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    Why did she do this? chapter 71

    A few minutes later, there was complete and utter silence until .
    Tinawho the ***** was that? asked Oscar.
    Tina let out a long sigh.. Its a long story she said. Thanks for standing outside the door.
    You are welcome.althoughIt didnt sound like u wouldve needed any help from me..
    I know said Tina as she started to walk off I just needed a witness.
    ……………………………………………………………………………………………………

    Bette arrived at the galleryand let James go for the day.She spent her morning going over legal briefs.and the incoming art..before she knew itTina was on the phone about lunchwhat to bring..and when to be there.
    Bring whatever you likeand be here as soon as you can.I miss you. said Bette
    OkayIll be there in 30.I love you babe
    I love you toohurry.
    Bette hung the phone up.and went back to work.
    15 minutes later, the door bell rang to let her know that someone had entered

    Bette walked out of her office..and saw a young man standing and looking at a painting..
    Hello.Im Bette PorterWelcome to my galleryare you interested in this painting?
    Yes he saidstill looking.
    What exactly draws you to itif you dont mind me asking.
    Oh noI dont mind. he said..before he snickeredand continued.. I actually love this.this.red.color..this person is so afraid.and covered in bloodmuch like you when I am done.
    Excuse me? asked Bette before he turned around
    Bette took a step back. No.howhowhow did you find me?
    Your girlfriend told me where to find you.
    OhYou.you better not have touched her.you hear me? I will ***** kill you if you did.
    Ah.dont worry.I didnt touch herwell.I Havent touched her yet.. he said as he took a step forward..
    Just thenthe bell rang again..and in walked Tina with food in hand..
    Tina.. yelled Bette
    Tina knew by her tone that something was wrongso she dropped the food and ran to where to voice came from..she stopped dead in her tracks.Rick was only a foot away from Bette.
    Mother *****.I dont know who you think you are..but you had better back away from my wife. said Tina.
    Rick pulled out a knife.. And I told you that you arent Lara ***** Croft..if you step one foot closer..I will ***** gut her..
    Tina looked at Bette.. Baby
    Bette was transfixed on the knifenot hearing Tina.
    Bette.. Tina yelled.and Bette looked at her. Back away from him babyhe wont do it.
    Yyes he will.T
    Bette.back away. said Tina as she took a few steps forward..steps that Rick didnt notice since he was looking at Bette.
    II cant. said Bette as she began to cry. Hehe will kill me
    Nohe wont ..Now take a step back said Tina.
    Bette stepped back..and Rick went forward.he didnt notice the 4 steps that Tina took towards him
    NowRickyou didnt think that I would let you just walk in here and hurt my wife did you? asked Tina.
    I dont care whether you are here or notyou can watchshit I love having people watch. said Rick as he snickered
    Wellnow.lets seewhat are the chances of you getting to her before I get to you? Id say they are pretty slim..and that knife you are holding.I dont think you would cut anyone.rapist.yes..killer..no
    You dont know what I am capable of he shouted
    And.you.only got a glimpse of what I am capable of..but you are fixing to get a very good look at what kind of damage I can really do. said Tina.
    EHHHH.Im skeered he said laughing..
    Say Rick..did you tell Bettewhat you cant do now? I meandid you tell her thatyou cant get a hard-on anymore? That you cant get anyone pg now?
    Shut up *****. he said
    Did he tell you babe? That when I cleared his nuts..I also cleared his little swimmy friends.they wont be traveling through anymore cervixs laughed Tina.
    I said to shut the ***** up.
    Come on bad boy.come on over here and make me said Tina as she held up her hand and waved him over..
    He turned his attention away from Bette and onto her..Tina looked at Bette and shook her head to the right so that Bette would move..she did so.
    Alright.I have had enough of your mouth.
    Good said Tina. Come do something about it.
    Before Tina knew it, Rick lunged at herwith the knife..she punched him in the stomachand commenced to whipping his *****.
    Bette had to finally pull Tina off of him..
    Tina screamed. If you ever.ever.come around me or my wife again..I will kill you..Now get the ***** out..
    Rick scrambled to his feetthen left the gallery.
    Tina immediately went to Bette Are you okay baby?
    Bette just broke down.and fell into her wifes arms..

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    Comments

    1. 3 stars already? damn…I can’t believe it….You can rate me 3 stars…but you can’t leave me a comment and your name so that I know who this is? shame…shame on you….

    2. this low rating loser is getting annoying. I think you’re story is brilliant. I have not commented until now, but it would appear that there is definately a need for comments. Wildtouch, don’t let it get to you, your writing is worth the 5 stars that I voted.

    3. 5 as always, but do us a favor… let tina kick his ass a few more times and then send him to … wherever,… but take him far away of our ladies… and please… could be bette be mistaken about being a birth mom?

    4. Wildtouch …. i’ve been reading this story from the very beginning and look out for your postings everyday. This is a fantastic story! I agree with you comment ‘shame on you’ to whoever left the 3 stars without an explanation of why. I think some people need a bloody good kick up the arse – why are clearly quite happy for you to spend the time writing so that they can read it but then can’t be constructive! SHAME ON THEM and 5 shiney stars from me.

    5. WOW! Just caught up with all your postings, more than 5 stars, my take on this person who is leaving alot of negativity on this fan fiction site is:-
      shoggle-brain – An idiot:’OK, which one of you shoogle-brains wrote the charming message on the fic board.(or did’nt write)
      The idea is that the person so stigmatised possesses a brain so small that it rattles when she shoogles her head.
      Just some Glesga patter to keep you amused.
      Glesga is slang for Glasgow, Scotland.

    6. I love it Lara Croft you go Tina….Please continue ans we all know it well more than even 5 stars so don’t worry who ever is doing the 3 tar thing..you are good keep it going..

    7. Thatchapter was filled with so much… I was cracking up with Tina in her office and then at the edge of my seat at the gallery… but i cant get enough of Tina kicking ass.. such a turn on !

    8. This is definately a 5 star story, always has been Wildtouch….I don’t know what the deal with the lower ratings are, don’t worry but, i agree with bvhall, they’re just jealous….Anyway..i love the new direction you are taking with this story…Please keep going soon:)

    9. This is definately a 5 star story, always has been Wildtouch….I don’t know what the deal with the lower ratings are, don’t worry but, i agree with bvhall, they’re just jealous….Anyway..i love the new direction you are taking with this story…Please keep going soon:)

    10. yeah someone is going on giving really low ratings to everyone, it is quite annoying.

      Anywho I love this story, the all mighty ass kicking Tina is the best! 5 stars to you my friend.

    11. Some Cyper Hacher is trying to have fun.Maybe they are jealous because they can’t do what you can do. WRITE and do so wonderfully . They are ass holes. Tina gave Rick another wood shed ass kicking. Dont they ever learn Dont mess with my wife. Thanks for posting tonight Bigest 5 that I can give.

    12. Don’t worry WT…some CHILD is playing with the ratings…someone with NO BRAIN…only one question though…why did they let Rick go???How about charges? Tina is Lara Croft…yummy…5 stars as always!!!

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