring ’em all back. Dylan, Carmen, hell even bring Dana back. I think you could do that. pps
hi ally,yeah thats great. Dylan for Helena and later Carmen for Shane and then fix Alice and Tasha and then our big big weeding (and not peggys :D) and then we all are in heaven.Great story Ally thanks for it.
Ah, the willowy Dylan returns. But why is it OK for everyone to judge the shit out of Shane and not Alice? And you made us wait all that time for new posts and none of them are NC-17?