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    You break it, you replace it – Chapter 52

    Story written on June 13, 2005 by HackGirl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=54717
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    Happliy Ever After

     

    I walked into your gallery on the arm of my boyfriend. Never in a million years would I have guessed that things would turn out like this

     

    Tina felt Bettes body tense up, she turned around to face her wife.

     

    I didnt think it was possible to love someone this much Tina said quietly as she reached out and ran her finger along Bettes jaw.

     

    Tina stared intently at her wife and shook her head slightly.

     

    I thought I knew what love was Tina continued as Bette hung on her every word Then you came along and everything else paled in comparison

     

    Bette smiled as she took her partners hand and kissed it So, no regrets?

     

    No baby Tina looked at Bette intently No regrets

     

    Bettes heart swelled with love for the woman before her. The woman who loved and nurtured and forgave Bette all her failings.

     

    What about you? Tina asked Did you know that night?

     

    I knew I had to see you again Bette confessed.

     

    Oh really? Tina smiled

     

    Yes, really Bette replied I didnt know it then, but by nights end I was a goner and for a straight girl no less

     

    You could have had anyone

     

    You were the only one Bette assured.

     

    There had been other women that Bette had cared about deeply but looking back she knew it wasnt love, it wasnt this. They werent Tina.

     

    Bette had spent years crafting her professional image as the uncompromising gallery owner who appeared to never put a foot wrong. Some said she was blessed Bette knew she was nothing of the sort.

     

    Her events appeared to run effortlessly thanks to the fact that she worked tirelessly. It wasnt sheer luck that she exhibited the best new artists. She labored over her gallery with vigilance. In truth her career had been all consuming and exceptionally rewarding. Relationships came and went and that wasnt an issue because Bette was happily married to the job.

     

    Sure, there had been other women but sooner or later they came to resent her dedication to the gallery. It became sadly predictable, her latest flame would make a stand and it was always their last stand. Bette had no intention of jeopardizing all that she had worked for to keep someone else happy.

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    4. What a wonderful journey. You certainly kept things interesting and kept me wondering at one point which way our girls were going to go. I am so glad that it worked out in the end. I am really sorry to see it end though. Hoping that you will grace us with another story in the future.

    5. Hackgirl-Thank-You for this beautiful and well-written story.Hackgirl you told the story they way I.C should have told it.My heart is fill with joy right now.Friday i will reread the whole story again.Thanks again for this true to life story.

    6. Thankyou so much for keeping me entertained with your wonderful story. Here’s hoping you get the FFTs (fanfiction tremors) and need to write another.

    7. Really sorry to see this story end. What a great finish though – perfect. I do hope that we can read something else from you in due course. I’ll be checking for your name. Thanks for the wonderful ride, the old saying is true after all – it is better to journey than to arrive.

    8. Ditto!
      This has been great story, full of drama and heartbreak, but very compelling all the way through. You write the characters really well. Looking forward to reading more from you in the future.

    9. Thanks for the wonderful ride! Your chapters were always interesting, compelling & fun to read. Have a great summer and hope you come back with another story. Thanks again for sharing.

    11. High praise from beginning to ending. Thank you for every well chosen word, every finely crafted plot and every chapter as they all wowed, entertained and moved me.

    13. Absolutely superb. I’ve just read the whole thing in one sitting and now feel completely dizzy from the array of emotions I felt through all 52 chapters. From anger to bubbles of giddiness in the pit of my stomach. From sheer frustration to bittersweet, it was all wonderful and I very much hope you will continue to write more finely crafted stories.

    14. i also just read this story in one sitting. wow. i loved the depth, the care and insight you brought. hopefully you’ll do another one. you have a great gift. thanks again.

    16. Hello HackGirl :-) thanks for this amazing story!! :-D it’s a pleasure to read them! I hope you are still around and know that even after these years (7 years), your master piece is still appreciated and your words still make the readers emotion stirred! Thanks again for this wonderful piece!! :-)

    17. Hackgirl, I’m sorry to see your wonderfully conceived and written story end. Hopefully, you will be renewed and refreshed after your trip. Have a great time!!!

    18. Hack Girl–
      What an extraordinary journey you’ve taken us on, with twists and turns and so many layers woven seamlessly into a memorable, enjoyable story. It’s been such a pleasure to read your finely-crafted chapters, and I’m hoping that your inspiration continues to drive you to keep writing, whether for these characters or for others. Thank you for taking the time and doing the work necessary to offer us this story and to share your talents. You have given us fabulous gifts and your fans are deeply grateful.

