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    I Need You Here -10

    Story written on May 14, 2005 by tiff_duke.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=53889
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    Bette the Great.

    Shane looked at her, trying to figure out the best answer to give to that one.

    Lara lifted an eyebrow as a smirk graced her features. "We’re pathetic."

    "Amen." Shane agreed. She glanced in the direction of the bedroom, and sighed. "What do you think? Can they fix this?"

    "Bette’s in a really bad place right now," Lara noted. "I don’t know what she needs to do first: deal with her father’s death, or fix things with Tina. Because those two things don’t seem to be mutually exclusive."

    "This is why I don’t do relationships," Shane muttered. "Too much emotional residue."

    "But there are advantages," Lara pointed out.

    "Like?"

    "You’re not alone." Lara answered. "To have a real connection with someone, to have a bond that survives so many things, that’s special."

    "Yeah, but look at Bette and Tina." Shane argued. "They hurt each other, Bette more than Tina, but how can two people who love each other so much hurt each other just as much?"

    Lara’s reply was pre-empted by a loud crash from the bedroom, prompting the duo to run to the bedroom. Shane opened the door, and they found Bette near the closet, the full length mirror that used to be on one of the doors broken, pieces and shards on the floor, victim to Bette’s now-bloodied fist. The bottle of vodka, so recently rescued from its storage location, was also broken, its pieces and contents also on the floor.

    "Bette, what happened?" Shane asked urgently.

    Bette looked at her, words failing her. Then she broke down crying.

    Lara touched Shane’s shoulder. "Stay with her. I’ll go get the first aid kit."

    "Okay," Shane nodded, and as Lara left, cautiously approached Bette. "Bette?"

    "They’re gone." Bette fell to her knees, risking injury with the many broken pieces of glass around her. "She’s gone. He’s gone. They’re all gone."

    "Who?" Shane inquired, wanting Bette to open up, as she moved closer to her friend.

    "Did I deserve her, Shane? Did I love her enough?" Bette asked, looking up at Shane. "Am I really like him? Did I really drive her away?"

    "Bette, take my hand." Shane ordered, holding out her hand.

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    4. How do you make such sad content seem so very beautiful? Thank you so much for this chapter and a wonderful story. I hope this new Bette and Tina can make it through.

    6. Aww..that was so fvcking intense and sweet…im so glad Tina came back..poor Bette I wonder if she will open up even more to Tina.. Keep up the awesome story! Waiting for your next chapter ;)

    8. That was so sad but great that Tina has come back. Bette is letting all her fears come out now.
      This was not rough whatsoever. Please continue this.

    9. Perceptive of Tina to recognise that her forgiving Bette is not Bette forgiving herself – and it’s not just the crack about loosing the baby. I don’t know if Bette will ever forgive herself. In reality somebody like Bette probably never could. Still this is fiction so maybe you can get Tina to work on her a bit;-)

    10. OMG T I love you to death for this one. It hits so close to home with my father. It just knocked the breath out of me. If and when she breaks down, it’ll be worse than any of us expects.

      Tina smiled lovingly. “Sometimes they come back.”

      “Her sobs wracked her body, and she was just too weak to fight it. “They’re gone. They’re really gone. Daddy. Our little boy.”
      Forgive me if I copy. I have a broken elbow/arm from falling off the house. Don’t ask…

    13. OMG that was the sadness chapter ever…but i LOVE IT…you never stop to surprise me i´m so glad Tina came back..Bette was about to do something that maybe was no returne…post real real soooonn;-)

    16. Damn what an amazing chapter. This is so sad and feel sorry for Bette but glad that Tina is come back and take care of Bette. Hope they will go through with it. Post soon, thank you!

    23. Great work Tiff. This chapter is a must read. Thank you. How could any care or look for grammer mistakes when the content in this chapter is so great. Update soon, these two needs to “really” talk and open up.

    25. okay i just caught up with all 10 chapters and i must say that this is one of the most emotional stories that i have read on this site….just like many of the commenters before me, this chapter brought me to tears. please post again soon, your story is amazing!

    27. Wow! You’ve done it again…Just blew me away! I’m so glad that Tina came and forgave her, and that Bette was able to be so open and broken, it’s the first step towards healing. Now with be looking for the hot monkey lovin’!

    30. Just caught up with your story. It is amazing. You’ve done a wonderful job. This chapter had me in tears. Will be waiting for the next one.

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