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You break it, you replace it – Chapter 52
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So when was it that you realized? Tina asked.
It was about two months in. You were in
We had plans and you called up and cancelled on me at like 5 that afternoon Tina nodded as she recalled And that was after Id flown all the way back for the weekend just to see you
I would have dumped me, if I were you
Good thing Im not you Tina smiled.
Standing in the doorway of the gallery Tina began to wonder if she hadnt made a mistake.
Tina, what are you doing here? Bette called.
Tina blushed Too late now she thought as she smiled apologetically at Bette.
She winced as a hint of irritation briefly crossed Bettes features. Tina held a plastic bag in one hand and a bottle of wine in the other. She could only watch as Bette closed the distance between them.
Bette leaned in and kissed her lightly, resting a hand on Tinas arm.
I wanted to see you Tina said quietly.
I wanted to see you too but I thought I explained Bette said a little frustrated Look at this place Bette waived an arm around the mess of boxes, frames, displays, the floor littered with various packing materials and other rubbish This opens in less than 48 hours
I…uh brought food Tina stammered, suddenly having decided that this may not have been the best idea Youve gotta eat Bette
I dont have time Bette replied tersely.
Tina bristled at the tone.
I havent seen you in a week and I fly back to Boston tomorrow Tina struggled to keep her tone even as she resisted the urge to lash out at her stressed and unappreciative girlfriend I picked up some Chinese from that place on Robertson. You are going to stop what youre doing for half an hour and were going to eat. After that Ill do whatever I can to help.
Bettes expression softened as she wrapped Tina in a tight embrace.
OK She whispered Thank-you
With good food and good company Bette quickly relaxed. Tina joined the crew and worked until her body begged for sleep. She slipped into Bettes office with the intention of taking a 20 minute nap on the sofa. That was where Bette found her exhausted girlfriend at
Kneeling down beside the sofa, Bette gently stroked Tinas cheek.
Tina, wake up Bette said softly.
Tina slowly opened her eyes, momentarily lost in the unfamiliar surroundings.
Bette She said groggily.
Were at the gallery, you fell asleep Bette explained, seeing the confused expression on Tinas face.
Im sorry, I just lay down for a couple of minutes Tina tried to explain.
Shh Baby, its OK Bette leaned in and kissed Tina on the forehead Why dont you stay with me tonight and well come back in the morning for your car?
Tina sat up and nodded.
If you dont mind
Bette just smiled. Mind? How could she mind? She was falling in love.
I walked in to my office and saw you curled up Bette smiled at the memory I thought you were the most precious thing Id ever seen, sleeping there amidst the chaos
How many of your dates fell asleep on you? Tina asked incredulously.
How many of my dates got cancelled on after flying across the country and still helped me prepare for an exhibition? Bette countered There was only ever one, T
So that was it, huh?
Standing there watching you I just knew Bette said Youd stolen my heart in your sleep
THE END
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This has been one of my favorites from the get go. Thank you for doing this. I hope you write another story some time down the road. Wizard
This story leaves such a good feeling in my heart! Thank you for your time and you sharing this story!
Prehaps another story?
*smiling*
Thank you. This story was wonderful and I hope in the next future, you’ll write another.
maybeyes
What a wonderful journey. You certainly kept things interesting and kept me wondering at one point which way our girls were going to go. I am so glad that it worked out in the end. I am really sorry to see it end though. Hoping that you will grace us with another story in the future.
Hackgirl-Thank-You for this beautiful and well-written story.Hackgirl you told the story they way I.C should have told it.My heart is fill with joy right now.Friday i will reread the whole story again.Thanks again for this true to life story.
Thankyou so much for keeping me entertained with your wonderful story. Here’s hoping you get the FFTs (fanfiction tremors) and need to write another.
Really sorry to see this story end. What a great finish though – perfect. I do hope that we can read something else from you in due course. I’ll be checking for your name. Thanks for the wonderful ride, the old saying is true after all – it is better to journey than to arrive.
Ditto!
This has been great story, full of drama and heartbreak, but very compelling all the way through. You write the characters really well. Looking forward to reading more from you in the future.
Thanks for the wonderful ride! Your chapters were always interesting, compelling & fun to read. Have a great summer and hope you come back with another story. Thanks again for sharing.
I loved this story Hack. I hope you write another if you have time and insperation.
Thanks for the story.
High praise from beginning to ending. Thank you for every well chosen word, every finely crafted plot and every chapter as they all wowed, entertained and moved me.
Thank you hack girl – it was a great story – hopefully we’ll see something new from you soon!
Absolutely superb. I’ve just read the whole thing in one sitting and now feel completely dizzy from the array of emotions I felt through all 52 chapters. From anger to bubbles of giddiness in the pit of my stomach. From sheer frustration to bittersweet, it was all wonderful and I very much hope you will continue to write more finely crafted stories.
i also just read this story in one sitting. wow. i loved the depth, the care and insight you brought. hopefully you’ll do another one. you have a great gift. thanks again.
Thanks for the journey of these two women, with all their flaws and all. I truly enjoyed the ride.
Hello HackGirl :-) thanks for this amazing story!! :-D it’s a pleasure to read them! I hope you are still around and know that even after these years (7 years), your master piece is still appreciated and your words still make the readers emotion stirred! Thanks again for this wonderful piece!! :-)
Hackgirl, I’m sorry to see your wonderfully conceived and written story end. Hopefully, you will be renewed and refreshed after your trip. Have a great time!!!
