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    Story written on June 28, 2004 by Shakennotstirred.
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    1. Was anyone else scared about Tina’s state of mind, the heights and the wall?
      Slowly but surely, they are getting to the bottom of their problems. They have just about deconstructed their entire relationship, going back to their first meeting and the mutual attraction. I feel a sense of cleansing. Everything is out in the open. Perhaps now they can start to rebuild.
      Thanks for the continued Hungarian tour. I feel as though I am there!
      Now, get them off that cliff (literally and figuratively)!
      Thanks!

    2. WOW!!! That was amazing it looks like they are gona finally get through this..It took guts for both of them to face there issues.. Please go on.

    3. That was amazing!! I was waiting for this chapter to be posted…and i must say it was worth the wait. Please keep writing…I’ll beg if i have to :P

    5. I always think you write such long stories but everytime I start reading them, and really getting into it, my second thought is; Damn why is this story so short. WONDERFUL STORY shakennotstirred.

    7. BRILLIANT, every aspect of the story was just brilliant. The emotional intensity was unbelievable. I could see them perfectly in my head and feel Bette and Tina’s feelings that you were describing. This story is unlike any other story after the S1 finale, it’s one of the best that I’ve read. Outstanding job shakennotstirred.

    8. another excellent work. You know, you should consider writing professionally because you really get the reader’s attention. Awsome. I’ve always enjoyed your stories, it’s so imaginative, down to earth as well as realistic. Good balance. Waiting for the next one…

    9. Olives, I swear, you are such a tease! Typos or no typos, your story was great and I wouldn’t notice it anyway. Now please get both of them off the cliff so they could go eat something! LOL…I think it’s time for some TiBette luvin, they don’t have to fuck each other, just some sweet kisses pleeeease??

    10. I honestly didn’t notice the typos…this was such and intense chapter…you brought out the weakness in both of them…you portrayed such intensity…such heartache but so much love…Bette wouldn’t be there letting herself be so vulnerable if she didn’t love tina so much…it comes from her soul…you have given us so much…bravo girl, bravo!!!

    16. I just want to say what a fabulouse job that you have done with this story. It is very well thought out and written. I felt that I was just sitting and watching every movement and word that was spoken. Thank-you waiting for the next chapter,after I reread this one a few more times.

    17. This chapter was intense and very moving. I love the care you are taking with these two. Slowly peeling away the layers and allowing each to reveal their fears and complexity. Excellent job!

    21. that was beautifully done…that´s the kind of things that make the story real (not what am afraid TLW will be next year..oh well…we can always hope)…great chapt thanks!!

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