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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 18
I know what was going on.
Dana looked at Bette as if this caramel-skinned woman held all the secrets of life. What?
Looked like unadulterated lust to me. So tell me, how did you end up dancing with Al?
I dont know. I was telling her what an ***** shed been and she looked so pitiful I felt sorry for her. The next thing I know, we hugged and she asked me to dance. Are you mad?, asked Dana.
Bette smiled. Im not mad. If you want to dance with Alice, you are more than welcome to.
You sure?, asked Dana.
Yeah. Im sure., said Bette, wrapping an arm around Danas shoulders and guiding her toward the table. Just be careful, okay? And come and talk to me if something doesnt feel right.
Dana smiled shyly and said, I will. Thanks Bette.
No problem, Dane. Now, weve gotta get the show on the road here. These dancers need water., said Bette.
Emily, Dana, and Bette proceeded to gather their volunteers and make sure their dancers were well hydrated and refreshed while Tina cleaned house.
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The warm smile Tina had donned to coax Alice into stepping outside with her had disappeared the moment they entered the hallway. She led Alice to a corner and stared angrily at the short-haired blonde, her arms folded tightly across her chest.
We need to get a few things straight., said Tina.
The surprise in Alices dark eyes was more than apparent. O.kay.
First, Bette is my girlfriend. That means no flirting with her, no eyeballing her, none of that. Got it?, said Tina.
Alice nodded as guilt washed over her. She nodded and looked down. Yeah, I get it.
Good. Second, what the ***** are you doing with Dana?
I.we were just dancing., said Alice.
Tina shook her head slowly. No, you werent just dancing. You are a conniving..vulture.
Alice raised an eyebrow. Thats a little harsh, dont you think?
No, I dont. You totally lied about Bette. You took her words and you twisted them. Youre a vulture, plain and simple.
Alice was silent as she stared down at her shoes.
Tina continued on. Dana is one of my best friends. Dont play games with her. I saw you dancing with her and it made me sick to my stomach.
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(96 votes, average: 3.84 out of 5)
another wonderful chapter… just loved this…love your tina..so she wants bette to have the babies…i hope you never stop this story…
GREAT CHAPTER…EVERYBODY IS SO HAPPY…TO BAD WE KNOW THAT IS NOT GOING TO LAST..PLEASE POST SOON
nicely done- it’s time they had a little smooth sailing, for the one night anyhow. thanks!
Bring on Cancun!
;)
perfect as usual!! i love this story more and more(if thats even possible)with each new chapter.. thanks for making my heart all warm and fuzzy
Why do I get the feeling something bad is about to happen to them again. Love your work though. You put a lot of feeling into the story.
so happy to see you post again. and wonderful to see tina protectivce of dana! gosh, can i just gush enough how much i love this story and how it’s paced and how you highlight their emotions and make it so real. and the way tina feels, so real MTS, so real. it’s wonderful :) i await the next chapter :)
the sun rises and sets on this story, because it is all of my fanfic world! I adore the conversation between Alice and Tina, Tina’s all MamaBear kicking a$$ and taking names! that’s great. Love this, please keep going!
This is a great story. I just get worried sometimes, since they have gotten together so young. I just don’t want them to break up. I’m just so happy for the progress they’ve made. It’s great how you’ve worked Alice in. I’m anxiously awaiting to see how you’ll weave Shane, into this group. It could be years down the road. But, I’ll still be reading. Thanks for sharing.
I love this story! I’m so happy you’ve taken it to the 2nd dimension! I think we might have to start a collection to pay you so you can keept the updates coming!! :)
Wonderful as always!!
nice!!!
What time zone are you? It is great that you are posting before 8am here in Europe. It makes my morning shine. Thanks and please keep them coming…
I too like the idea of one great night… but of course that other side of my brain is kicking in with “that means that the next day or very soon B&T are going to get a call from AngryHomophobicKennards! or CrazyProtectiveMelvin. lol anyway, I’m sure the characters will do what they can to get through these situations. Keep up the great work and please post more soon!!!
Woo…Tina sure laid it out on Alice, I guess she deserved every bit of Tina’s anger…but of course, Tina’s gentle side overcame her bitterness towards Alice and accepted her as a friend, which I think is pretty awesome of her=D ““Mmmhmmm.â€, said Tina, her eyes still closed. She was watching something much more important. Behind her closed lids, she was watching their commitment ceremony, Bette’s first pregnancy, the birth of their first child, their home life together, evenings wrapped in each other’s arms, soft candle light, decades of loving memories, and growing old together.”…WHOA, Bette’s the pregnant one in the future, that’s a cool change=P…Either way, both LH&JB are two very FINE HOT MAMAs!! All who agree say HELL YEAH!!…Heartfelt chapter MTS…thanks so much for posting…it’s 816pm here in Hawaii so you just made my night=D Much mahalos!
Go Tina.. Go Tina…
I like the idea of one night.. excellent update.
That was perfect! I would love to experience a night like that again. Thanks MTS!
Great chapter. I’m glad that they all be friend and now let see what’s happen next. Post soon, thanks.
that was perfect, as always.
The way you write these chapters makes me feel like I know these people! I love the way you can turn this fanfic into something that could be so real. Thanks for yet another great chapter.
Are you going to bring shane into the storyline? Good Job.
Another fantastic story post soon please
Perfect chapter, once again, keep up the loving, no more tears.I like it when their happy. It makes me happy!!
Thank you for giving us that closure. You landed that ending just like a skilled pilot lands a Boeing 747.
I’m encouraged that B&T have added another friend to their circle. They need and deserve support. And love.
This chapter was beautifully written. Just one request MTS, if a shoe’s gonna drop, can ya wait till after the trip? Pretty please :)
Looking forward to an update soon!
I always love your stories. Gives me a warm and fuzzy feeling inside. :)
Peace and traquility and all is right with the world! Great chapter!
Hey MTS thank you what really matter is Bette and Tina together again I love it Whoa! I’m so really excited to read this their really sweet and so cute each other I’m really happy to reading it’s time that you posted again like this you put the Smile on my Face Thank you MTS you are Amazing Writer.
Perfect!! Hope one night melts into two, three….But, I know that once the reality of everyday life settles in, there will be more drama. I hope not before their week together. Thanks again for this beautiful story.
if only life were like that.. *sigh* i love love love love your writing. please don’t keep us waiting!
WOW!!!
Oy, Now THAT was AMAZING! More!
Finally, some happiness here! Haha, but I have a feeling becasue of the way you ended it the drama’s gonna rear it’s ugly head soon. Hahah, either way I still love your story! Please post again soon!
That was wonnderful as ALWAYS. Can’t wait for the next one.
love it to bits!!
MTS, great chapter. I enjoyed it immensely. I am so happy to see the gang forming and being themselves. Hopefully, Cancun will be good to B&T and there won’t be another dip in this rollercoaster ride until they get to Mexico!