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Revisionist History Chapter 10
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Just because Im mad at you doesnt mean I dont love you, desire you, aspire to pleasure you Bette said between kisses. Her hand moved up to Tinas breast, where she merely held one in her palm and fingertips as she moved. Her tongue moved from behind Tinas ear to her jaw line, alternating between kissing and lightly licking at the soft skin of her face. She willed Tina to turn her head.
So you dont want to talk about yesterday? Tina was always so set on achieving resolution that Bette decided to throw a bit of it into their morning interlude.
We can talk about it right now if youd like, Bette suggested as she kissed the corner of Tinas mouth. She lightly pinched Tinas nipple between her index finger and thumb, as if providing an exclamation point to the offer of conflict resolution.
Right now? Tinas body was on fire, and she was not really inclined to discuss what had been a point of contention for them just the previous evening when she was in such a state.
Oh Im not going to stop making love to you while we talk about it, Bette offered as she drew Tina into a deep soul searching kiss. She broke away and continued. Almost feels like I could have the upper hand here
So to speak Tina quipped. Bette rolled Tinas nipple between her finger and thumb then released it to run her fingertips between Tinas ***** toward her stomach.
Bette smiled at the fact Tina recognized her control in this situation, but was also wondering if she herself would be able to speak with any coherence the further along this path they travelled.
Why didnt you feel you could talk to me about returning to work? Bette asked as her hand moved lower onto Tinas abdomen. She then detoured to avoid contacting any area that would provide Tina any satisfaction and instead made her way to traverse her upper thigh. They had found a definite rhythm against each other by now and Bette could feel the passion inside her start to manifest itself. Her rate of breathing increased as she tried to maintain control of the speed with which she touched her lover.
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Now why couldn’t this be the way it happened in the show? Sometimes too much drama is not a good thing. Keep up the good work!
WOW!
your love scenes are perfectly fine, believe me. great chapter. loved it.
Quite nice. I think I’m ready for a cigarette, but I don’t smoke.
What? Abandon the love scenes? I, for one, thrive on them. I know, get a life, right? Keep up the great writing.
awesome- wouldn’t change a thing!
I like the way you combined the attempt to resolve the dispute with a love scene, although in a way, I’d have liked more of the discussion combined with the teasing. Personally, I love the amount of detail you put in the love scenes – some are very graphic, and frankly over-long. I think you have it about right. Nicely written.
This was a fun love scene.
damn! i need a drink
oh my goodness. Note to self: need new batteries.. roflmao. J/K. That was AWESOME..
Know what you mean about creating these scenes – it’s a fine balance and it’s hard to know whether you’ve achieved it or not. This worked perfectly – just right. Thanks.
Make mine a Marlboro along with a shot of Johnnie Walker Blue Label on the rocks.
And I neither smoke nor drink…
K
That was so good and hot. Love this.
Broke out in a light sweat while reading this one. Excellent work.
That was really amazing! I’m just so impressed with the whole working
-out-differences-while-making-love thing!! Thanks.
while making loveTHanks…
f*ck, that was amazing.
Feel free to let them communicate like this anytime! HOT!!!
looked like you were very comfortable..loved it… i too wished the show would have went in this direction… please continue