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    The Promise

    Story written on February 17, 2005 by TheRealJLO.
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    Chapter 28.5 – L’Chaim…Selah…

    The song to use is Selah, by Lauryn Hill it explains everything that everyone is thinking in the group sans Dana and Lara who are in their place ***** like bunnies….sorry Im so vulgar, its been a randy few days aye – JLO

    Christy – thanks …I didnt intend to make you cry I hate when chicks cry

    bvhall- you know what…thats it!, just you wait and see what happens now!

    Janet – I am only putting B&T together cause I dont feel like writing another relationship in…I couldnt do cass and candy like you…same reason why theres no kit and Ivan…I am focusing on A&S…so lets just call it lazy not sentimental…hehe

    aceofheart and M- thats right Im not a romantic…wait was that sarcasm?

    Perfection – Ive left you out of breath? Hm ~wiggles her eyes and searches for songs by Berlin~ j/k kidding I wont make you guys endure that, Im already pushing my luck by asking you to dl all these songs.

    Nix & Kabby- sorry luv, you might not be happy with the next few chapters if you want Shane and alice on the right track cause….hehehe not gonna tell you…but trust me, its worth the wait.

    Shy- be as impatient as you want..just remember when youre standing in the bushes outside my place stalking me….Im at yours doing the same thing…now go write your chapters so I can have my fix!

    Ange- youre too cute, and I will get to work on the next chpt after dinner aye.

    Chapter 28.5

    I almost wrote a song about you, but then I tore it up and threw it away…I almost had you and I wish you would have loved me too… ~Almost by Bowling for Soup

    Alice rolled over and felt a starched material crumpled against her face. She opened her exhausted eyes to see a discarded sheet of paper stuck to her face. She sat up from her awkward position at the foot of her bed amongst a litter of papers shed left out all night. She stretched out, then wrapped her arms around her knees. She rubbed the sleep from her eyes and looked at the clock .

    ::5:38::

    After two hours of sleep, she felt somewhat refreshed. Alice spent the night writing and playing…two things she hadnt done in forever. The words seemed to flow from her after her call to Shane. Not just words of heartache and pain, but that of self discovery and assurance. She was coming to terms with all of the things that were taking a back seat in her mind while dealing with everyone elses problems….although they always seemed to involve her anyway.

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    1. I’ll wait as long as I have to and will love reading whatever you write so take as long as you want…. just not too long or I might die of oxygen deprivation from wiating with baited breath! ha ha Thanx for another amazing chapter!! :)

    4. That was amazing as always..I guess I will b patient but I love them all to be happy but I know that woulmake for a boring story, I am glad Bette let Tina in a little.. Plese go on..Thanks for taking the time you do..

    5. I have always loved that song by Lauryn Hill, what a great song to have with this chapter. How did you know that I was stalking you?? Yay, I’ve always wanted a stalker! (ok not really, but still if it’s you it’s cool) All right All right I’m going to write! I have more song challenges if you care to hear them.

    8. sorry i havent commmented in a few days..life gets busy.. but i have been here reading every word.. i love your story and love your style.. keep up the good work.. my daily addiction needs to be filled… 5 stars gal

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