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    From Afar

    Story written on June 22, 2005 by Jwet.
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    Chapter 69 – Piercing the Shield

     

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    At the sound of Tina begging Bette to open the door Bette
    felt her body slide down the door as so much of her didnt want to open the
    door and face the end while the other part of her couldnt deal with the sound
    of Tinas begging voice.

    Please Bette let me in. 
    I dont know what happened but I know we can fix this.  Just let me in Pleassssssee? Tina now cried
    in a softer almost defeated whimper.

    This was Bette undoing. 
    She couldnt fight Tina as the sound of Tinas voice pierced her
    resolve.  Slowly standing up Bette
    unlocked the two locks on the door and slowly twisted the door ***** as she only
    opened the door a crack.  Tina had heard
    the locks turning with their familiar click and as Bette became to slowly open
    the door the weight of Tinas body against the door did the rest as the door
    swung wide open leaving Tina to be looking directly at Bette.

    Tina could see the tear streaks that were on Bettes cheeks
    along with the smudge of mascara as Bette looked a sight, but to Tinas eyes it
    was a sight for sore eyes.  Bettes suit
    was rumpled and wrinkled, as Tina looked Bette up and down.  As Tina moved into Bettes apartment, Bette backed
    away as if avoiding being touched by Tina. 
    Tina could see the pain in Bettes eyes as she backed up.  Right before Tinas eyes Bette put her game
    face on as she wiped her cheeks and eyes with both hands and visibly
    straightened her back.  Tina could see
    the shields go up in Bettes eyes, those shields that she hadnt seen for so
    long. 

    Bette what happened? 
    I looked for you and you were gone. Tina started as she didnt even
    know what had happened for sure.

    At this question Bette stretched her entire 511
    frame.  It was as if by maximizing her
    height and straightening her back ram rod straight, it would help steel her for
    this conversation.

    Tina I am sorry for leaving so quickly.  It just seemed like other issues come up that
    I thought you wanted to tend too.  I just
    felt that I would get out of your hair. Bette said in a casual tone as if she
    had just left to run to the corner store and would be right back.

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    1. Jwet,
      How could you leave me hanging like this?
      Bette is completely wrapped up in her own observations and mindset and doubts. She is building the walls around her fortress as a mean of protecting her heart. This may prevent anyone getting in but it also stops you from getting out too. Unfortunately in life there are always at lest versions of the truth: Mine, yours and the absolute objective truth.
      Tina need to find that lose brick and gently tug in out. Then the walls will come tumbling down and Bette will have to face reality. Good things and bad things happen to all of us. The only thing we can truly control is how we face and deal with them.
      I do like the way you have let Bette slip into her bad habits of old. I am never convinced of a complete 180 deg turn about in a person. This keeps the dram quotient high and realistic.
      Hats off to you for the courage of making things difficult between these characters. I do trust that you have a purpose for this direction and will be watching to see what happens next.
      Queries include:
      Can Alice find truffles with that nose of hers? Does she spoil the Easter egg hunt using it? Has Tina been a police officer in a previous incarnation with shoulders of steel? Is Tina related to Superman? Has Bette gone deaf, dumb and blind? Does Tina have her JCB license as I think she will need it to knock down those walls?
      Why do you always get a bit of apple stuck between your teeth, which takes all day to remove after plenty of sucking sounds?
      Can’t wait for tomorrow’s installment: Tina Fights On!!
      Your Loyal Fan

    2. Was that only 2 pages? I think your chapters have to be 10 pages or more! The drama….I like seeing this Tina! Go Tina, Go Tina.

      Thanks, Jwet. I like your verison much more! Can’t wait for the next chapter.

    3. Good Lord ! Sort them out Jwet ! People are so stuborn in the face of love, one wonders why, life is so short ! Thank you – it is always a pleasure.

    6. j j j wet wet wet (hoping you are hearing the horror that is Betty). you are killing me. you best be posting one mighty quickly. at some point bette has got to get her fire back. not overwhelming kind of fire but enough to give her the strength she needs to just accept that its good and gonna get better for them, right? tina i belive must be smart enough to “hear” what bette is saying. she needs her to just say it loud and clear. oh the drama.

    9. What did the Foundation ever do to Alice that she is so hell bent on bringing it down by exposing the founder that has made it clear they want to remain anonymous? There is investigative reporting and there is nosy and insensitive…Alice has crossed the line towards the latter. I hope whatever ‘funny’ you have planned for her includes either her inability to type or laryngitis – preferrably, both.

      Well, what do you know…I looked up the definition of stubborn and low and behold there was a picture of Bette next to it!! Tina may be getting a spine, but she also needs to get a clue as well. Hurt trumps common sense everytime.

      “Alex, I’ll take ‘What do Bette and Tina need to do to get back on track’ for $500″…and the answer is…communication and trust!

      Please continue…just be careful with our TiBette hearts.

    12. WOW, tina’s grew some kahunas!!!! love the story. hope you post tomorrow. i am leaving for vacation tomorrow night. six days with my girl and NO computer, bummer. she is trilled!!! i have turned into such the addict with all of this wonderful writing. i love it though.

    15. Oh that darned rollercoaster, *breath, breath, ok its working, deep breath…right* Bette needs to become vulnerable at this very moment, forget super cool, super sexy (just for a split second) she needs to be super vulnerable and super honest, then she’ll become oh so super sexy and super cool once again. Tina, open your F**kin eyes, this woman in front of you is hurting like hell – see it, believe it and for god sake do something about it! Tell her you love her goddamit!!! *breath out…..ah……its now off the ample chest*

    23. i dont even know what to say..but i think Tina is right WTF is going on with Bette why she act like a coward??? she said that she has fear to lose Tina and Anna but the way she is going that will gonna happen… but i always have faith on her and i hope Tina as well amazing chapter youre the best ;0)

    24. No, no, nooo. This is not how it’s supposed to unravel. Why are you doing this to me? Have I offended thee? Please, don’t bring the old Bette back. UUUgh! Sometimes I wish I could just write myself into your story, walk up to Bette and shake her! Why is she still so affraid of being vulnerable to Tina? There has to be some other deep seated issue to keep her from not trusting Tina…that’s my only logic for it. Well hope you post soon.

    25. i remember someone saying to me once in a comment (i think that it was Amanda) “why are you reading this? you should be off writing another chapter.” as i now realize the value of her instruction, i will offer the same to you. get back to it!

    27. Ooo… I love it, it’s like a race… who is gonna find out first Tina or Alice… And that last comment was perfect, my ex would do the exact same thing to get me to stop acting like a 5 year old.

    28. oh man!!!! down the road!!! I already put my seat on!!!!! here we go!!! can’t ait. I’m off now… at least fo a few days… Jwet just to make sure you know: you’re amazing! bye drama’s queen

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