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    Can’t Help Falling In Love Chapter 30

    Story written on July 5, 2005 by flairforthedramatic.
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    “you know i can be found, sitting home all alone, if you can’t come around at least please telephone, don’t be cruel…”
    How long is too long?

    Peggy: I know. No matter how great an actress you cant fake true love darling,.

    Tina: Why are you so supportive of this. Bette always says her being ***** will ruin her career.

    Peggy: Who knows what it will do to her career. But who cares. If you have love what else do you need?

    Tina: You are a wise woman.

    Peggy: Tell that to my ungrateful wench of a daughter.

    Tina: I dont think speaking ill of her will make her more grateful.

    Peggy: I suppose not. Why dont you wander around the deck? Its a beautiful night. And you dont want Bette to arrive and think you arent here.

    Tina smiled meekly and found her way to the back of the yacht.

    The stars were shining brighter than she had ever seen in New York. It was a perfect night to be wrapped in Bettes arms. Tina closed her eyes and tried to imagine it.

    Jess: Hi there. Im Jess.

    Tina turned and found herself face to face with a beautiful young woman. Her eyes were green and her hair short and red, deep red like a raspberry.

    Tina: Hi.

    Jess: Ive never seen you at one of Peggy parties before.

    Tina: Oh well, this is my first time.

    Jess: So what do you do Tina?

    Tina: Oh nothing glamours. Right now Im an intern.

    Jess let out a small laugh showing her perfectly white teeth.

    Jess: Ok, but when you are done being an intern what would you like to do?

    Tina: Oh that. Well Im a writer I guess.

    Jess: You guess?

    Tina: Id like to be. I mean I am because I write but I want to make a living at it. Im rambling arent I?

    Jess: Yes, a bit.

    Tina: Sorry. When I get nervous…

    Jess: I make you nervous.

    Tina: Right now, life makes me nervous.

    Jess: Im sorry to hear that. It sounds like an awful condition.

    Tina: Oh it is.

    Jess: Tina, may I get you a drink?

    Tina looked around, still no Bette. Then she glanced at her watch 11:43pm. The show got out over an hour ago. If Bette was coming she would have been here already.

    Tina: Sure. A drink would be great.

    Jess: Anything in particular?

    Tina: Is it a stocked bar?

    Jess smiled again and Tina felt her heart leap into her throat.

    Jess: Have you looked around this place? Of course its stocked.

    Tina returned the smile.

    Tina: In that case Ill have a shot of whatever is the highest proof.

    Jess: Thats fair. Ill be right back.

    With that Jess took off toward the bar and Tina looked around for the closest exit.

    Why couldnt Bette have just showed up? She was counting on her. She needed her there. Tina felt sick. She wasnt sure if it was her nerves or the ocean but either way Tinas stomach was not happy! She had remembered seeing a bathroom downstairs and she only hoped she could make it. Tina ran past the guests and down the steps pushing open the door to the bathroom. When she emerged 10 minuets later her face was red and her eyes watery. She climbed back up the steps searching for a piece of gum to take away the awful breath. Tina found an open corner of the boat all alone in the back. She pressed her body against the railings and tilted her head backwards letting the wind lift her blonde curls. She closed her eyes and sighed deeply. It was then she felt a cool pair of hands wrap around her waste from behind…

     

    TBC…

    ( Who could it be?)

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    4. GRRRRRRRRRR!!! You are so bad. How you gonna leave us hanging like that. Ok I wont hold it against you since you did post 3 times today. That was a treat. But I will be expecting a post 2mrw, dont disapoint me. I hope its Bette b/c this Jess chick dont know Tina like that to be wraping her arms around her, but i do know Bette’s not in that place. Im hopin for the best.

    6. Oh no, my fever just got worst by this cliffy..
      Ok THIS GOTTA BE BETTE, or you’ll be responsible for some real bad news that will air on CNN tomorrow.. LOL..
      Ok i trust you and no matter who it was i know you’ll do it the right way.. but once again i just hope it’s not this Jess woman, and it’s BETTE..

    9. I read the FIRST 29 chapters of this story just today at work. Yes, I get paid! LOL….anyway, I LOVE it. I’m all caught up now and EAGERLY awaiting the next chapter….let it be BETTE! Keep up the great writing, you brighten my days.

    12. At first I thought “3 posts in 1 day too good to be true” and I was right cuz you leave us hanging in suspense once again, but I admit I like it lol Pleaseeee let it be Bette and not Jess. I beg of you!

    16. Bette? Let it be Bette! Dammit! I knew I shouldn’t have checked today for your posts! Three is definitely a yay, but with this cliffhanger, how am I supposed to study for my final?!?!? In a way, you FF writers are evil! Three more tomorrow (Or more) will be great too! :) Okay, sorry. Great story, thanks for posting though, I really enjoyed them!

    18. flair, your momma didn’t raise no fools. you are killing me. 3 in one day,woohoo. but now i’m suppose to sleep. yeah right. it had better be bette but for the life of me i know your gonna kill me. please post first thing in the am or i’m just not gonna have a nice day, to anyone.

    19. Whoa! I can’t believe I read it before going to bed! Who can this person be? Familar pair of hands? Hmmm….it must be Bette……….I guess I have to wait to see…… Great story you have here!

    27. That wasn’t very nice Flair to leave us all hanging like this, but you don’t play nice do you Flair..hehe snicker snicker…OHHHH PAWEEEEZE Let it be the oh so fabulous Bette!!!

    28. Great work, as always with you ! How much I love your story…
      Thanks a LOT for your so generous updates ! … but what a cruel cliffhanger indeed !!!

    30. you have made this union trying for both bette and especially tina so i doubt its bette. however i am hoping against hope that it is bette. please let those arms belong to one miss porter.

    31. OMG!!!!! All Hail Flair! All Hail Flair! You are the reason they created fan fic, you are the reason God gave us the ability to read! Let it be Jess, I love the drama, let it be Jess! Let Bette know what it feels like to be in Tinas shoes! I hope Jess becomes the best Tina ever had! Just kidding, do what ever you want with her, just keep the story coming! Love you!

    33. I just caught up with your story. And I’m at work, so I missed most of the day. I don’t think my boss would appreciate this. I just couldn’t stop reading this. You’re doing an excellent job. Just one thing, this girl better not be Jess or Peggy….

    34. o talaula is making me laugh this morning, especially because i lay in bed, after that bout of insomnia, thinking Let it be Jess! Bette should know how it feels.

      I defer to you though. You’re the one w/the flair.

      Or maybe it’s Bette, with Jess hot on her heels?

      I’ll love it no matter what. Totally addicted to this fic.

    35. Oh sure, Three posts and then this?!! A cliffitastrophy! I’m betting it’s Jess and Bette will enter right on cue! I hope I’m wrong! Please post soon….We’re all dying here! THanks…

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