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    Flames of Passion Chapter 56

    Shane didnt hear, (or didnt acknowledge) Sarahs presence, as she remained completely still, her head hunched over supported by her own safe hands.

    Sarah wasnt leaving without a fight, without trying at least. She slowly approached her, sitting on the step right next to her, her back coming to rest on the front door, their calves lightly brushing against each other, evoking a reflex movement from Shane.

    Dying to reach out and touch her, to hold her and take away whatever torment she was going through Sarah reluctantly sat there, not daring to move, waiting and hoping for a sign from Shane, some kind of response that she was at least ok.

    After quite some time had passed, and Sarah had remained by her side silently, patiently, Shane slowly looked up and was instantly met with Sarahs worried stare; Shanes eyes were glazed over and bloodshot, her piercing deep brown eyes burning a path all the way to Sarahs very soul.

    Shane spoke quietly, a hint of regret in her voice, Why did you bother coming here Sarah?

    Sarah: (sincerely) God babe, I love you thats why! I need you to tell me what I did wrong so WE can fix this! Please let me in.

    Sarah could see by the look in Shanes eyes that she was wrestling with some pretty serious inner demons, I dont know if I could ever explain. You just shouldve asked before you took the pictures, but I am sorry that I freaked out. I just..I justFUCK!!!! Why didnt you just let me be? I think Im too fucked up for a relationship Sarah(looking down at the steps) no matter how much I love you!

    Sarah: (sympathetically) Why are you too fucked up? Damn it Shane. I love you too; (regaining eye contact with the woman who held her happiness in the palm of her hand) you are safe with me baby. Please let me in, even just a little?

    Shane: (sighing) I cant.. not yet! Im so sorry!

    Sarah realized that there was much more to Shane Mc Cutcheon than met the eye, and if she walked away today, she may never know how great they could be together. Taking one of Shanes hands in her own Sarah tried to explain, Listen to me babyI will never again do anything private like that without asking you first ok. I really had no idea; you just looked so gorgeous. and thats what I do, I take pictures, I have an eye for beautiful things(hopeful) I want you to forgive me and I will ensure I respect your opinion in relation to that from now onalways!

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    1. YIPPIE-KI-YAY-MOTHERF*CKER! About damn time!! (There’s about ten writers on this site, that I get so excited when I see them post a new chapter or story, you are definately one of them). Wow, today is like the return of the oldies….oldies, but definately a goodie. First, IMLOVINIT returned with a new chapter, and now you. I ‘m so glad I’m stuck at home today (I have a ten page papers to finish by tuesday for English Lit).

      About a month ago, I found you story, and was immediately hooked (read the entire 55 chapters that day), and I love how you changed Tina’s occupation, a woman in uniform is so sexy!

      Anyway, a-slap-on-your-ass-and-a-kick-in-your-shin-for returning. AWESOME!!

    2. Hey Mates! I was so excited to see a new post on this story! It lived up to all of my expectations and then some. And congrats on the award. You really deserve it!

    3. Hey Mates, once again you made my day!! Congratulations on the award, you totally deserve coz both your stories are absolutly AMAZING!!!! I’m sitting here with the biggest, goofiest, silliest grin on my face lol…. Can’t wait to see what Alice has in store for B&T, it sounds like a whole load of fun! ;) Thanx so much for the update and I can’t wait for more =0)

    4. Wow, I was so happy to see an update on this story. It has been missed greatly. Can’t wait to see what Alice has planned. Congrats on the award. Both your stories are brilliant!

    5. O.K. I need a smoke after the Shane and Sarah love scene (and I don’t even smoke). And this is going to be one wild time with Alice and gang – LOL. Hurry back!

    6. First of all Welcome back…I can’t wait to see where this story is going to head…When i first started reading this chapter it actually reminded me of a song… It’s by blur….

      Anyway…~wicked grin~ I sense this Party is going to be some awesome fun!!!

      dont leave me hangin to long….

      Congrats on the award too…

    7. Hey great way to have some fun. I love Shane and Sarah, Shane is so ready for love. Thanks for giving it to her. Congrates on your award it’s right on appropriate for all your great stories. Thanks

    8. Mates always a pleasor….I like your bacholor party dess up code. Nice one. Can´t wait to see what happens when the night starts. Great update Mates on a fantastic story. Post soon

    9. Mates, congrats on your award. I always look forward to one of your chapters. Both stories are great. I can’t wait to see what Alice has cooked up for Bette and Tina.

    10. great update! I can’t wait to see what happens on the pub crawl, it’s going to be great I’m sure! Excellent choice for Bette’s costume, I can see it now, Officer Porter, laying down the law!

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