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    From Afar

    Story written on June 22, 2005 by Jwet.
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    Chapter 69 – Piercing the Shield

    Bette heard Tina pounding on the door.  The more she pounded the more Bette
    cried.  Finally Bette moved to the
    door.  As she leaned against the door she
    could feel the beating coming through the door each time Tinas fist hit the
    door.  With each beat Bette felt
    Tina.  As Tina banged on the door harder
    and harder Bette stood paralyzed to with her body absorbing all the energy
    coming through the door.  She feels each
    hammering on the door in her chest.  I
    cant Tina I cant! Bette cried.

    Finally Tina cried Bettes name Bette Please! I need to talk
    to you Please!

    Tinas cry registered in Bettes brain.  The angst and anger both blended to put
    forcefulness and demanding tone to Tinas cry. 
    After a few more pounds it became quiet as Tina once again cried out
    Bette Please!

     

     

     

      Chapter 69 – Piercing
    the Shield

    Alice
    looked around after Tina hurried out. 
    The bodyguard still planted firmly in front of Alices path to the Reverend Pillary as he
    himself was making his way out of the hall. 
    As Alice
    looked on she felt that avenue was effectively closed off for the evening she
    might as well try another.  Glancing
    around her, Alice
    spotted Jackie talking to Grace as they each stood in front of the photographer
    as he went through all his motions of getting shots of all the winners.

    Alice
    makes up her mind right there that since Jackie had made her revealing comments
    she might as well call her on it.  After
    all what kind of investigational journalist would she be if she let something
    like that slide anyway?  With that Alice sauntered over to
    Jackie and Grace.

    Grace, travel safe and I will try to catch up with you in Chicago.  Be sure to send me the pig roast info and I
    will try my hardest to make it.  It all
    depends on how fast Tina comes up to speed here and how quickly I can transfer
    responsibilities to her. Jackie says to Grace as she pulls her in for a hug
    goodbye. 

    Well if my experience with Tina is a marker to measure by
    the transition from you to her should go smoothly and quickly.  I will email you. Grace replies.

    Grace pulls back and gives Jackies arm one last squeeze as
    she turns to leave but runs into Alice.  Alice Uh
    its been a pleasure knowing you if you ever get to Chicago look me up.   Startled, Grace says recovering quickly.

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    1. Jwet,
      How could you leave me hanging like this?
      Bette is completely wrapped up in her own observations and mindset and doubts. She is building the walls around her fortress as a mean of protecting her heart. This may prevent anyone getting in but it also stops you from getting out too. Unfortunately in life there are always at lest versions of the truth: Mine, yours and the absolute objective truth.
      Tina need to find that lose brick and gently tug in out. Then the walls will come tumbling down and Bette will have to face reality. Good things and bad things happen to all of us. The only thing we can truly control is how we face and deal with them.
      I do like the way you have let Bette slip into her bad habits of old. I am never convinced of a complete 180 deg turn about in a person. This keeps the dram quotient high and realistic.
      Hats off to you for the courage of making things difficult between these characters. I do trust that you have a purpose for this direction and will be watching to see what happens next.
      Queries include:
      Can Alice find truffles with that nose of hers? Does she spoil the Easter egg hunt using it? Has Tina been a police officer in a previous incarnation with shoulders of steel? Is Tina related to Superman? Has Bette gone deaf, dumb and blind? Does Tina have her JCB license as I think she will need it to knock down those walls?
      Why do you always get a bit of apple stuck between your teeth, which takes all day to remove after plenty of sucking sounds?
      Can’t wait for tomorrow’s installment: Tina Fights On!!
      Your Loyal Fan

    2. Was that only 2 pages? I think your chapters have to be 10 pages or more! The drama….I like seeing this Tina! Go Tina, Go Tina.

      Thanks, Jwet. I like your verison much more! Can’t wait for the next chapter.

    3. Good Lord ! Sort them out Jwet ! People are so stuborn in the face of love, one wonders why, life is so short ! Thank you – it is always a pleasure.

    6. j j j wet wet wet (hoping you are hearing the horror that is Betty). you are killing me. you best be posting one mighty quickly. at some point bette has got to get her fire back. not overwhelming kind of fire but enough to give her the strength she needs to just accept that its good and gonna get better for them, right? tina i belive must be smart enough to “hear” what bette is saying. she needs her to just say it loud and clear. oh the drama.

    9. What did the Foundation ever do to Alice that she is so hell bent on bringing it down by exposing the founder that has made it clear they want to remain anonymous? There is investigative reporting and there is nosy and insensitive…Alice has crossed the line towards the latter. I hope whatever ‘funny’ you have planned for her includes either her inability to type or laryngitis – preferrably, both.

      Well, what do you know…I looked up the definition of stubborn and low and behold there was a picture of Bette next to it!! Tina may be getting a spine, but she also needs to get a clue as well. Hurt trumps common sense everytime.

      “Alex, I’ll take ‘What do Bette and Tina need to do to get back on track’ for $500″…and the answer is…communication and trust!

      Please continue…just be careful with our TiBette hearts.

    12. WOW, tina’s grew some kahunas!!!! love the story. hope you post tomorrow. i am leaving for vacation tomorrow night. six days with my girl and NO computer, bummer. she is trilled!!! i have turned into such the addict with all of this wonderful writing. i love it though.

    15. Oh that darned rollercoaster, *breath, breath, ok its working, deep breath…right* Bette needs to become vulnerable at this very moment, forget super cool, super sexy (just for a split second) she needs to be super vulnerable and super honest, then she’ll become oh so super sexy and super cool once again. Tina, open your F**kin eyes, this woman in front of you is hurting like hell – see it, believe it and for god sake do something about it! Tell her you love her goddamit!!! *breath out…..ah……its now off the ample chest*

    23. i dont even know what to say..but i think Tina is right WTF is going on with Bette why she act like a coward??? she said that she has fear to lose Tina and Anna but the way she is going that will gonna happen… but i always have faith on her and i hope Tina as well amazing chapter youre the best ;0)

    24. No, no, nooo. This is not how it’s supposed to unravel. Why are you doing this to me? Have I offended thee? Please, don’t bring the old Bette back. UUUgh! Sometimes I wish I could just write myself into your story, walk up to Bette and shake her! Why is she still so affraid of being vulnerable to Tina? There has to be some other deep seated issue to keep her from not trusting Tina…that’s my only logic for it. Well hope you post soon.

    25. i remember someone saying to me once in a comment (i think that it was Amanda) “why are you reading this? you should be off writing another chapter.” as i now realize the value of her instruction, i will offer the same to you. get back to it!

    27. Ooo… I love it, it’s like a race… who is gonna find out first Tina or Alice… And that last comment was perfect, my ex would do the exact same thing to get me to stop acting like a 5 year old.

    28. oh man!!!! down the road!!! I already put my seat on!!!!! here we go!!! can’t ait. I’m off now… at least fo a few days… Jwet just to make sure you know: you’re amazing! bye drama’s queen

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