Hack Girl–
What an extraordinary journey you’ve taken us on, with twists and turns and so many layers woven seamlessly into a memorable, enjoyable story. It’s been such a pleasure to read your finely-crafted chapters, and I’m hoping that your inspiration continues to drive you to keep writing, whether for these characters or for others. Thank you for taking the time and doing the work necessary to offer us this story and to share your talents. You have given us fabulous gifts and your fans are deeply grateful.
Thanks you, Hackgirl, for giving us such finely etched Bette and Tina. Your characterization and story helped me enjoy the actual TV show much better because I took your portrait of B&T into it. Thanks again, and please begin another story.
I have loved this story from the start….I hope you will start another soon!
BTW I love the new site but find I can now only post under my login name. I fromerly posted under Paula…thanks again!
Thanks you for putting together such a mesmerizing story. You have such skill as a storyteller that I hope you will be back in the future delighting us all with a new story. Thanks for the telling
i’m sorry to see this story end. you’re a great writer. hopefully you’ll be back w/another in the future.
Thanks much for the story. Sorry to see it ending, but I can see the point about it being at a good point.
Feel free to share again when you get the urge.
Thanks for the time and the writing.
It has been an absolute pleasure reading this story. Thank you and I hope that you continue to write.
HackGirl, This story was such a pleasure to read. Thank you so much for taking the time to share your vision with us. I really hope you consider beginning another story upon your return from holidays. Have fun in LA, but make sure you get to the beach to breathe air that’s not quite so thick as in WeHo. Thanks again. JKS
Hackgirl…i’m with the others…loved your story from the beginning…i hope you have another one cooking up in the wings… take care and come back soon
HackGirl –
Thank you so much for writing this immensely beautiful and engaging story on my favourite couple..B&TEE :D . This story has been one of my all time favourites :D . i have loved it from the start .
Ur writing is so amazing that when i read , the words jump out of the screen and Bette and Tina come alive with all these Beautiful and Poignant emotions that u depict so well in ur stories and they no longer remain fictional characters but become as real as we their loyal fans :) . U have woven this story seamlessly into an extraordinary journey thro the beautiful love and life of TiBette and while doing so u have given me this amazing and memorable gift for which i am very grateful to you .
I too , hope that ur inspiration continues to drive u to keep on writing in the future which would most definitely be appreciated by ur fans like me who will be eagerly looking forward to ur next contributions . :)
I once again thank you for giving your time and energy for writing this wonderful story and for sharing ur talents with us . :D
I hope to see another TiBette story from u soon :)).
And have a fabulous time on ur trip !!!
Thanx :D
– from Anisha .
Hack,
“Thank you†seems such a paltry phase to express the genuine gratitude and appreciation felt for this story. As they say, “All good things must come to an end†and this is the sad day as this tale finishes.
The characters and situations have lived and breathed throughout this journey. I am truly indebted to your ability and aptitude for manufacturing this master piece of fan fiction and for taking me along for the ride. Every twist and turn has been a delight and pleasure. There have been high points, which have more than balanced out the lows. Drama, suspense, angst, heartache and ecstasy, all measured out and mix together for this most satisfying of concoctions.
I sincerely hope that you are inspired by the muse soon as your absence on this site will be sorely missed. I will keep an ever watchful eye for your next creation.
Thank you,
Your Loyal Fan.
i love this such amazing story from the very beginning. YOu’ve brought us wonderful reading experiences..thx!You’ve ended this story beautifully..reallylove it. Pls do continue writing another story!you’re an extraordinary writer!!!
I can’t tell you how wonderful this story has been. Thank you for sharing it with us. I just love your last line, “
“Standing there watching you I just knew†Bette said “You’d stolen my heart in your sleep.”
I don’t know what to say..but..Thank you Hackgirl..sooo much..This story has been an amazing journey..& lm honoured to have been able to share it with you & all the other TiBette lovers!! Come back soon..x
Thank you for a great story. It’s been a wonderful interlude.
A big enormous thank you HackGirl for giving us “You break it, you replace it.”
It has been a pleasure to read and thanks you for sharing it with us, this line:-
“Standing there watching you I just knew†Bette said “You’d stolen my heart in your sleepâ€
What a line to end it with, pure magic!
Thanks again.
I’ve followed this story from the beginning and it has been a joy to read. I’m sorry to see it end but am thankful it ended on a positive note. I look forward to perhaps reading another story from you soon.
I’ve read this for a while, and while it has had its ups and downs, you certainly know how to tell a story, and this was a good ending chapter.
K
That was a great ending to a wonderful story. Loved every chapter. I hope you start something new soon. Love it!
say it aint so…is that really it? you are one of those authors for me that i immediately look for and i hope that i will be seeing your name on another story very soon. thanks for this and whatever else you may bring us in the future. best wishes!
Thank you for the beautiful story. Now sit back and enjoy the break but don’t relax for too long…I’m sure you have another story somewhere up that sleeve.
I have truly enjoyed your story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I for one cannot wait for you next. Again thank you for the ride.
your story has been one of my favorites. Enjoy your trip.
what can i say that hasnt already been uttered.. hate to see the story go..but i hope u come up with a new idea..good luck and thanks for the excellent writing!!
instead THE END how about TBC???..lol..i hope see more of your stories..that was great as always..thanks