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Revisionist History Chapter 10
Tina reached back and positioned her hand to retrieve evidence of Bettes arousal. She then withdrew her fingertips and brought them to her mouth before she spoke.
God you taste so good, Bette, she said as she licked and sucked her fingers clean.
Bette moaned into Tinas neck as she felt her hand between her legs and then watched her subsequent actions. Bettes eyes grew wide as she witnessed Tinas mouth work on her own fingers. Tina took a moment to refocus on Bettes question, having temporarily satiated her need to taste of Bettes desire.
I was concerned with how youd react, Tina reached back to run her tongue inside Bettes upper lip, then continued, because we had decided that I would stay home until well after the baby was born
And what changed to make you want to return to work already? Bette asked. She was now methodically running her fingers from Tinas thigh to her breast, moving in circles, varying the pressure with which she made contact, but constantly pulling her closer.
Tina reached back once again, between Bettes legs, but Bette was too quick this time and stopped her from making any contact. She grabbed Tinas wrist, with a firm but gentle grip and redirected her down between Tinas legs, allowing her to touch herself, but only briefly, as she felt the movement of Tinas hips increase. She then drew Tinas hand to her mouth and alternately licked at her fingers and at Tinas mouth, savouring the taste, the scent, the essence of her.
Let me touch you, Tinas voice quavered as she spoke.
Just answer the question first, then Ill let you touch me, Bette replied, keeping a steady tone on her voice, if not her emotions.
I want to make you come with my mouth, Tina whispered as Bette licked the last of Tinas juices from her fingertips. This time when Tina reached back, Bette didnt stop her. They began moving with more determination, both anticipating each others next move.
Their hands lost contact with each other only temporarily as Bette rolled onto her back and Tina made her way on top of her, finally able to contact her body the way Bette had been touching her that morning. Tina rested her body lightly on Bettes as they kissed hungrily, then broke away to move down, sucking insistently on both her nipples before continuing south. She left a trail of dampness from her mouth on Bettes torso, and eagerly anticipated the taste that awaited her.
Bettes reaction as Tina reached her destination was exactly what she hoped for, as she filled her with her fingers and tasted with her lips and tongue.
Oh my ***** God Bette whimpered as Tinas mouth made contact with her sensitive flesh. Bettes hands ran through Tinas hair as her arousal heightened, already threatening to explode. I want you up here with me, Bette was almost begging as she spoke.
Tina complied with Bettes request. She moved up beside Bette, replacing her mouth with her hand in an effort to continue Bettes journey to ecstasy. They stared into each others eyes as they both progressed toward their mutual destination, only breaking eye contact when they could no longer resist a deeply passionate kiss. A light sheen of perspiration covered them both as their hands continued to move in rhythm inside and over the flesh of the other.
I love the way you touch me, Bette, Tina said as their movements quickened, neither one quite sure who was setting the pace.
I love you so much, Tee, Bette could feel her climax peaking inside her.
They rocked together for a few more seconds before their passion exploded together. Both could feel the others body contract with the gentle jolts of mutual satisfaction as their mouths came together in another gentle kiss, signalling the denouement of the mornings interaction.
Their bodies stilled, their needs fulfilled, they rested in a warm embrace as the suns rays flickered through the cracks between the curtains in the room they shared, in the house that was their home, as they strove to build their family.
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(39 votes, average: 4.77 out of 5)
Now why couldn’t this be the way it happened in the show? Sometimes too much drama is not a good thing. Keep up the good work!
WOW!
your love scenes are perfectly fine, believe me. great chapter. loved it.
Quite nice. I think I’m ready for a cigarette, but I don’t smoke.
What? Abandon the love scenes? I, for one, thrive on them. I know, get a life, right? Keep up the great writing.
awesome- wouldn’t change a thing!
I like the way you combined the attempt to resolve the dispute with a love scene, although in a way, I’d have liked more of the discussion combined with the teasing. Personally, I love the amount of detail you put in the love scenes – some are very graphic, and frankly over-long. I think you have it about right. Nicely written.
This was a fun love scene.
damn! i need a drink
oh my goodness. Note to self: need new batteries.. roflmao. J/K. That was AWESOME..
Know what you mean about creating these scenes – it’s a fine balance and it’s hard to know whether you’ve achieved it or not. This worked perfectly – just right. Thanks.
Make mine a Marlboro along with a shot of Johnnie Walker Blue Label on the rocks.
And I neither smoke nor drink…
K
That was so good and hot. Love this.
Broke out in a light sweat while reading this one. Excellent work.
That was really amazing! I’m just so impressed with the whole working
-out-differences-while-making-love thing!! Thanks.
while making loveTHanks…
f*ck, that was amazing.
Feel free to let them communicate like this anytime! HOT!!!
looked like you were very comfortable..loved it… i too wished the show would have went in this direction… please continue