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    Foolish Moves 46

    Story written on June 24, 2005 by unbeknown.
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    THE END

    Chapter 46 – The end

     

    Tina: Bette and I made love ferociously. Bette had always been a good lover, generous but this time she made love to me like there was no tomorrow. It was clear to me now that Bette stilled loved me, in fact that had been clear to me before I came here. What I needed to know when I came was whether we could still trust each other. I had no doubts now, I trusted Bette so completely. I know Bette well and despite her best attempts I can still tell when she is hiding something, and she is hiding something. It is like there is something she has not told me. It doesnt make sense, I dont really understand what it could be because Bette has been open and honest about her feelings about what had happened. I made my way out onto the deck, wearing only a light silk dressing gown that was undone, shall I say feeling very satisfied. The sun was setting. Bette said shed be out in a moment. I called for her

     

    Tina : Bette, come on its beautiful, youll miss the last sunset youll see here for a bit

     

    Bette : Be there in a sec Tee. I sat on the end of the bed thinking about how we had just made love and here I was with the most beautiful woman on a isolated yacht having a most romantic night, but one thing remained unanswered, did she want to be my wife ? I didnt know how much I could take. I decided to leave it until after the main course and if there was no sign of Tina returning my wedding ring, then I would raise the issue, lay my cards out, so to speak. Of course how I would do that I did not yet know, I mean if she didnt get the message by now, would she ever ? I tied up my black silk dressing gown and wandered out onto the deck.

     

    Bette : It is beautiful, isnt it ? as I came up to Tinas side. She was leaning forward on the railing looking out to the open sea where the sun had begun to set. The sky was full of vibrant blue and pink.

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    3. Beautiful…beautiful…beautiful…
      WOw…thanks a lot for the great story… please do come back with another story… I love your story telling style… just so…beaaauuutttiifullll…

    4. OK Al, I tell you what. I will think about writing another story but not until after July 15th (big day). But I am so glad you enjoyed it. Sorry to hear the bank turned you down on the yacht ! Your english is just fine :-) Umm, how would I let you know if I decide to write another story ?

    5. unbeknown, it’s so nice of you to reply, I’m enchanted. What about july 15th (big day)? Is that personnal thing or do I miss something ? Ten days will be soon there, I wait impatiently for your return! Thank you for my english, you reassure me, it’s a little unusual for me to write in other language than french. If you decide to write another story (i keep faith about it), you can e-mail me at al_inmind@yahoo.com. Merci encore unbeknown ;-)

    6. So fucking beautiful and amazing chapter. So happy at the end and they will be happy forever, love it. Thank you so much for sharing the wonderful story with us, and hope you will write the new one for us soon. Thank you!

    11. This has been a wonderful story from beginning to end…sometimes painful, but always beautiful. Thank you for taking the time to share it with us.

    15. unbeknown, that was a wonderful story and I was passionately absorbed from the beginning to the end. If I was an editor, I’d love to publish a book of you! By the way, my banker told me “NO WAY!” for the yacht, sorry. So, I changed my mind, and I bought a new cell phone, thus I can check TLW fanfic anywhere and anytime I want with it. It’s royal, isn’t it ? Anyway, I really hope to hear from you soon (like everybody I guess). So, feel free to write another story again and again, it will give me a great pleasure to read, you make me love english. THANK YOU ************and thank you for your special comment, it went straight in my heart.

    21. unbeknown, I just wanna make a little more try.I’d really love to convince you to write another story. I managed to do that the first time I post a comment to tell you I still was waiting for the part 2. I was sure that you already had the end in mind, and it was so sweet of you to let me think it was an update “especially for me”.So if I try hard, maybe it will work again, and look at all the previous comments, I’m not the one who loves your style, captivating style. Please, unbeknown, come back.If you write something else than TLW fanfic, could you let me know, please? I hope you gonna read this comment(and understand it if my english is clear enough of course), and if I feel like I miss my dose, I will post another comment.You made me “foolish moves-addict”, now, I can’t help myself, I need more ! Am I convincing ? Thank you again for this brilliant-46 chapter-journey.

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