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A Different Beginning 3
Bette was giving Shay a bath in the sink and laughed as her little girl splashed water at her and giggled. Bette couldnt help but laugh right along with her. Bette looked up slightly startled to see her sons materialize at her side.
What have I told you about creeping up on mommy?
Dont do it because your old ticker cant take it, Devon asked with a cheeky grin
I never liked you anyway.
The boys rolled their eyes at this.
What do you want, money, jewels, both my kidneys…what?
Well we think that helping unpack this rather large house on a day you promised would be filled with fun deserves more than a get out of trouble cause of detention free card, Devon started
Besides the way its looking were not even going to be getting detentions
…So we feel that we should get something else…
…For our services, Graham finished
First of all you are helping me with something you would have done anyway tomorrow and second off stop doing that.
What, they asked in unison
Bette turned to her daughter and lifted her up out of the sink grabbing a big fluffy towel and wrapping her in it. She just shook her head at the antics of her sons.
What is it that you feel that you should get for your hard days work, Bette asked turning to them
Sony Playstation, they chorus together
Didnt I just buy you that Xbox thingy?
Yes, but thats yesterdays news, today…
Sony Playstation I got it and the answer is no.
Aw come on mom, Devon started, If you are going to traumatize us for life buy becoming bi the least we should get out of it is some stuff.
I thought you were okay with this whole thing, Bette commented starting feeling bad
Mom…chill dorkus here is just messing with you, Graham consoled
Bette sighed and raised an eyebrow, If you both want to retain both of your own kidneys Id leave right now.
Both boys looked at each other and then at their mom and then back at each other and ran off.
So going to be the death of me, Bette remarked lifting Shay so that they were eye level and Bette crossed her eyes and made a funny face causing her little girl to giggle, Ah but you will be the only sane one in the family Im afraid, she said pulling Shay to her chest and holding her close, The only sane one.
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(53 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
OMG I thought it was hilarious when Shane, Al, and Dana were talking with Clara at the store. Even funnier, was when Shane called her cell phone! I absolutely love this fanfic, I am laughing my head off!! “We have a unique relationship” I love Clara, best daughter ever! :)
I love Bette with her family of 4 and I like the switch with her being str8 and Tina not. I totally enjoyed this and Clara is a little pisser.
Love this story. Please continue.
OMG, this is becoming one of my favorites stories besides (BETTE FORGETS)..So excited for the DATE..PLEASE POST ASAP…
i love this story. it’s total role reversal. awesome. and i love the banter between bette and clara – reminds me of my mother and i. haha. awesome story, post again SOON! (please, hehe)
I love this story! I can’t wait for the next chapter and you’re right…there is no such thing as too long. I really like the banter between Clara and Bette. Loved this part…
“Ooh just what I always wanted. Now get dressed there lady. We’d probably get everything free if you went out like that but you would probably also get a citation or something,†Clara remarked leaving the bathroom, “If the cop wasn’t to busy looking at your bosom.â€
“That’s not why I got out of that last speeding ticket,†Bette called after her daughter
“Keep thinking that,†Clara called back.
let the date commence and put those kids to bed fast.
very entertaining….lot’s of laughs! more pleeze
=D<~See my happy face...you're responsible for it. I so loved this chapter. Bette and her kids...they're hilarious, bribing each other & making deals. Now that's how a family should operate...hehe...leather pants and a hot hunter green dress...hmm...nothing but good can come out of this combination;P Alice, Dana, and Shane...they're a hoot. I love it...please update soon. The longer the chapter, the better...thanks Reba.
i love love love this story!
The relationship between Bette and her kids is amazingly funny.
P.S.- you must shear the story of clara running naked through…
OK, I just have to tell you how much I love this story! You are a fabulous writer. Thank you so much for posting!
Bette with four children,and she interact very well with them. Lets see if Tina does. I like Clara. She is funny. Bette must have money, her kids sure does black mail her for it.. thanks
Good chapter. I love the relationship between Bette and Clar have is beautiful. Is so funny that Alice, Shane, Dana talk on the phone with Clar about what Tina should wear. Now let see what’s happen next. Post soon, thank you!
I love this story! So sweet. Thank you for writing it :)
“Ordering the naughty gifts for the surprise party that you just ruined,†Alice stated in her serious tone throwing up her hands in frustration leaving the confines of the closet with Dana and Shane trailing behind her.
BEST LINE EVER.It made me honestly laugh out loud.
Your stories capture and hold my attention,write more!haha.
I was happy to see your story posted. Great job!
keep this up! really great story. nice to see tina as the more experienced one and great to see shane and al help bette in the store! really really wonderful. post more soon!
Can’t wait for more. Great story!
This was a really good chapter, the banter between Bette and her daughter was funny, keep up the good work.
Thank you.
This is great. Love this storyline. Please continue.
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Reba Reba..you have done it again. Damn girl..you can´t leave us like this. Can´t wait till dinner starts. Post soon
That was great. So long I’m impressed but so funny you have their banter down so well I love this.
I love this story, I think is about time that Tina happens to be the “Killer”,please continue.
love this…..please continue.
AHHH! Cliffhangers! This story is hilarious, please post again soon!
If there is an award for witty banter you would run away with the prize!! I really love this and can’t wait to see where it goes!
Are these leather pants so tight Tina can’t get them off Bette? Love the story!