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FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter Twelve – part eleven
Bette had calm down and begged Tina not to cancel the party. Fixing the babys room up was so important to Bette. Being around all of their friends meant so much too. It was like she had been away for several months even though she never left. Her mind did. Now that she remember her friends, their love and her wife. She just had to have them around her today. Tina gave in and agreed to go ahead with the party. Maybe having everyone around would be a good thing. This morning had started out so loving and brought back so many loving feelings for her wife. Then Tina had to deal with the nightmare. The devil that would never die. Candace. Thank god she was in jail and they could enjoy some peace now.
Alice, Dana, Shane, Carmen, Jennifer, Whit and Stacey (Dr. Bruch) all started showing up around noon. Some started painting while others got set with wallpaper and boarders. Tina, Jennifer and Stacey (Dr. Bruch)were fixing the food in the kitchen.
Bette of course had to supervise even if she couldnt go into the room. She got Shane to open the windows and Bette was standing on a box outside the room watching.
Back in the kitchen Jennifer and Stacey (Dr. Bruch) noticed Tina seemed off or something. Everyone at the house was joking, laughing and just plain having fun today. Except Tina. She was so closed off. Jennifer couldnt help herself being the counselor that she is.
Jennifer: Tina something is wrong. What is it?
Tina: I’m just tired. Everythings ok.
Jennifer: Tina I’m sorry. You must have misunderstood me. Tina something IS wrong. What is it???
Tina should have known that of all people, Jennifer would be the one person she could not keep her face on with. Other than Bette, not many people could see through Tina.
Tina: Bette and I We uhh ummm. She made love to me this morning. Twice. We were in the shower the second time and I wanted to show her how much I loved her and wanted her. I mean we havent.. Not since her surgery really. Then the rape. We havent made love. When I was making love to her she had a flashback of Candace. I cant even make love to my wife without this devil of a ghost haunting us.
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(41 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
OH Gawd, Oh Gawd, Oh Gawd, Oh Gawd, OK, now breathe, In and out , in and out, TK will take care of tibette… Please hurry.
damn u write fast loving the story
OGMFG, what are you trying to do to us!!!
Please post soon, you are getting pretty good with the cliff hangers!!!
you are killing me!!! post soon!
wow and here we go again lol you’re killing us here! but im loving your story! post soon!
Blood?? oh shit, anyways I think It’s time to tell you why I love this story so much, and why I was about to write one of my own but you beat me to it. I thank you because I think I would have had a break down if I tried to write this story. I have a secert, that I want to tell you and who ever else reads these comments. Only my family know this- so when I was in my second year of college which was 2 1/2 yrs ago because I’m only 23. Anyways me and a friend were in a car accident, we were hit by a drunk driver, I was in a coma for 6 months and can’t remmeber anything after the age of 15. That is the very! short verison of it. When I moved to cali where I now live I have had to make up my life for people. I have heard stories and flashbacks, but there are huge holes in my life. I have tried so hard to forget and just live day by day. It’s working because not one of my friend knows about the accident. Anyways I’m rableing on and I don’t have time to tell the whole story because it a huge drama in itself, what has come from it has been hard to live with my parents have disowned for a couple of reason. Anyways I had my last head scan- fri so now I am 100% clear in the head and mind.
I am eagerly hanging on til the next chapter. You are good with the cliffhangers.
Oh no! Please let Bette be ok. I’m eagerly awaiting the return of Candace because I desperately want to see how she go out and was able to get into it with a married woman. This is a great story.
Damn CROO if you read comments. That was a very personal thing to share. I guess it is easier to share with those you don’t know, but I’m glad to see you are now “100% clear in the head and mind.”
OMG, nothing vn happen to her, please make her okey, post soon
Wow! ummm. ok update like now more coffee for the lady someone. we should set up a fund for great fic writters so they can quit their jobs and write for us all day long! yes we must get this going ummm paypal anyone? but wait then everyone would become writters damn ! there mus be another way to get uber updates in a short amount of time.
great!!!!
OMFG, what’s with the blood. Thank god you have the next chapter posted already. Must go read before I die!
Shit this is bad what’s happen to Bette now. Post soon, thanks!