    19. Thanks you, Hackgirl, for giving us such finely etched Bette and Tina. Your characterization and story helped me enjoy the actual TV show much better because I took your portrait of B&T into it. Thanks again, and please begin another story.

    20. I have loved this story from the start….I hope you will start another soon!
      BTW I love the new site but find I can now only post under my login name. I fromerly posted under Paula…thanks again!

    21. Thanks you for putting together such a mesmerizing story. You have such skill as a storyteller that I hope you will be back in the future delighting us all with a new story. Thanks for the telling

    23. Thanks much for the story. Sorry to see it ending, but I can see the point about it being at a good point.
      Feel free to share again when you get the urge.
      Thanks for the time and the writing.

    25. HackGirl, This story was such a pleasure to read. Thank you so much for taking the time to share your vision with us. I really hope you consider beginning another story upon your return from holidays. Have fun in LA, but make sure you get to the beach to breathe air that’s not quite so thick as in WeHo. Thanks again. JKS

    26. Hackgirl…i’m with the others…loved your story from the beginning…i hope you have another one cooking up in the wings… take care and come back soon

    27. HackGirl –
      Thank you so much for writing this immensely beautiful and engaging story on my favourite couple..B&TEE :D . This story has been one of my all time favourites :D . i have loved it from the start .
      Ur writing is so amazing that when i read , the words jump out of the screen and Bette and Tina come alive with all these Beautiful and Poignant emotions that u depict so well in ur stories and they no longer remain fictional characters but become as real as we their loyal fans :) . U have woven this story seamlessly into an extraordinary journey thro the beautiful love and life of TiBette and while doing so u have given me this amazing and memorable gift for which i am very grateful to you .
      I too , hope that ur inspiration continues to drive u to keep on writing in the future which would most definitely be appreciated by ur fans like me who will be eagerly looking forward to ur next contributions . :)
      I once again thank you for giving your time and energy for writing this wonderful story and for sharing ur talents with us . :D
      I hope to see another TiBette story from u soon :)).
      And have a fabulous time on ur trip !!!
      Thanx :D
      – from Anisha .

    28. Hack,
      “Thank you” seems such a paltry phase to express the genuine gratitude and appreciation felt for this story. As they say, “All good things must come to an end” and this is the sad day as this tale finishes.
      The characters and situations have lived and breathed throughout this journey. I am truly indebted to your ability and aptitude for manufacturing this master piece of fan fiction and for taking me along for the ride. Every twist and turn has been a delight and pleasure. There have been high points, which have more than balanced out the lows. Drama, suspense, angst, heartache and ecstasy, all measured out and mix together for this most satisfying of concoctions.
      I sincerely hope that you are inspired by the muse soon as your absence on this site will be sorely missed. I will keep an ever watchful eye for your next creation.
      Thank you,
      Your Loyal Fan.

    29. i love this such amazing story from the very beginning. YOu’ve brought us wonderful reading experiences..thx!You’ve ended this story beautifully..reallylove it. Pls do continue writing another story!you’re an extraordinary writer!!!

    30. I can’t tell you how wonderful this story has been. Thank you for sharing it with us. I just love your last line, “
      “Standing there watching you I just knew” Bette said “You’d stolen my heart in your sleep.”

    31. I don’t know what to say..but..Thank you Hackgirl..sooo much..This story has been an amazing journey..& lm honoured to have been able to share it with you & all the other TiBette lovers!! Come back soon..x

    33. A big enormous thank you HackGirl for giving us “You break it, you replace it.”
      It has been a pleasure to read and thanks you for sharing it with us, this line:-
      “Standing there watching you I just knew” Bette said “You’d stolen my heart in your sleep”
      What a line to end it with, pure magic!
      Thanks again.

    34. I’ve followed this story from the beginning and it has been a joy to read. I’m sorry to see it end but am thankful it ended on a positive note. I look forward to perhaps reading another story from you soon.

    35. I’ve read this for a while, and while it has had its ups and downs, you certainly know how to tell a story, and this was a good ending chapter.

    37. say it aint so…is that really it? you are one of those authors for me that i immediately look for and i hope that i will be seeing your name on another story very soon. thanks for this and whatever else you may bring us in the future. best wishes!

    38. Thank you for the beautiful story. Now sit back and enjoy the break but don’t relax for too long…I’m sure you have another story somewhere up that sleeve.

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