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Why did she do this? chapter 71
That wont be necessaryhe probably wont be here long.. said Tina as she walked away and into the break room.
Did you come back for more? she asked as she leaned down and put her palms flat on the table in front of him.
I came back for you ***** said Rick as he stood. Do you have any idea what you did to me by kicking me where you did? he asked..very angrily.
LookI dont have the time to sit and chat.about what your nuts are doing at this time.I want you to leave this city.now.or you wont have anything to call nutsdo you understand me?
Listen, lady.You fucked up my whole lifeI wanted to eventually get married and have childrenbut now thanks to you.I cant.nobody will want me when they figure out that I am sterile.
Awwwdid I cause that? asked Tinasarcastically Little ol mecaused all those problems for you?
Theythe police asked if I wanted to press charges.and I didnt.
Ah.thank you I guess
I came back to get justice myself.
Ill tell you what.you sit right here for a few minutes and thinkif what you want to do is worth it.Im gonna go over here and get myself a cup of coffee.since it is only said Tina looking at her watch 9:15.I get very edgy if I dont get my morning dose of caffeine..anyway.if when I get back over here.you have decided that you want to try again to repay me for the most wonderful damage that I have done.then we can go that route..okay? NowIm going to get my coffee.
Tina just smiled at herself as she walked away..she was in no wayscared of Rick.if anything, she was pleased that he had came back for more..especially now.she was having fun with this….being a smart-*****.
Rick didnt say anythinghe just watched her walk away.he couldnt believe that this ***** was talking to him in such a manner. Ive got to show her who is boss hereRick stood up quietly from the table and went to Tina.he slowly glided up behind her..trying not to be heard.so that he could get a hold of her..
I wouldnt do that.This coffee is very hot.it may burn you. said Tina without turning around.
Rick stopped.. Damnwho is this *****?
Dont think for a second that you could kick my *****..who the ***** do you think you are? You arent Lara ***** Croft
No.I am not.although.she would probably commend me on what I plan to do to you if you dont leave here immediately.
I will leave..but I wont be far from you..I will catch you off guard.soon.and I will give you exactly what your woman got..plus a few bruises.
If you think you are man enough. said Tina still with her back to him. Then I will make sure to have my guard off at all times. and she snickered
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wildtouch says
3 stars already? damn…I can’t believe it….You can rate me 3 stars…but you can’t leave me a comment and your name so that I know who this is? shame…shame on you….
Polarice says
I gotta tell ya, I never get tired of Tina kickin’ someone’s ass! Great update!!
Ness says
this low rating loser is getting annoying. I think you’re story is brilliant. I have not commented until now, but it would appear that there is definately a need for comments. Wildtouch, don’t let it get to you, your writing is worth the 5 stars that I voted.
wildtouch says
Ness..thank you…it’s fic readers like you and Polarice here…..that keep us all going…..thanks alot….it makes my night…..
Mel says
way to go tina…give him a good kick for me too…thanks for posting wildtouch…twice in one day…wow…thank you…a trillion stars for you…
schoolgirl says
Come on ladies let’s get rid of the low rating loser…can anyone out there kick butt like Tina just did? Always 5 stars from me Wild!!!!
claire says
wildtouch your writing is great i voted 5 stars … dont let the low rating get you down and keep up the brill work!
Kay says
5 as always, but do us a favor… let tina kick his ass a few more times and then send him to … wherever,… but take him far away of our ladies… and please… could be bette be mistaken about being a birth mom?
tinalvsbette says
5 starts Wild!! Keep up the great writing.
ladichi says
You’ve got my 5 stars!!!
Cosmic says
Wildtouch …. i’ve been reading this story from the very beginning and look out for your postings everyday. This is a fantastic story! I agree with you comment ‘shame on you’ to whoever left the 3 stars without an explanation of why. I think some people need a bloody good kick up the arse – why are clearly quite happy for you to spend the time writing so that they can read it but then can’t be constructive! SHAME ON THEM and 5 shiney stars from me.
M99 says
WOW! Just caught up with all your postings, more than 5 stars, my take on this person who is leaving alot of negativity on this fan fiction site is:-
shoggle-brain – An idiot:’OK, which one of you shoogle-brains wrote the charming message on the fic board.(or did’nt write)
The idea is that the person so stigmatised possesses a brain so small that it rattles when she shoogles her head.
Just some Glesga patter to keep you amused.
Glesga is slang for Glasgow, Scotland.
Kabby says
I love it Lara Croft you go Tina….Please continue ans we all know it well more than even 5 stars so don’t worry who ever is doing the 3 tar thing..you are good keep it going..
lyric says
5 stars girl, someone just hating on your talent with the 3 stars – obv the havn’t read your story!!!
Angelica says
Thatchapter was filled with so much… I was cracking up with Tina in her office and then at the edge of my seat at the gallery… but i cant get enough of Tina kicking ass.. such a turn on !
tweak says
5 stars as always great job…can’t wait for the next chapter!
KidRookie says
I love your story! Dont let the stars get you down…. you got 5 from me ;)
c2bc says
WOW!! I give you 5 stars. Tina kickin Rick’s azz twice. This is priceless. I am glad you got through your writing block. Keep it coming.
Mates says
This is definately a 5 star story, always has been Wildtouch….I don’t know what the deal with the lower ratings are, don’t worry but, i agree with bvhall, they’re just jealous….Anyway..i love the new direction you are taking with this story…Please keep going soon:)
Mates says
This is definately a 5 star story, always has been Wildtouch….I don’t know what the deal with the lower ratings are, don’t worry but, i agree with bvhall, they’re just jealous….Anyway..i love the new direction you are taking with this story…Please keep going soon:)
fareast says
wildtouch… don’t let the low ratings get you down. Your story is good and your writing is always great. Keep it up!
darkpoetic9 says
yeah someone is going on giving really low ratings to everyone, it is quite annoying.
Anywho I love this story, the all mighty ass kicking Tina is the best! 5 stars to you my friend.
bvhall says
Some Cyper Hacher is trying to have fun.Maybe they are jealous because they can’t do what you can do. WRITE and do so wonderfully . They are ass holes. Tina gave Rick another wood shed ass kicking. Dont they ever learn Dont mess with my wife. Thanks for posting tonight Bigest 5 that I can give.
tinawho? says
Don’t worry WT…some CHILD is playing with the ratings…someone with NO BRAIN…only one question though…why did they let Rick go???How about charges? Tina is Lara Croft…yummy…5 stars as always!!!
Laura7 says
There is only one Lara Croft and that’s Tina Kennard….Great chapter