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    Why did she do this? chapter 71

    That wont be necessaryhe probably wont be here long.. said Tina as she walked away and into the break room.
    Did you come back for more? she asked as she leaned down and put her palms flat on the table in front of him.
    I came back for you ***** said Rick as he stood. Do you have any idea what you did to me by kicking me where you did? he asked..very angrily.
    LookI dont have the time to sit and chat.about what your nuts are doing at this time.I want you to leave this city.now.or you wont have anything to call nutsdo you understand me?
    Listen, lady.You fucked up my whole lifeI wanted to eventually get married and have childrenbut now thanks to you.I cant.nobody will want me when they figure out that I am sterile.
    Awwwdid I cause that? asked Tinasarcastically Little ol mecaused all those problems for you?
    Theythe police asked if I wanted to press charges.and I didnt.
    Ah.thank you I guess
    I came back to get justice myself.
    Ill tell you what.you sit right here for a few minutes and thinkif what you want to do is worth it.Im gonna go over here and get myself a cup of coffee.since it is only said Tina looking at her watch 9:15.I get very edgy if I dont get my morning dose of caffeine..anyway.if when I get back over here.you have decided that you want to try again to repay me for the most wonderful damage that I have done.then we can go that route..okay? NowIm going to get my coffee.
    Tina just smiled at herself as she walked away..she was in no wayscared of Rick.if anything, she was pleased that he had came back for more..especially now.she was having fun with this….being a smart-*****.
    Rick didnt say anythinghe just watched her walk away.he couldnt believe that this ***** was talking to him in such a manner. Ive got to show her who is boss hereRick stood up quietly from the table and went to Tina.he slowly glided up behind her..trying not to be heard.so that he could get a hold of her..
    I wouldnt do that.This coffee is very hot.it may burn you. said Tina without turning around.
    Rick stopped.. Damnwho is this *****?
    Dont think for a second that you could kick my *****..who the ***** do you think you are? You arent Lara ***** Croft
    No.I am not.although.she would probably commend me on what I plan to do to you if you dont leave here immediately.
    I will leave..but I wont be far from you..I will catch you off guard.soon.and I will give you exactly what your woman got..plus a few bruises.
    If you think you are man enough. said Tina still with her back to him. Then I will make sure to have my guard off at all times. and she snickered

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    Comments

    1. this low rating loser is getting annoying. I think you’re story is brilliant. I have not commented until now, but it would appear that there is definately a need for comments. Wildtouch, don’t let it get to you, your writing is worth the 5 stars that I voted.

    2. 5 as always, but do us a favor… let tina kick his ass a few more times and then send him to … wherever,… but take him far away of our ladies… and please… could be bette be mistaken about being a birth mom?

    3. Wildtouch …. i’ve been reading this story from the very beginning and look out for your postings everyday. This is a fantastic story! I agree with you comment ‘shame on you’ to whoever left the 3 stars without an explanation of why. I think some people need a bloody good kick up the arse – why are clearly quite happy for you to spend the time writing so that they can read it but then can’t be constructive! SHAME ON THEM and 5 shiney stars from me.

    4. WOW! Just caught up with all your postings, more than 5 stars, my take on this person who is leaving alot of negativity on this fan fiction site is:-
      shoggle-brain – An idiot:’OK, which one of you shoogle-brains wrote the charming message on the fic board.(or did’nt write)
      The idea is that the person so stigmatised possesses a brain so small that it rattles when she shoogles her head.
      Just some Glesga patter to keep you amused.
      Glesga is slang for Glasgow, Scotland.

    5. I love it Lara Croft you go Tina….Please continue ans we all know it well more than even 5 stars so don’t worry who ever is doing the 3 tar thing..you are good keep it going..

    6. This is definately a 5 star story, always has been Wildtouch….I don’t know what the deal with the lower ratings are, don’t worry but, i agree with bvhall, they’re just jealous….Anyway..i love the new direction you are taking with this story…Please keep going soon:)

    7. This is definately a 5 star story, always has been Wildtouch….I don’t know what the deal with the lower ratings are, don’t worry but, i agree with bvhall, they’re just jealous….Anyway..i love the new direction you are taking with this story…Please keep going soon:)

    8. Some Cyper Hacher is trying to have fun.Maybe they are jealous because they can’t do what you can do. WRITE and do so wonderfully . They are ass holes. Tina gave Rick another wood shed ass kicking. Dont they ever learn Dont mess with my wife. Thanks for posting tonight Bigest 5 that I can give.

    9. Don’t worry WT…some CHILD is playing with the ratings…someone with NO BRAIN…only one question though…why did they let Rick go???How about charges? Tina is Lara Croft…yummy…5 stars as always!!!

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