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FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter Twelve – part eleven
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Tina was crying now. Jennifer walked over to Tina and put her arms around her embracing her. Allowing her to cry and get it all out. Stacey watched but kept fixing the food for the party.
Jennifer: Tina it hasnt been that long since the rape. Bette is going to have flashbacks like this. I’m sorry it happened your first time back being intimate, but it is not uncommon. It is actually a higher percentage that a victim will have flashbacks their first time being intimate after a rape.
Bette was outside the house looking in through the window. She saw Jennifer holding Tina in her arms closely. Tina was crying holding onto Jennifer. Bette didnt see Stacey standing there at all. Just her wife in the arms of another woman. A woman that was tall with long brown curly hair just like Bette use to have. Only this woman was healthy. She wasnt stupid with a dumb brain like Bette was. Thats all Bettes brain was able to take in. Bette stumbled back away from the window and walked around to the back of the house. Looking back into the babys room she saw that the gang were all done. They were just waiting for the fumes to get out so Bette and Tina could come in to see it.
Shane came out to find Bette and Whit went into the kitchen to get Tina, Jennifer and Stacey. They all met at the babys room. Shane motioned for Bette and Tina to go in and see what their loving family had done for them.
Alice: Well, there is one last thing to put up. The Mobile of Death Bette bought to hand over the babys crib.
Everyone turned a glared at Alice. What Alice said lowering her head. OK I’m sorry. Bette how bout you hang it Alice said.
Whit and Shane held the ladder for Bette as she climbed up to hang the Mobile from the hook. She almost had it. FLASH!!!! Bette closed her eyes as tight as she could. She saw Tina in her mind with Jennifer. Jennifer kissing Tina making love to her.
Bette stumbled back and lost her balance. The Mobile came crashing down on the floor into pieces.(hooray) Whit caught Bette in her arms before she fell.
Stacey ran over to Bette to make sure she was ok. Bette stood up and jerked away from Stacey.
Bette: I’m fine!!! I just lost my balance. You would too if you were a ***** GIMP!!!!
Tina: BETTE!
Bette stormed out of the room leaving everyone with their mouths on the floor. Tina apologized to everyone. I’m sorry. I dont know what got into her.
Shane got everyone to go on outside for the party. Beer and drinks are over here and the food will be ready in a little while Tina said.
Meanwhile Bette had locked herself in their master bath. She was leaning over the sink crying. God what has gotten into me? Jennifer is our friend. She would never do anything to hurt me. Bette reached for a bath cloth and ran cold water over it. Placing it over her face to cool herself. Her eyes were burning from crying. She lowered the cloth to check her eyes. She didnt want anyone to know shed been crying. Looking back down to run some more cold water over the cloth she froze dead still.
Blood!
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OH Gawd, Oh Gawd, Oh Gawd, Oh Gawd, OK, now breathe, In and out , in and out, TK will take care of tibette… Please hurry.
damn u write fast loving the story
OGMFG, what are you trying to do to us!!!
Please post soon, you are getting pretty good with the cliff hangers!!!
you are killing me!!! post soon!
wow and here we go again lol you’re killing us here! but im loving your story! post soon!
Blood?? oh shit, anyways I think It’s time to tell you why I love this story so much, and why I was about to write one of my own but you beat me to it. I thank you because I think I would have had a break down if I tried to write this story. I have a secert, that I want to tell you and who ever else reads these comments. Only my family know this- so when I was in my second year of college which was 2 1/2 yrs ago because I’m only 23. Anyways me and a friend were in a car accident, we were hit by a drunk driver, I was in a coma for 6 months and can’t remmeber anything after the age of 15. That is the very! short verison of it. When I moved to cali where I now live I have had to make up my life for people. I have heard stories and flashbacks, but there are huge holes in my life. I have tried so hard to forget and just live day by day. It’s working because not one of my friend knows about the accident. Anyways I’m rableing on and I don’t have time to tell the whole story because it a huge drama in itself, what has come from it has been hard to live with my parents have disowned for a couple of reason. Anyways I had my last head scan- fri so now I am 100% clear in the head and mind.
I am eagerly hanging on til the next chapter. You are good with the cliffhangers.
Oh no! Please let Bette be ok. I’m eagerly awaiting the return of Candace because I desperately want to see how she go out and was able to get into it with a married woman. This is a great story.
Damn CROO if you read comments. That was a very personal thing to share. I guess it is easier to share with those you don’t know, but I’m glad to see you are now “100% clear in the head and mind.”
OMG, nothing vn happen to her, please make her okey, post soon
Wow! ummm. ok update like now more coffee for the lady someone. we should set up a fund for great fic writters so they can quit their jobs and write for us all day long! yes we must get this going ummm paypal anyone? but wait then everyone would become writters damn ! there mus be another way to get uber updates in a short amount of time.
great!!!!
OMFG, what’s with the blood. Thank god you have the next chapter posted already. Must go read before I die!
Shit this is bad what’s happen to Bette now. Post soon, thanks!