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    Drowning 18

    Story written on June 29, 2005 by lucia.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=55111
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    The night isn’t over yet…just read!

     

    Now Alice stood there watching Dana, scared that she would go through the familiar motions of changing Dana and getting her ready for bed and that simple sentence wouldnt be uttered. And for some reason that would solidify Alices fear that this break up was real. Even through an alcohol induced daze, she wasnt foolish enough to pretend that it would all be ok. She couldnt believe that all these years later she might lose Dana. Dana was all Alice ever wanted, from the moment she saw her. At first she knew that Dana wasnt ready for a real relationship. By the time she thought Dana could handle it, they were so immersed in a friendship, Alice was too scared to say anything. She actually found herself thanking Tonya. If not for her, she wasnt sure if she would have ever gotten the courage to talk to Dana. Not that she said much, but her actions did and that was all the mattered. And now, almost six years later, Alice had lost her. She still didnt know to what, just that she did. And now the simple action of helping her partner dress for bed had her scared into paralysis, all of her fears poignantly displayed in an effortless act of love.

     

    Alice decided to get herself ready for bed before venturing to Dana. She went into the bathroom and brushed her teeth, washed her face. She was about to jump in the shower when she realized how ridiculous she was being. She quickly changed her clothes and headed back into her bedroom. She stopped short of the bed again, but this time it wasnt trepidation, it was pure adoration. It amazed Alice that after knowing someone for over ten years, dating them for almost six and living with them for three, this womans absolute beauty could still affect her. Dana was perfect to Alice. It wasnt that she didnt see the flaws, it was that the flaws were what made Dana so perfect. Alice stood still to take the sight of Dana, innocent and beautiful in her slumber, lying peacefully in the bed they had shared for so long. She was afraid to move her gaze, afraid that any movement would somehow take away this perfect moment.

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    1. I’m first! *Dances around* Can I just say how much I love that little girl? She’s so adorable, “Aunt Awice” so cute! Cant wait to see how she reacts to meeting Bette.

    4. This has got to be my fsv. fanfic ever! It’s awesome and it kinda incorperates all the best couples (danish, sharmen and bettina). Cara is a doll, can’t wait for bette to meet her! I hope you fix up all these broken realitionships soon, I don’t know if I can handle weeping like a baby again!

    5. OMG – I was crying for like three pages! Hats off to you, luce! I love how involved the gang is in your story. And your original characters are so believable. You’re killing us AND Alice here –come on, what the flip has got Dana so freaked?! Post soon, i’m loving it.

    7. Applause!! I think I have page two inscribed into my memory for all time now. Evil lucia keeping Alice on the edge of her seat with Dana’s big secret. ;-)

    9. The Alice and Dana was so touching…what’s up with Dana? Inquiring readers want to know.
      Bette and Cara will be interesting. Julia and Chris…what’s the story there? I have a feeling that there is one.
      Now I want pancakes.

    12. I love it and I hope that dana speaks to alice soon and I also hope that they can sort though this as they are so good together please post soon

    13. I like the way you have the rest of the group involved in the Danish story. I’m wondering what’s going to happen with all of them, but mostly wondering what’s going on with Dana. Loved the first scene, poor Alice. Please update soon (and your other fic).

    15. lucia- i am completely absorbed in this. that opening scene is just knee knockin, slack jaw good. what is going on with Dana?! really? what?? i too love how this tale is about the whole gang. the tina/bette/cara/robin/julia/CHRIS thing is juicy and fun.post soon. thanks!

    17. Great as always :) I’m afraid that Dana’s secret is something HUGE.. and Alice will freak out and.. but in the end I know (or hope, more likely) that there will be a happy DANISH ending :D

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