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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 18
And so, as the dark-haired beauty watched Dana dance with the young woman that had been the bane of her existence only hours ago, there was no malice in her heart. Tinas love had calmed her anger and her fears and allowed her spirit to rest in a peaceful place that was both loving and forgiving. Her dark brown eyes studied the unlikely couple and she held Tina even closer, a warm smile tugging at the corners of her mouth.
Bette, I dont like this., said Tina, her brow creasing in disdain.
The beautiful blonde was not as serene as her other half. The weeks set of events had triggered a fierce protectiveness in her. Tina hated that she hadnt been able to protect Bette or be there when her soothing touch was needed. Tina hated that she hadnt been able to protect the love of her life from the pain she had endured. That she hadnt been able to protect her from Alice. And now, the vulture was circling again, looking for weakened women to prey upon.
I know, baby. Just relax, okay. Danas fine.
I dont trust her, Bette. I dont want her hanging around Dana. You know Dana has no clue about this whole dating thing. I cant trust her to Alice., said Tina.
T.dont worry. Danas having a good time. Theyre just dancing.
Tina turned around and looked into Bettes eyes. Do you trust me, babe?, she asked.
Bette eyed her curiously. You know I trust you, T. Why?
Tina kissed Bette softly and said, BecauseIve got to go handle something. Ill be right back.
Tina quickly walked over to her dancing friend and the unscrupulous reporter. She tapped a startled Dana on the shoulder and pointed her toward Bette before smiling warmly at Alice, grabbing her by the hand and leading her out of the gym. Bettes eyes followed them as far as they could before turning to meet Danas bashful gaze.
Bette smiled lovingly at her friend, Hey, Dane. Quite some moves you got there.
Danas tanned cheeks were flushed from both embarrassment and exertion. Beads of sweat dotted her exposed forehead and she stood uncomfortably with her hands on her hips. Yeah, I dont know what was going on out there.
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(96 votes, average: 3.84 out of 5)
another wonderful chapter… just loved this…love your tina..so she wants bette to have the babies…i hope you never stop this story…
GREAT CHAPTER…EVERYBODY IS SO HAPPY…TO BAD WE KNOW THAT IS NOT GOING TO LAST..PLEASE POST SOON
nicely done- it’s time they had a little smooth sailing, for the one night anyhow. thanks!
Bring on Cancun!
;)
perfect as usual!! i love this story more and more(if thats even possible)with each new chapter.. thanks for making my heart all warm and fuzzy
Why do I get the feeling something bad is about to happen to them again. Love your work though. You put a lot of feeling into the story.
so happy to see you post again. and wonderful to see tina protectivce of dana! gosh, can i just gush enough how much i love this story and how it’s paced and how you highlight their emotions and make it so real. and the way tina feels, so real MTS, so real. it’s wonderful :) i await the next chapter :)
the sun rises and sets on this story, because it is all of my fanfic world! I adore the conversation between Alice and Tina, Tina’s all MamaBear kicking a$$ and taking names! that’s great. Love this, please keep going!
This is a great story. I just get worried sometimes, since they have gotten together so young. I just don’t want them to break up. I’m just so happy for the progress they’ve made. It’s great how you’ve worked Alice in. I’m anxiously awaiting to see how you’ll weave Shane, into this group. It could be years down the road. But, I’ll still be reading. Thanks for sharing.
I love this story! I’m so happy you’ve taken it to the 2nd dimension! I think we might have to start a collection to pay you so you can keept the updates coming!! :)
Wonderful as always!!
nice!!!
What time zone are you? It is great that you are posting before 8am here in Europe. It makes my morning shine. Thanks and please keep them coming…
I too like the idea of one great night… but of course that other side of my brain is kicking in with “that means that the next day or very soon B&T are going to get a call from AngryHomophobicKennards! or CrazyProtectiveMelvin. lol anyway, I’m sure the characters will do what they can to get through these situations. Keep up the great work and please post more soon!!!
Woo…Tina sure laid it out on Alice, I guess she deserved every bit of Tina’s anger…but of course, Tina’s gentle side overcame her bitterness towards Alice and accepted her as a friend, which I think is pretty awesome of her=D ““Mmmhmmm.â€, said Tina, her eyes still closed. She was watching something much more important. Behind her closed lids, she was watching their commitment ceremony, Bette’s first pregnancy, the birth of their first child, their home life together, evenings wrapped in each other’s arms, soft candle light, decades of loving memories, and growing old together.”…WHOA, Bette’s the pregnant one in the future, that’s a cool change=P…Either way, both LH&JB are two very FINE HOT MAMAs!! All who agree say HELL YEAH!!…Heartfelt chapter MTS…thanks so much for posting…it’s 816pm here in Hawaii so you just made my night=D Much mahalos!
Go Tina.. Go Tina…
I like the idea of one night.. excellent update.
That was perfect! I would love to experience a night like that again. Thanks MTS!
Great chapter. I’m glad that they all be friend and now let see what’s happen next. Post soon, thanks.
that was perfect, as always.
The way you write these chapters makes me feel like I know these people! I love the way you can turn this fanfic into something that could be so real. Thanks for yet another great chapter.
Are you going to bring shane into the storyline? Good Job.
Another fantastic story post soon please
Perfect chapter, once again, keep up the loving, no more tears.I like it when their happy. It makes me happy!!
Thank you for giving us that closure. You landed that ending just like a skilled pilot lands a Boeing 747.
I’m encouraged that B&T have added another friend to their circle. They need and deserve support. And love.
This chapter was beautifully written. Just one request MTS, if a shoe’s gonna drop, can ya wait till after the trip? Pretty please :)
Looking forward to an update soon!
I always love your stories. Gives me a warm and fuzzy feeling inside. :)
Peace and traquility and all is right with the world! Great chapter!
Hey MTS thank you what really matter is Bette and Tina together again I love it Whoa! I’m so really excited to read this their really sweet and so cute each other I’m really happy to reading it’s time that you posted again like this you put the Smile on my Face Thank you MTS you are Amazing Writer.
Perfect!! Hope one night melts into two, three….But, I know that once the reality of everyday life settles in, there will be more drama. I hope not before their week together. Thanks again for this beautiful story.
if only life were like that.. *sigh* i love love love love your writing. please don’t keep us waiting!
WOW!!!
Oy, Now THAT was AMAZING! More!
Finally, some happiness here! Haha, but I have a feeling becasue of the way you ended it the drama’s gonna rear it’s ugly head soon. Hahah, either way I still love your story! Please post again soon!
That was wonnderful as ALWAYS. Can’t wait for the next one.
love it to bits!!
MTS, great chapter. I enjoyed it immensely. I am so happy to see the gang forming and being themselves. Hopefully, Cancun will be good to B&T and there won’t be another dip in this rollercoaster ride until they get to Mexico!