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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 18
Previously~~~~~~~~~~~~
Bette tore her eyes away from Danas thin gyrating body at the sound of her girlfriends voice. Hey, T. You look beautiful, baby. Turn around and let me see you., she said with a smile.
Tina smiled. Bette, its just a t-shirt.
Yes, but you look stunning. Humor me., said Bette.
With a roll of her eyes, Tina did a small spin in her new Dance Marathon t-shirt. Bettes dark eyes roamed over the purple fabric and smiled when she saw the wording on the back: Presented by the UCLA ***** Alliance
Happy tears came to her eyes and she blinked to hide the evidence of her heartfelt emotions. The dark-haired beauty slid her arms around Tinas waist and held her from behind. Absolutely stunning, T., she whispered into her girlfriends ear.
Thank you., said Tina.
No, thank you. I love you, T., said Bette.
I love you too, Bette., said Tina, her brow slightly knotted in confusion. She was about to turn around and ask her girlfriend why shed said thank you, when she spotted Dana grinding against Alice, the blonde reporters hands resting comfortably on the tennis players hips.
What in the *****?, asked Tina.
I know, baby. I dont know whether to laugh or cry., said Bette with a chuckle.
Tina felt like a protective parent. She and Dana were the same age, yet she somehow felt that she was responsible for her romantically inexperienced friend. What is she doing?, asked Tina.
Bette shrugged. Getting her groove on?
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Circumstances have a way of altering our mentality, rearranging our priorities, and changing our outlook on the world around us. Bette Porters circumstances had changed her. Prior to Tinas decision to come out, the dark-haired beautys loving spirit had been malnourished; surviving on snippets of Melvins conditional love, memories of her mothers now-absent smile, and the irresolute affections of her well-intentioned girlfriend. Tinas unconditional love and pledge to remain by Bettes side had soothed the caramel womans aching spirit, filling all the cracks and crevices inflicted by previous hurts and paralyzing uncertainties, replenishing her burdened soul.
Not only did Bette Porter have Tinas profession of love swirling around her mind, but she could see that love with her own eyes. They were in a room full of people and yet Bette had her arms wrapped around her girlfriends slender form, her chin cradled softly on a purple-shirted shoulder, the scent of Tinas shampoo tickling her senses, the feel of damp blonde hair resting against her caramel cheek. In a little over 2 hours, Bette had gone from the bitter depths of isolation and despair to the euphoric heights of her girlfriends private and public expressions of love.
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Keno says
another wonderful chapter… just loved this…love your tina..so she wants bette to have the babies…i hope you never stop this story…
marsupial says
GREAT CHAPTER…EVERYBODY IS SO HAPPY…TO BAD WE KNOW THAT IS NOT GOING TO LAST..PLEASE POST SOON
Skipton says
nicely done- it’s time they had a little smooth sailing, for the one night anyhow. thanks!
moi says
Bring on Cancun!
;)
JBlover4life says
perfect as usual!! i love this story more and more(if thats even possible)with each new chapter.. thanks for making my heart all warm and fuzzy
ariannamcclare says
Why do I get the feeling something bad is about to happen to them again. Love your work though. You put a lot of feeling into the story.
margot says
so happy to see you post again. and wonderful to see tina protectivce of dana! gosh, can i just gush enough how much i love this story and how it’s paced and how you highlight their emotions and make it so real. and the way tina feels, so real MTS, so real. it’s wonderful :) i await the next chapter :)
Revolution says
the sun rises and sets on this story, because it is all of my fanfic world! I adore the conversation between Alice and Tina, Tina’s all MamaBear kicking a$$ and taking names! that’s great. Love this, please keep going!
t-boz says
This is a great story. I just get worried sometimes, since they have gotten together so young. I just don’t want them to break up. I’m just so happy for the progress they’ve made. It’s great how you’ve worked Alice in. I’m anxiously awaiting to see how you’ll weave Shane, into this group. It could be years down the road. But, I’ll still be reading. Thanks for sharing.
