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    From Afar

    Story written on June 22, 2005 by Jwet.
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    Chapter 69 – Piercing the Shield

    Alice
    now realizes she has overheard something more significant.  Humm. 
    Grace likewise.  I hope you have
    a safe trip.  I know that Tina had so
    much fun working with you.  I wanted to
    just catch up with Jackie myself before I left for the evening. Alice says as she is
    trying to be casual implying she was just making her way over to say goodbye.

    Alice
    I think that Tina has already left. 
    Did you get everything you needed? Jackie now is trying to assure that Alice has everything she
    needs since Tina is gone.

    Well now that you mention it.  I was wondering about your little speech
    tonight.  So there is one donor who
    started the foundation and you have in fact met said donor in the process of
    setting up this foundation.  Is that what
    I am to take away from your talk? Alice
    asks innocently.

    When Grace heard this question she knew that she needed to
    stand by her friend until Alice
    was gone.  Stepping forward once again
    into the conversation, Grace wanted to show her support for Jackie.  Actually that is all there is to it as I
    understand it, right Jackie?

    Jackie just stood there wishing that Grace had not said a
    word.  This Alice was just a thorn in her side from the
    moment she first met her.  She always was
    in the wrong place at the right time. 
    Yep that is pretty much it.  I
    really cant say anymore on the subject as Im under contract and would not
    like to violate any of its terms. Jackie hopes that sharing this tidbit would
    put an end to any further questions from Alice.

    Well if that is all there is then I will just have to
    believe you. Alice
    says as she now knows that there has to be a paper trail somewhere.  If nothing else Alice knew she was good at digging up paper
    trials.  With that she made to leave as
    she couldnt wait to get home and log on to begin.  But he must be one ***** of a person. As she
    couldnt resist one last shot. 

    Yeah they sure are. Jackie says with a dead pan
    expression.

    Well I was good to meet you Grace and Jackie if anything
    comes up that you can share with me, well you know how to get me. Alice says as she turns to
    leave the hall, her mind racing, she now had a few trails to run down as she
    just knew there was more to find out.

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    1. Jwet,
      How could you leave me hanging like this?
      Bette is completely wrapped up in her own observations and mindset and doubts. She is building the walls around her fortress as a mean of protecting her heart. This may prevent anyone getting in but it also stops you from getting out too. Unfortunately in life there are always at lest versions of the truth: Mine, yours and the absolute objective truth.
      Tina need to find that lose brick and gently tug in out. Then the walls will come tumbling down and Bette will have to face reality. Good things and bad things happen to all of us. The only thing we can truly control is how we face and deal with them.
      I do like the way you have let Bette slip into her bad habits of old. I am never convinced of a complete 180 deg turn about in a person. This keeps the dram quotient high and realistic.
      Hats off to you for the courage of making things difficult between these characters. I do trust that you have a purpose for this direction and will be watching to see what happens next.
      Queries include:
      Can Alice find truffles with that nose of hers? Does she spoil the Easter egg hunt using it? Has Tina been a police officer in a previous incarnation with shoulders of steel? Is Tina related to Superman? Has Bette gone deaf, dumb and blind? Does Tina have her JCB license as I think she will need it to knock down those walls?
      Why do you always get a bit of apple stuck between your teeth, which takes all day to remove after plenty of sucking sounds?
      Can’t wait for tomorrow’s installment: Tina Fights On!!
      Your Loyal Fan

    2. Was that only 2 pages? I think your chapters have to be 10 pages or more! The drama….I like seeing this Tina! Go Tina, Go Tina.

      Thanks, Jwet. I like your verison much more! Can’t wait for the next chapter.

    3. Good Lord ! Sort them out Jwet ! People are so stuborn in the face of love, one wonders why, life is so short ! Thank you – it is always a pleasure.

    6. j j j wet wet wet (hoping you are hearing the horror that is Betty). you are killing me. you best be posting one mighty quickly. at some point bette has got to get her fire back. not overwhelming kind of fire but enough to give her the strength she needs to just accept that its good and gonna get better for them, right? tina i belive must be smart enough to “hear” what bette is saying. she needs her to just say it loud and clear. oh the drama.

    9. What did the Foundation ever do to Alice that she is so hell bent on bringing it down by exposing the founder that has made it clear they want to remain anonymous? There is investigative reporting and there is nosy and insensitive…Alice has crossed the line towards the latter. I hope whatever ‘funny’ you have planned for her includes either her inability to type or laryngitis – preferrably, both.

      Well, what do you know…I looked up the definition of stubborn and low and behold there was a picture of Bette next to it!! Tina may be getting a spine, but she also needs to get a clue as well. Hurt trumps common sense everytime.

      “Alex, I’ll take ‘What do Bette and Tina need to do to get back on track’ for $500″…and the answer is…communication and trust!

      Please continue…just be careful with our TiBette hearts.

    12. WOW, tina’s grew some kahunas!!!! love the story. hope you post tomorrow. i am leaving for vacation tomorrow night. six days with my girl and NO computer, bummer. she is trilled!!! i have turned into such the addict with all of this wonderful writing. i love it though.

    15. Oh that darned rollercoaster, *breath, breath, ok its working, deep breath…right* Bette needs to become vulnerable at this very moment, forget super cool, super sexy (just for a split second) she needs to be super vulnerable and super honest, then she’ll become oh so super sexy and super cool once again. Tina, open your F**kin eyes, this woman in front of you is hurting like hell – see it, believe it and for god sake do something about it! Tell her you love her goddamit!!! *breath out…..ah……its now off the ample chest*

    23. i dont even know what to say..but i think Tina is right WTF is going on with Bette why she act like a coward??? she said that she has fear to lose Tina and Anna but the way she is going that will gonna happen… but i always have faith on her and i hope Tina as well amazing chapter youre the best ;0)

    24. No, no, nooo. This is not how it’s supposed to unravel. Why are you doing this to me? Have I offended thee? Please, don’t bring the old Bette back. UUUgh! Sometimes I wish I could just write myself into your story, walk up to Bette and shake her! Why is she still so affraid of being vulnerable to Tina? There has to be some other deep seated issue to keep her from not trusting Tina…that’s my only logic for it. Well hope you post soon.

    25. i remember someone saying to me once in a comment (i think that it was Amanda) “why are you reading this? you should be off writing another chapter.” as i now realize the value of her instruction, i will offer the same to you. get back to it!

    27. Ooo… I love it, it’s like a race… who is gonna find out first Tina or Alice… And that last comment was perfect, my ex would do the exact same thing to get me to stop acting like a 5 year old.

    28. oh man!!!! down the road!!! I already put my seat on!!!!! here we go!!! can’t ait. I’m off now… at least fo a few days… Jwet just to make sure you know: you’re amazing! bye drama’s queen

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