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    Foolish Moves 46

    Story written on June 24, 2005 by unbeknown.
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    THE END

     

    Bette : Tina, there are some things I would to say to you. She looked straight into my eyes.

     

    Tina : Id like to hear whatever it is you need to say

     

    Bette : I cleared my throat. Tee, I love you, I love you more than you know. I know this from the last few months, firstly being with out you being in my life and now since you have been here, I feel we have made real progress. I felt before you came I had begun to make real progress for me. I came here, as you know to think and to feel what happened with us. I know now not to make the same mistakes again. I cannot promise I will not make other mistakes. But I can promise to be loyal, loving and open. I want you and our baby to be my future.

     

    Tina : Thank you Bette, that was beautiful

     

    Bette : what I wanted to know Tee, is if you feel the same way ?

     

    Tina reached over the table and put both her hands into my open palms, it was then I saw it, actually I felt it first, the small cold patch on Tinas finger. She was wearing her wedding ring, was I imagining it ?

     

    Tina : Bette, I feel the same way. I love you so much. What happened in the past is now in the past, we must look forward to our future. We both made mistakes Bette but what is done is forgiven. Bette, I trust you and want you to be my wife again, in every sense of the word. With those words Tina put the small blue velvet box on the table. Go on Bette, open it. Sure enough it was my wedding ring.

     

    Tee quietly slipped on my wedding ring, I wipe tears of joys away with my other hand. I looked at her and at the wedding ring, and back at her. The only thing she said was I have never been surer about anything in my life Bette. I began to giggle, out of shear relief and nervousness. All I could think of was making the most of the rest of this night and making our way home to LA tomorrow, to our house, our family, our friends. Make the most of it alright.

     

    Bette : Tee, will you dance with me ?

     

    Tina : Id love to dance with you Elizabeth Porter

     

    I walked around to Tinas seat and took her by the hand. We danced, we made love, we watched the sun rise, never letting go of each other on that night. Even when it was time to go, there was joy. Heading home for the rest of our lives together.

     

    The End

     

     

     

     

     

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    3. Beautiful…beautiful…beautiful…
      WOw…thanks a lot for the great story… please do come back with another story… I love your story telling style… just so…beaaauuutttiifullll…

    4. OK Al, I tell you what. I will think about writing another story but not until after July 15th (big day). But I am so glad you enjoyed it. Sorry to hear the bank turned you down on the yacht ! Your english is just fine :-) Umm, how would I let you know if I decide to write another story ?

    5. unbeknown, it’s so nice of you to reply, I’m enchanted. What about july 15th (big day)? Is that personnal thing or do I miss something ? Ten days will be soon there, I wait impatiently for your return! Thank you for my english, you reassure me, it’s a little unusual for me to write in other language than french. If you decide to write another story (i keep faith about it), you can e-mail me at al_inmind@yahoo.com. Merci encore unbeknown ;-)

    6. So fucking beautiful and amazing chapter. So happy at the end and they will be happy forever, love it. Thank you so much for sharing the wonderful story with us, and hope you will write the new one for us soon. Thank you!

    11. This has been a wonderful story from beginning to end…sometimes painful, but always beautiful. Thank you for taking the time to share it with us.

    15. unbeknown, that was a wonderful story and I was passionately absorbed from the beginning to the end. If I was an editor, I’d love to publish a book of you! By the way, my banker told me “NO WAY!” for the yacht, sorry. So, I changed my mind, and I bought a new cell phone, thus I can check TLW fanfic anywhere and anytime I want with it. It’s royal, isn’t it ? Anyway, I really hope to hear from you soon (like everybody I guess). So, feel free to write another story again and again, it will give me a great pleasure to read, you make me love english. THANK YOU ************and thank you for your special comment, it went straight in my heart.

    21. unbeknown, I just wanna make a little more try.I’d really love to convince you to write another story. I managed to do that the first time I post a comment to tell you I still was waiting for the part 2. I was sure that you already had the end in mind, and it was so sweet of you to let me think it was an update “especially for me”.So if I try hard, maybe it will work again, and look at all the previous comments, I’m not the one who loves your style, captivating style. Please, unbeknown, come back.If you write something else than TLW fanfic, could you let me know, please? I hope you gonna read this comment(and understand it if my english is clear enough of course), and if I feel like I miss my dose, I will post another comment.You made me “foolish moves-addict”, now, I can’t help myself, I need more ! Am I convincing ? Thank you again for this brilliant-46 chapter-journey.

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