funnygirl says
I love this story! I’m so happy you’ve taken it to the 2nd dimension! I think we might have to start a collection to pay you so you can keept the updates coming!! :)
trecelovinit says
Wonderful as always!!
vatasha27 says
nice!!!
stella says
What time zone are you? It is great that you are posting before 8am here in Europe. It makes my morning shine. Thanks and please keep them coming…
Steph says
I too like the idea of one great night… but of course that other side of my brain is kicking in with “that means that the next day or very soon B&T are going to get a call from AngryHomophobicKennards! or CrazyProtectiveMelvin. lol anyway, I’m sure the characters will do what they can to get through these situations. Keep up the great work and please post more soon!!!
Change says
Woo…Tina sure laid it out on Alice, I guess she deserved every bit of Tina’s anger…but of course, Tina’s gentle side overcame her bitterness towards Alice and accepted her as a friend, which I think is pretty awesome of her=D ““Mmmhmmm.â€, said Tina, her eyes still closed. She was watching something much more important. Behind her closed lids, she was watching their commitment ceremony, Bette’s first pregnancy, the birth of their first child, their home life together, evenings wrapped in each other’s arms, soft candle light, decades of loving memories, and growing old together.”…WHOA, Bette’s the pregnant one in the future, that’s a cool change=P…Either way, both LH&JB are two very FINE HOT MAMAs!! All who agree say HELL YEAH!!…Heartfelt chapter MTS…thanks so much for posting…it’s 816pm here in Hawaii so you just made my night=D Much mahalos!
ChakaSB says
Go Tina.. Go Tina…
I like the idea of one night.. excellent update.
Seahurst says
That was perfect! I would love to experience a night like that again. Thanks MTS!
Lyn says
Great chapter. I’m glad that they all be friend and now let see what’s happen next. Post soon, thanks.
chazza says
that was perfect, as always.
Newcomer says
The way you write these chapters makes me feel like I know these people! I love the way you can turn this fanfic into something that could be so real. Thanks for yet another great chapter.
Phoenix says
Are you going to bring shane into the storyline? Good Job.
jo says
Another fantastic story post soon please
hunty38 says
Perfect chapter, once again, keep up the loving, no more tears.I like it when their happy. It makes me happy!!
techgal says
Thank you for giving us that closure. You landed that ending just like a skilled pilot lands a Boeing 747.
I’m encouraged that B&T have added another friend to their circle. They need and deserve support. And love.
heythere says
This chapter was beautifully written. Just one request MTS, if a shoe’s gonna drop, can ya wait till after the trip? Pretty please :)
Looking forward to an update soon!
Kel says
I always love your stories. Gives me a warm and fuzzy feeling inside. :)
downlow95 says
Peace and traquility and all is right with the world! Great chapter!
momo says
Hey MTS thank you what really matter is Bette and Tina together again I love it Whoa! I’m so really excited to read this their really sweet and so cute each other I’m really happy to reading it’s time that you posted again like this you put the Smile on my Face Thank you MTS you are Amazing Writer.
moonshadow says
Perfect!! Hope one night melts into two, three….But, I know that once the reality of everyday life settles in, there will be more drama. I hope not before their week together. Thanks again for this beautiful story.
fey says
if only life were like that.. *sigh* i love love love love your writing. please don’t keep us waiting!
ankus says
WOW!!!
rebakathy1 says
Oy, Now THAT was AMAZING! More!
Megga says
Finally, some happiness here! Haha, but I have a feeling becasue of the way you ended it the drama’s gonna rear it’s ugly head soon. Hahah, either way I still love your story! Please post again soon!
k says
That was wonnderful as ALWAYS. Can’t wait for the next one.
karen says
love it to bits!!
gunnermedstu says
MTS, great chapter. I enjoyed it immensely. I am so happy to see the gang forming and being themselves. Hopefully, Cancun will be good to B&T and there won’t be another dip in this rollercoaster ride until they get to Mexico!