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I Need You Here -10
Shane McCutcheon and Lara Perkins were having a late dinner of delivered Thai food, idly exchanging commentary on the reason they were in their friend’s house, why they were watching some bad now-canceled-but-somehow-syndicated sitcom, and why on earth their Alcohol Watch duty was more welcome than the pursuit of a social life when Bette Porter emerged from her bedroom, and instantly made a beeline for what was becoming her favorite place in the house: the liquor cabinet.
"Bette," Shane called out. "You want dinner? We have Thai."
Bette glanced at the two of them, seated on her living room couch. "It’s late."
"We thought you might like some company," Shane reasoned.
"Whatever." Bette muttered, then saw the fruit basket. "Where’d that come from?"
"Alice brought them for you," Lara informed her.
"Her concern kills me," Bette said sarcastically, before picking out a bottle of vodka. She was already wallowing in her misery anyway, why not drown her sorrows in some tasty beverages, right? She headed back to the direction of the bedroom. "And Tina’s the one who loves Thai food."
With that, Bette went back to her room, slamming the door behind her.
"Okay, I know I should’ve paid more attention to my Psych class," Lara blurted out. "But why is this so difficult?"
"Because it’s Bette and Tina," Shane said simply, as if it explained it all. "Bette’s used to just being the solid support system, and Tina be the one who openly shows her emotions. With Tina gone Bette has to be the one to let those feelings go, and if and when she breaks down, it’ll be worse than any of us expects."
Lara sighed. "I can’t believe their fight could be that horrible."
"When the love’s that deep? You’re gonna have to dig deeper to bring out that pain and anger."
Lara took that in, and grinned as she turned back to her stir-fry chicken noodle dish.
Shane noticed the smile. "What?"
"You really are Yoda, aren’t you?"
"With all this drama, somebody’s got to be." Shane grinned back. "So, what’s the deal with you and Dana?"
"That depends," Lara smiled at her. "What’s the deal with you and Carmen?"
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Thank you Tiff. It wasn’t “rough” at all so keep posting away as soon as you finish it.
So intens! Keep posting…
OMG! That was beautiful!
How do you make such sad content seem so very beautiful? Thank you so much for this chapter and a wonderful story. I hope this new Bette and Tina can make it through.
still really enjoying your story. thanks for posting another chapter.
Aww..that was so fvcking intense and sweet…im so glad Tina came back..poor Bette I wonder if she will open up even more to Tina.. Keep up the awesome story! Waiting for your next chapter ;)
That was intense, very well written.
Thank you.
That was so sad but great that Tina has come back. Bette is letting all her fears come out now.
This was not rough whatsoever. Please continue this.
Perceptive of Tina to recognise that her forgiving Bette is not Bette forgiving herself – and it’s not just the crack about loosing the baby. I don’t know if Bette will ever forgive herself. In reality somebody like Bette probably never could. Still this is fiction so maybe you can get Tina to work on her a bit;-)
OMG T I love you to death for this one. It hits so close to home with my father. It just knocked the breath out of me. If and when she breaks down, it’ll be worse than any of us expects.
Tina smiled lovingly. “Sometimes they come back.”
“Her sobs wracked her body, and she was just too weak to fight it. “They’re gone. They’re really gone. Daddy. Our little boy.”
Forgive me if I copy. I have a broken elbow/arm from falling off the house. Don’t ask…
Very nice — in a very intense and tough-to-read-since-it’s-so-good kind of way.
Gosh that chapter had me in tears, it was very well written and so intense
OMG that was the sadness chapter ever…but i LOVE IT…you never stop to surprise me i´m so glad Tina came back..Bette was about to do something that maybe was no returne…post real real soooonn;-)
Yes we all seem to fell hard when we do fall. This was a great chapter!!! I love this story
Thank you for giving Tina a heart and some compassion for Bette,in spite of what she said.
Will she stay or go?
Damn what an amazing chapter. This is so sad and feel sorry for Bette but glad that Tina is come back and take care of Bette. Hope they will go through with it. Post soon, thank you!
breathtaking!
bette finally broke down, great chapter! i believe that bette didn’t really mean it and i’m glad tina can put it aside and not hold it against her.
glad Tina make it back!great chapter,tiff. very well written.post soon!
Damn, you certainly know how to make me cry. Great chapter.
Finally. Everyone needs a shoulder to cry on and I am glad it was Tina’s. Loving it!!
All I can say is…wow! This was beauitfully intense and raw. Masterful piece of writing there Tiff. Please continue.
Great work Tiff. This chapter is a must read. Thank you. How could any care or look for grammer mistakes when the content in this chapter is so great. Update soon, these two needs to “really” talk and open up.
REALLY GREAT CHAPTER…PLEASE POST SOON…
okay i just caught up with all 10 chapters and i must say that this is one of the most emotional stories that i have read on this site….just like many of the commenters before me, this chapter brought me to tears. please post again soon, your story is amazing!
beautiful …i seriously had tears in my eyes …please keep writing .. thanks
Wow! You’ve done it again…Just blew me away! I’m so glad that Tina came and forgave her, and that Bette was able to be so open and broken, it’s the first step towards healing. Now with be looking for the hot monkey lovin’!
I can’t wait for the next posting. Your writing is wonderful. Almost cried myself.
This is such an emotional and touching story. Simply wonderful!
Just caught up with your story. It is amazing. You’ve done a wonderful job. This chapter had me in tears. Will be waiting for the next one.
I have to handle it to you, this chapter had me falling to pieces….poor Bette. Go Tina! She’s the bomb!
I am in love with this story!
absolutely amazing. wonderfully written and so appreciatively read. thanks for this.