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Drowning 18
-Previously-
They all got up to hug Bette goodbye. When Tina reached Bette, they held on a few seconds too long. T, it really was amazing to see you. Thank you for giving me chance.
You dont have to thank me, it was entirely selfish.
After Bette and Robin had left, all the girls decided it was time to call it a night. You two had way too much to drink tonight. Why dont you crash here? Alice asked.
Shane and Dana looked at each other and shrugged their shoulders, Whatever. Im not driving anywhere. Shane said.
OK, well, Tina, you stay in the guest room like planned. Shane, well pull out the bed in my office. Dana, you ok down here?
Dana looked at Alice, a little dejected, Sure, no problem. Im going to go up and change. Al, can I give Shane some clothes?
Of course.
They all got ready for bed. About a half an hour later, after cleaning up as best she could in her condition, Alice wandered into her bedroom, where she found a half changed Dana, asleep on the bed, Alices pillow wrapped tightly in her arms.
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Chapter 18
Alice just stared at Dana asleep on the bed. She hadnt quite gotten her pants off, they were unbuttoned and lowered, but not actually lowered past her hips. She had changed her shirt and was in one of Alices tank tops. Actually, Alice noticed, it was the shirt she had slept in last night. Dana must have taken it from the hamper. Its not like I dont have clean clothes in the drawer. She mumbled to herself. She took a pair of shorts out of the drawer and walked towards the bed.
Alice just stood there watching Dana. She wasnt able to move closer. She had all intentions of finishing undressing Dana and then putting her in sleep clothes, like she had done hundreds of times before. But then she just got stuck looking at her. So many times she had just taken it for granted. Dana fell asleep like that a lot. Especially in the summer, when the heat mixed with the intensity of her workouts would just wear her down and she would go upstairs to change and fall asleep before she finished. An hour later, Alice would come upstairs and find Dana asleep, half in her clothes and she would finish undressing her and getting her ready for bed. Dana would always without fail let go of whatever pillow she was clutching and wrap her arms around Alice, burrowing her head into the blondes neck and say, I love you Baby. Youre too good to me, as she fell back asleep.
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(54 votes, average: 4.46 out of 5)
I’m first! *Dances around* Can I just say how much I love that little girl? She’s so adorable, “Aunt Awice” so cute! Cant wait to see how she reacts to meeting Bette.
Between Cara meeting Bette and Tina being ‘Chris’, I can’t wait for the next chapter.
ALice and Dana in the begining just killed me! Sooo good!
This has got to be my fsv. fanfic ever! It’s awesome and it kinda incorperates all the best couples (danish, sharmen and bettina). Cara is a doll, can’t wait for bette to meet her! I hope you fix up all these broken realitionships soon, I don’t know if I can handle weeping like a baby again!
OMG – I was crying for like three pages! Hats off to you, luce! I love how involved the gang is in your story. And your original characters are so believable. You’re killing us AND Alice here –come on, what the flip has got Dana so freaked?! Post soon, i’m loving it.
“hot, hot, hot” to quote a one miss Leisha Hailey
Applause!! I think I have page two inscribed into my memory for all time now. Evil lucia keeping Alice on the edge of her seat with Dana’s big secret. ;-)
Superb!!!
Thank you.
The Alice and Dana was so touching…what’s up with Dana? Inquiring readers want to know.
Bette and Cara will be interesting. Julia and Chris…what’s the story there? I have a feeling that there is one.
Now I want pancakes.
Awww….so sweet and I *nearly* cried…numerous times…must be my stubborn qualities keeping it in…Love it!!!
I am just dying to find out what is going on in little Dana’s mind and heart.
I love it and I hope that dana speaks to alice soon and I also hope that they can sort though this as they are so good together please post soon
I like the way you have the rest of the group involved in the Danish story. I’m wondering what’s going to happen with all of them, but mostly wondering what’s going on with Dana. Loved the first scene, poor Alice. Please update soon (and your other fic).
K
great chapter. Can’t wait for lunch.
lucia- i am completely absorbed in this. that opening scene is just knee knockin, slack jaw good. what is going on with Dana?! really? what?? i too love how this tale is about the whole gang. the tina/bette/cara/robin/julia/CHRIS thing is juicy and fun.post soon. thanks!
That was great!! Cant wait to see whats next. Please please please post soon!
Great as always :) I’m afraid that Dana’s secret is something HUGE.. and Alice will freak out and.. but in the end I know (or hope, more likely) that there will be a happy DANISH ending :D
Awesome story! More please!!! Can’t wait!