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    6 Months- chapter 16

    Story written on August 18, 2004 by Skipton.
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    the unraveling

    Tina looked at the folded pages in front of her and quietly but deliberately, opened them.  She saw Alice close her eyes, but lost her focus on her, concentrating only on what was in her hands.  At first, all she saw was the graceful handwriting of Bette’s.  Tina had always loved her writing, believing that it exhibited the strength and determination that was such a part of Bette.

     

    She then started to focus on the words in front of her, everything and everyone else diminishing from the background.

     

    “Dear Alice” the letter began.

     

    Tina shifted in her seat to get more comfortable.

     

    First of all, I am addressing you in this letter, but was hoping that you might share with Dana and Shane as well.  I have a few things to tell you and thought that a letter may be the most civilized way of communicating my oh so jumbled thoughts.

     

    By now, you may have realized that I am no longer in LA.  Actually though, the more that I think of it, with our relationship having become what it has, maybe that is presumptuous of me to make that assumption. 

     

    I asked myself how I would begin this letter, and I determined, at the beginning.  The problem though is that I don’t know if I know where the beginning is.  I certainly know what the ending is, but the beginning?  I will just have to take a stab at it.

     

    As I hope the three of you know, your friendship has always meant the world to me.  I have always known that you would be there for either Tina or me and you proved that over the years without fail. 

     

    I just wanted you to know that as I try to get all of this down. 

     

    I feel as if it is important to try and explain what happened between Tina and me, or at least the part that I know.  We were all like a family and it was so special.  The times that we all spent together have become cherished memories for me, never to be replaced by anything like it. 

     

    But the part that you don’t know is that Tina and I were not always what we came across as being.  Perhaps when we were all together, our façade was a bit stronger than it was when it was just the two of us.

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    2. This was so powerful. I haven’t a clue to where you are heading us to, but Iwill waitforthe next chapter. I am hoping that ou will allow tina and Bette to come back togeather as well as the rest of the family. Just my hope. thanks

    4. I can’t get enough of your story! I can only imagine how Tina will fall apart knowing that she didn’t give their love a chance. I’m looking forward to the next part..hopefully Tina’s reaction!! BRAVO for skipton!!!

    5. Please don’t stop,have to know what tina is feeling reading a letter that was not ment to be seen by her is very hurtful.To realize that the person was still in love with you but you push them away.
      Yes I would say tina has some tears to cry. Waiting to read tina reaction.post soon

    14. Brilliant! You did not fail us at all in the manner you wrote Bette’s letter.
      It was absolutely powerful. It’s to the point, elegant which is true to Bette’s character.
      “You’re an artist skipton” Hell! 5 points is not fair. Give this lady a 10

    15. Why did you have to end there! I’m going crazy! This is such a good story! You just whipped this out on us like nohtin…please just one more for tonight?? Please, please, please?? I’m not one to beg…shit, Ijust did. Now You have to post tonight!

    18. such a powerful chapter. With your words spoken for Bette, how the punishment must be. For Tina reading Bette word of such remores and Love. I can only wait for the chapters to follow, and hope that fate plays up for them again. Thanks

    21. VERY powerful chapter, Skip! WOW! I think once I’ve dried my tears, I’m gonna have to go read it again. It was a bit blurry the first time. Love your writing. Keep ’em coming.

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