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    Foolish Moves 46

    Story written on June 24, 2005 by unbeknown.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=54991
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    THE END

     

    Tina : This is all beautiful Bette. Thank you for making our last night here so special

     

    Bette : Thank you for being here with me. Are you hungry enough yet for our main course ?

     

    Tina : yes baby, I am

     

    Tina stayed looking out, the sun had set. It was everything I had hoped, Tee seemed thrilled. The stars were clear and bright, the moon almost full, reflecting off the water. When I returned Tee had lit the candles and sat waiting at the table. Her gown was open and her elbows resting on the table, hands under her chin. There was the gentlest of gentle breezes. I placed the meal on the table, Tee had poured the wine.

     

    Bette : Steak and lobster, hope thats OK. Lobster with smallest amount of thai chilli sauce and steak the way that Tee liked it. Crispy half baby potatoes and an unpretentious green salad.

     

    Tee : Bette, I dont know what to say, its, its, Im speechless

     

    Bette : Tee, there are things I need to say to you, I, I need to tell you, umm after our main course

     

    Tina : Bette, is everything OK, I thought things were going marvelously ?

     

    Bette : Tonight yes, Tee, its perfect, you are perfect

     

    Tina : Bette, I am not sure I understand what you are trying to say. Tina looked confused, she leant forward. Bette, there is something I need to say to you too

     

    Bette : Oh caught off guard. Gathering herself  Perhaps you should go first

     

    Tina : How about this, we eat, then we talk, then we have ***** again, before dessert ? Raising one eyebrow rather mischievously.

     

    Tina and ate our diner, slowly taking in all of each other and all of the fabulous food and surroundings. She let her flap ever so slightly in the breeze and I could see her full breast and her belly, with our child in. Concentrating on dinner was no easy feat ! But the time had come, I wanted to know if we were or were not going home together, whether she wanted to be my wife again. Anxiousness began to creep in as I put my knife and fork down. When I had given her back my wedding ring, the idea was that she knew that I willing to wait, willing to give up some control, was this a mistake to push now, on this night of all night. Bette Porter always trusts her instincts, follow them this time. I put the knife and fork down and pushed them close together. I cleared my throat. Dont hesitate, be strong, if she wants you its all good, if she doesnt be gracious in defeat.

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    3. Beautiful…beautiful…beautiful…
      WOw…thanks a lot for the great story… please do come back with another story… I love your story telling style… just so…beaaauuutttiifullll…

    4. OK Al, I tell you what. I will think about writing another story but not until after July 15th (big day). But I am so glad you enjoyed it. Sorry to hear the bank turned you down on the yacht ! Your english is just fine :-) Umm, how would I let you know if I decide to write another story ?

    5. unbeknown, it’s so nice of you to reply, I’m enchanted. What about july 15th (big day)? Is that personnal thing or do I miss something ? Ten days will be soon there, I wait impatiently for your return! Thank you for my english, you reassure me, it’s a little unusual for me to write in other language than french. If you decide to write another story (i keep faith about it), you can e-mail me at al_inmind@yahoo.com. Merci encore unbeknown ;-)

    6. So fucking beautiful and amazing chapter. So happy at the end and they will be happy forever, love it. Thank you so much for sharing the wonderful story with us, and hope you will write the new one for us soon. Thank you!

    11. This has been a wonderful story from beginning to end…sometimes painful, but always beautiful. Thank you for taking the time to share it with us.

    15. unbeknown, that was a wonderful story and I was passionately absorbed from the beginning to the end. If I was an editor, I’d love to publish a book of you! By the way, my banker told me “NO WAY!” for the yacht, sorry. So, I changed my mind, and I bought a new cell phone, thus I can check TLW fanfic anywhere and anytime I want with it. It’s royal, isn’t it ? Anyway, I really hope to hear from you soon (like everybody I guess). So, feel free to write another story again and again, it will give me a great pleasure to read, you make me love english. THANK YOU ************and thank you for your special comment, it went straight in my heart.

    21. unbeknown, I just wanna make a little more try.I’d really love to convince you to write another story. I managed to do that the first time I post a comment to tell you I still was waiting for the part 2. I was sure that you already had the end in mind, and it was so sweet of you to let me think it was an update “especially for me”.So if I try hard, maybe it will work again, and look at all the previous comments, I’m not the one who loves your style, captivating style. Please, unbeknown, come back.If you write something else than TLW fanfic, could you let me know, please? I hope you gonna read this comment(and understand it if my english is clear enough of course), and if I feel like I miss my dose, I will post another comment.You made me “foolish moves-addict”, now, I can’t help myself, I need more ! Am I convincing ? Thank you again for this brilliant-46 chapter-journey.

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