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    You break it, you replace it – Chapter 52

    Story written on June 13, 2005 by HackGirl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=54717
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    Happliy Ever After

    The ocean ceaselessly crashing against the jagged shore beckoned Bette from their bed while Tina slept soundly.

     

    Slipping on a robe she wandered barefoot out onto the deck and admired the view. There was nothing but the clear night sky and ocean.

     

    Sea spay hung in the air as Bette drew a deep breath and sighed contentedly. The evening had been wonderful. Their dinner was everything Bette had hoped it would be and was followed by love making so tender that it moved her to tears of joy.

     

    She was at ease here. It was as if they were the only two people on earth and she cherished the feeling.

     

    Cant sleep? Tina asked quietly as she reached Bettes side.

     

    Did I wake you? Bette replied, surprised by Tinas presence.

     

    No

     

    Bette draped her arm across Tinas shoulders and Tina instinctively moved into Bettes body as they embraced.

     

    What are you doing up? Tina asked.

     

    I was just awake Bette replied as she closed her eyes and enjoyed the sensation of Tinas body resting against her own.

     

    I love being here with you Tina said quietly as she nestled into the curve of her partners neck.

     

    Bette smiled as she heard Tina vocalize what she was thinking herself. They were finally attuned to each others feelings, thoughts and desires once more.

     

    Bette felt Tina shiver in her arms.

     

    You cold?

     

    A little, yeah Tina admitted

     

    Cmon Bette offered Tina her hand and led the way back to bed.

     

    You know the first time we met? Bette asked as Tina lay nestled in her arms under the warmth of the comforter.

     

    Uh-huh Tina yawned in reply.

     

    Did you know then? Bette questioned.

     

    Know what Tina smiled, she knew that Bette was half way though a conversation in her own mind and she had some catching up to do.

     

    That I wasthat we wouldbe a long term thing

     

    No Tina confessed That night I knew that I wanted to see you again. But I didnt think for a second that I might be falling in love.

     

    That would have been a bit too much to ask, I guess Bette smiled as she kissed the top of Tinas head.

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    4. What a wonderful journey. You certainly kept things interesting and kept me wondering at one point which way our girls were going to go. I am so glad that it worked out in the end. I am really sorry to see it end though. Hoping that you will grace us with another story in the future.

    5. Hackgirl-Thank-You for this beautiful and well-written story.Hackgirl you told the story they way I.C should have told it.My heart is fill with joy right now.Friday i will reread the whole story again.Thanks again for this true to life story.

    6. Thankyou so much for keeping me entertained with your wonderful story. Here’s hoping you get the FFTs (fanfiction tremors) and need to write another.

    7. Really sorry to see this story end. What a great finish though – perfect. I do hope that we can read something else from you in due course. I’ll be checking for your name. Thanks for the wonderful ride, the old saying is true after all – it is better to journey than to arrive.

    8. Ditto!
      This has been great story, full of drama and heartbreak, but very compelling all the way through. You write the characters really well. Looking forward to reading more from you in the future.

    9. Thanks for the wonderful ride! Your chapters were always interesting, compelling & fun to read. Have a great summer and hope you come back with another story. Thanks again for sharing.

    11. High praise from beginning to ending. Thank you for every well chosen word, every finely crafted plot and every chapter as they all wowed, entertained and moved me.

    13. Absolutely superb. I’ve just read the whole thing in one sitting and now feel completely dizzy from the array of emotions I felt through all 52 chapters. From anger to bubbles of giddiness in the pit of my stomach. From sheer frustration to bittersweet, it was all wonderful and I very much hope you will continue to write more finely crafted stories.

    14. i also just read this story in one sitting. wow. i loved the depth, the care and insight you brought. hopefully you’ll do another one. you have a great gift. thanks again.

    16. Hello HackGirl :-) thanks for this amazing story!! :-D it’s a pleasure to read them! I hope you are still around and know that even after these years (7 years), your master piece is still appreciated and your words still make the readers emotion stirred! Thanks again for this wonderful piece!! :-)

    17. Hackgirl, I’m sorry to see your wonderfully conceived and written story end. Hopefully, you will be renewed and refreshed after your trip. Have a great time!!!

    18. Hack Girl–
      What an extraordinary journey you’ve taken us on, with twists and turns and so many layers woven seamlessly into a memorable, enjoyable story. It’s been such a pleasure to read your finely-crafted chapters, and I’m hoping that your inspiration continues to drive you to keep writing, whether for these characters or for others. Thank you for taking the time and doing the work necessary to offer us this story and to share your talents. You have given us fabulous gifts and your fans are deeply grateful.

