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Revisionist History Chapter 10
Tina brushed her teeth, pondering her luck that Melvin had been so positive about what was happening with her career. Bette changed into a tank top and pyjama bottoms, thankful neither one of them was going to bed angry.
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Bette awoke first the next morning. The dim light of dawn was only just starting to fill their bedroom. The sheet tangled around Tinas body, and was all that covered her as she continued her rhythmic breathing, an indication that she was still deep in sleep.
Bette considered what had transpired the previous day; the emotional roller coaster they had been on from their early morning confrontation about what Tina should wear out that evening, to the end of the meal and Bettes discovery of Tinas lie. She quietly got up, careful not to disturb Tinas sleep, and removed what she had worn to bed before pulling part of the sheet back over herself as she crawled up behind Tina.
She began kissing where Tinas neck met her shoulder, while lightly trailing her hand over Tinas back. She began with her entire hand resting flat just above the dimples on Tinas low back, aware of the heat coming from her body as she slept, always the reason Tina referenced for sleeping nude. Bette lifted the palm of her hand and made contact only with her fingertips as she moved up Tinas body, continuing the tender assault on Tinas shoulder with her mouth. She could sense that Tina was becoming more aware, but not on any conscious level. Rather, the shift in Tinas breathing signalled that Bette was making her presence known.
After Bettes hand reached Tinas shoulder, she ran it down the side of Tinas arm, and pulled herself closer, so close that nothing could come between them. She gently moved her tongue from Tinas shoulder to behind her ear and started moving her body against Tinas as she reached around to hold her wifes body into her own. She felt Tina start to move against her as she became more aware.
Tina reached back to let her hand glide up Bettes thigh and over her hip as their movement against each other continued.
I thought youd still be mad at me, Tina asked through the haze of just abandoned sleep.
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(39 votes, average: 4.77 out of 5)
Now why couldn’t this be the way it happened in the show? Sometimes too much drama is not a good thing. Keep up the good work!
WOW!
your love scenes are perfectly fine, believe me. great chapter. loved it.
Quite nice. I think I’m ready for a cigarette, but I don’t smoke.
What? Abandon the love scenes? I, for one, thrive on them. I know, get a life, right? Keep up the great writing.
awesome- wouldn’t change a thing!
I like the way you combined the attempt to resolve the dispute with a love scene, although in a way, I’d have liked more of the discussion combined with the teasing. Personally, I love the amount of detail you put in the love scenes – some are very graphic, and frankly over-long. I think you have it about right. Nicely written.
This was a fun love scene.
damn! i need a drink
oh my goodness. Note to self: need new batteries.. roflmao. J/K. That was AWESOME..
Know what you mean about creating these scenes – it’s a fine balance and it’s hard to know whether you’ve achieved it or not. This worked perfectly – just right. Thanks.
Make mine a Marlboro along with a shot of Johnnie Walker Blue Label on the rocks.
And I neither smoke nor drink…
K
That was so good and hot. Love this.
Broke out in a light sweat while reading this one. Excellent work.
That was really amazing! I’m just so impressed with the whole working
-out-differences-while-making-love thing!! Thanks.
while making loveTHanks…
f*ck, that was amazing.
Feel free to let them communicate like this anytime! HOT!!!
looked like you were very comfortable..loved it… i too wished the show would have went in this direction… please continue