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    Can’t Help Falling In Love Chapter 30

    Story written on July 5, 2005 by flairforthedramatic.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=55217
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    “you know i can be found, sitting home all alone, if you can’t come around at least please telephone, don’t be cruel…”
    How long is too long?

    Tina looked around at all of the boats in the harbor. Each one just a little bigger then the next. Tinas heart began to race and she realized just how big tonight would be. If Bette didnt show then Tina had decided to call it quits.

    Peggy: Yoohoo Tina darling. We are over here.

    Tina looked up to find a very happy Peggy Peabody waving from the largest boat of them all.

    Tina: Hi Peggy.

    Peggy: Carlos please help that young woman up here.

    A young man as good looking as they come ran to Tinas side and took her purse.

    Carlos: Allow me to help you maam.

    He took Tinas hand and helped her over the gap between the boat and the deck.

    Peggy rushed to meet her new guest.

    Peggy: Welcome.

    Tina: My god Peggy this boat is truly incredible.

    Peggy: Its a yacht darling, not a boat. Boats are for fishermen.

    Tina: Sorry.

    Peggy gave Tina a small smile.

    Peggy: Arent we missing a vital member of this party?

    Tina: She has a performance tonight.

    Peggy: Oh thats right. Silly me. Let me show you around and introduce you.

    Peggy took Tina by the arm and led her around the yacht introducing her to various business men and woman. It was a sea of old money meeting new money.

    After the introductions Peggy led Tina into a small room.

    Peggy: Im glad we are getting to spend a little time alone.

    Tina: I just wanted to say thank you for the invitation. I dont think Bette will be coming.

    Peggy: And why do you think that?

    Peggy sat down on the bed across from where Tina sat.

    Tina: I sort of made this like a challenge. If she showed up and was willing to admit who she was, who I am to her then, well, I dont know what.

    Peggy: Sounds like no one wins that bet.

    Tina: I guess not. I think maybe Im asking too much from her.

    Peggy: Let me ask you something, do you love her?

    Tina: Yes.

    Peggy: Does she love you?

    Tina: I think so. She said so.

    Peggy: What do you think.

    Tina: I think she does. But shes an actress who knows.

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    4. GRRRRRRRRRR!!! You are so bad. How you gonna leave us hanging like that. Ok I wont hold it against you since you did post 3 times today. That was a treat. But I will be expecting a post 2mrw, dont disapoint me. I hope its Bette b/c this Jess chick dont know Tina like that to be wraping her arms around her, but i do know Bette’s not in that place. Im hopin for the best.

    6. Oh no, my fever just got worst by this cliffy..
      Ok THIS GOTTA BE BETTE, or you’ll be responsible for some real bad news that will air on CNN tomorrow.. LOL..
      Ok i trust you and no matter who it was i know you’ll do it the right way.. but once again i just hope it’s not this Jess woman, and it’s BETTE..

    9. I read the FIRST 29 chapters of this story just today at work. Yes, I get paid! LOL….anyway, I LOVE it. I’m all caught up now and EAGERLY awaiting the next chapter….let it be BETTE! Keep up the great writing, you brighten my days.

    12. At first I thought “3 posts in 1 day too good to be true” and I was right cuz you leave us hanging in suspense once again, but I admit I like it lol Pleaseeee let it be Bette and not Jess. I beg of you!

    16. Bette? Let it be Bette! Dammit! I knew I shouldn’t have checked today for your posts! Three is definitely a yay, but with this cliffhanger, how am I supposed to study for my final?!?!? In a way, you FF writers are evil! Three more tomorrow (Or more) will be great too! :) Okay, sorry. Great story, thanks for posting though, I really enjoyed them!

    18. flair, your momma didn’t raise no fools. you are killing me. 3 in one day,woohoo. but now i’m suppose to sleep. yeah right. it had better be bette but for the life of me i know your gonna kill me. please post first thing in the am or i’m just not gonna have a nice day, to anyone.

    19. Whoa! I can’t believe I read it before going to bed! Who can this person be? Familar pair of hands? Hmmm….it must be Bette……….I guess I have to wait to see…… Great story you have here!

    27. That wasn’t very nice Flair to leave us all hanging like this, but you don’t play nice do you Flair..hehe snicker snicker…OHHHH PAWEEEEZE Let it be the oh so fabulous Bette!!!

    28. Great work, as always with you ! How much I love your story…
      Thanks a LOT for your so generous updates ! … but what a cruel cliffhanger indeed !!!

    30. you have made this union trying for both bette and especially tina so i doubt its bette. however i am hoping against hope that it is bette. please let those arms belong to one miss porter.

    31. OMG!!!!! All Hail Flair! All Hail Flair! You are the reason they created fan fic, you are the reason God gave us the ability to read! Let it be Jess, I love the drama, let it be Jess! Let Bette know what it feels like to be in Tinas shoes! I hope Jess becomes the best Tina ever had! Just kidding, do what ever you want with her, just keep the story coming! Love you!

    33. I just caught up with your story. And I’m at work, so I missed most of the day. I don’t think my boss would appreciate this. I just couldn’t stop reading this. You’re doing an excellent job. Just one thing, this girl better not be Jess or Peggy….

    34. o talaula is making me laugh this morning, especially because i lay in bed, after that bout of insomnia, thinking Let it be Jess! Bette should know how it feels.

      I defer to you though. You’re the one w/the flair.

      Or maybe it’s Bette, with Jess hot on her heels?

      I’ll love it no matter what. Totally addicted to this fic.

    35. Oh sure, Three posts and then this?!! A cliffitastrophy! I’m betting it’s Jess and Bette will enter right on cue! I hope I’m wrong! Please post soon….We’re all dying here! THanks…

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