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Drowning 18
Finally, the alcohol and need to touch Dana won out and she walked over to the bed. She softly brushed a stray strand of hair out of Danas face and pushed it behind her ear. She leant down and whispered into Danas ear, I love you.
Dana mumbled, mmmlove you too in sleepy tones, still asleep, but instinctually answering the familiar voices words.
Alice sat there on the bed next to Dana, silently begging her to change her mind. She softly moved her hands to lower Danas pants. She let her hands linger on her Danas hip, memorizing their feel. She lowered the pants down her thighs, letting her hands drift across its smooth skin. She finally pushed the pants fully down to Danas ankles. She leaned across her sleeping love and pushed her pants down off of her feet. She took a moment to just drink in the site of Dana, her love, her life. Forcing herself to pull her gaze from Danas beautiful body, in one movement that came from years of practice, she pulled a pair of boxer shorts onto Dana, and pulled them up, Dana, unconsciously lifting herself to help Alice.
Alice pulled a blanket up over Dana leaned in and whispered, There you go. Sweet Dreams, I love you.
Dana pushed the Alices pillow away from her and wrapper her arms around Alice, pulling her into the bed, she buried her head into the back of Alices neck and said, I love you, Baby. Youre too good to me, before drifting back to sleep.
Alice tried to get up out of bed to go sleep on the couch, but Dana wasnt letting go. Where are you going? She said as she placed soft kisses on the back of Alices neck. Dana could feel Alices body tense at the contact. She moved her hands to pull Alice closer to her and continued her assault on Alices neck. Alice lay there unable to move. She knew that Dana was still mainly asleep, not fully conscious of what she was doing, mix that with the amount she had to drink and Alice was feeling guilty letting this go on. But at the same time, it felt so good. The feel of the Danas lips on her skin was electric. She felt her body begin to come alive.
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(54 votes, average: 4.46 out of 5)
I’m first! *Dances around* Can I just say how much I love that little girl? She’s so adorable, “Aunt Awice” so cute! Cant wait to see how she reacts to meeting Bette.
Between Cara meeting Bette and Tina being ‘Chris’, I can’t wait for the next chapter.
ALice and Dana in the begining just killed me! Sooo good!
This has got to be my fsv. fanfic ever! It’s awesome and it kinda incorperates all the best couples (danish, sharmen and bettina). Cara is a doll, can’t wait for bette to meet her! I hope you fix up all these broken realitionships soon, I don’t know if I can handle weeping like a baby again!
OMG – I was crying for like three pages! Hats off to you, luce! I love how involved the gang is in your story. And your original characters are so believable. You’re killing us AND Alice here –come on, what the flip has got Dana so freaked?! Post soon, i’m loving it.
“hot, hot, hot” to quote a one miss Leisha Hailey
Applause!! I think I have page two inscribed into my memory for all time now. Evil lucia keeping Alice on the edge of her seat with Dana’s big secret. ;-)
Superb!!!
Thank you.
The Alice and Dana was so touching…what’s up with Dana? Inquiring readers want to know.
Bette and Cara will be interesting. Julia and Chris…what’s the story there? I have a feeling that there is one.
Now I want pancakes.
Awww….so sweet and I *nearly* cried…numerous times…must be my stubborn qualities keeping it in…Love it!!!
I am just dying to find out what is going on in little Dana’s mind and heart.
I love it and I hope that dana speaks to alice soon and I also hope that they can sort though this as they are so good together please post soon
I like the way you have the rest of the group involved in the Danish story. I’m wondering what’s going to happen with all of them, but mostly wondering what’s going on with Dana. Loved the first scene, poor Alice. Please update soon (and your other fic).
K
great chapter. Can’t wait for lunch.
lucia- i am completely absorbed in this. that opening scene is just knee knockin, slack jaw good. what is going on with Dana?! really? what?? i too love how this tale is about the whole gang. the tina/bette/cara/robin/julia/CHRIS thing is juicy and fun.post soon. thanks!
That was great!! Cant wait to see whats next. Please please please post soon!
Great as always :) I’m afraid that Dana’s secret is something HUGE.. and Alice will freak out and.. but in the end I know (or hope, more likely) that there will be a happy DANISH ending :D
Awesome story! More please!!! Can’t wait!