    19. Thanks you, Hackgirl, for giving us such finely etched Bette and Tina. Your characterization and story helped me enjoy the actual TV show much better because I took your portrait of B&T into it. Thanks again, and please begin another story.

    20. I have loved this story from the start….I hope you will start another soon!
      BTW I love the new site but find I can now only post under my login name. I fromerly posted under Paula…thanks again!

    21. Thanks you for putting together such a mesmerizing story. You have such skill as a storyteller that I hope you will be back in the future delighting us all with a new story. Thanks for the telling

    23. Thanks much for the story. Sorry to see it ending, but I can see the point about it being at a good point.
      Feel free to share again when you get the urge.
      Thanks for the time and the writing.

    25. HackGirl, This story was such a pleasure to read. Thank you so much for taking the time to share your vision with us. I really hope you consider beginning another story upon your return from holidays. Have fun in LA, but make sure you get to the beach to breathe air that’s not quite so thick as in WeHo. Thanks again. JKS

    26. Hackgirl…i’m with the others…loved your story from the beginning…i hope you have another one cooking up in the wings… take care and come back soon

    27. HackGirl –
      Thank you so much for writing this immensely beautiful and engaging story on my favourite couple..B&TEE :D . This story has been one of my all time favourites :D . i have loved it from the start .
      Ur writing is so amazing that when i read , the words jump out of the screen and Bette and Tina come alive with all these Beautiful and Poignant emotions that u depict so well in ur stories and they no longer remain fictional characters but become as real as we their loyal fans :) . U have woven this story seamlessly into an extraordinary journey thro the beautiful love and life of TiBette and while doing so u have given me this amazing and memorable gift for which i am very grateful to you .
      I too , hope that ur inspiration continues to drive u to keep on writing in the future which would most definitely be appreciated by ur fans like me who will be eagerly looking forward to ur next contributions . :)
      I once again thank you for giving your time and energy for writing this wonderful story and for sharing ur talents with us . :D
      I hope to see another TiBette story from u soon :)).
      And have a fabulous time on ur trip !!!
      Thanx :D
      – from Anisha .

    28. Hack,
      “Thank you” seems such a paltry phase to express the genuine gratitude and appreciation felt for this story. As they say, “All good things must come to an end” and this is the sad day as this tale finishes.
      The characters and situations have lived and breathed throughout this journey. I am truly indebted to your ability and aptitude for manufacturing this master piece of fan fiction and for taking me along for the ride. Every twist and turn has been a delight and pleasure. There have been high points, which have more than balanced out the lows. Drama, suspense, angst, heartache and ecstasy, all measured out and mix together for this most satisfying of concoctions.
      I sincerely hope that you are inspired by the muse soon as your absence on this site will be sorely missed. I will keep an ever watchful eye for your next creation.
      Thank you,
      Your Loyal Fan.

    29. i love this such amazing story from the very beginning. YOu’ve brought us wonderful reading experiences..thx!You’ve ended this story beautifully..reallylove it. Pls do continue writing another story!you’re an extraordinary writer!!!

    30. I can’t tell you how wonderful this story has been. Thank you for sharing it with us. I just love your last line, “
      “Standing there watching you I just knew” Bette said “You’d stolen my heart in your sleep.”

    31. I don’t know what to say..but..Thank you Hackgirl..sooo much..This story has been an amazing journey..& lm honoured to have been able to share it with you & all the other TiBette lovers!! Come back soon..x

    33. A big enormous thank you HackGirl for giving us “You break it, you replace it.”
      It has been a pleasure to read and thanks you for sharing it with us, this line:-
      “Standing there watching you I just knew” Bette said “You’d stolen my heart in your sleep”
      What a line to end it with, pure magic!
      Thanks again.

    34. I’ve followed this story from the beginning and it has been a joy to read. I’m sorry to see it end but am thankful it ended on a positive note. I look forward to perhaps reading another story from you soon.

    35. I’ve read this for a while, and while it has had its ups and downs, you certainly know how to tell a story, and this was a good ending chapter.

    37. say it aint so…is that really it? you are one of those authors for me that i immediately look for and i hope that i will be seeing your name on another story very soon. thanks for this and whatever else you may bring us in the future. best wishes!

    38. Thank you for the beautiful story. Now sit back and enjoy the break but don’t relax for too long…I’m sure you have another story somewhere up that sleeve.

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