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    Breathe- Chapter 3

    Story written on July 17, 2005 by Sox1.
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    Yippee..formatting fixed: The ride to Bette’s

    It didnt seem as if Bettes hushed voice disrupted the protective sleep Tina had surrendered to as they left her apartment building. Bette finished the last of her calls and removed the hands-free kit from her ear.

    She straightened in the drivers seat, allowing the muscles to stretch and release some of the tension that had settled as they began their drive to Bettes home. She relaxed her hand a bit when she realized she had been tightly gripping the steering wheel and flexed her fingers to return the flow of blood.

    Taking her eyes from the road, Bette quickly stole a glance at the exhausted and sleeping Tina Kennard. The peaceful look on her face was contradicted by the blood stains on her face, hands and clothing. Bette took in the wide smear of color across her forehead and the sheer volume of blood soaked into the blondes clothing.

    “Shell need to take a shower and change clothes, Bette thought as the mundane was easier to process than what they had both witnessed and experienced that day. Bette resisted the urge to reach out and brush a fallen bang that was resting against Tinas closed eyes.

    Bette took a deep breath as she kept her hands on the wheel and to myself she thought, shaking her head. Bette looked at her passenger again. Why do I have such an immediate and intense need to protect you, she asked realizing that while the feeling was certainly powerful she didnt find it necessarily disconcerting. After all, she had spent most of her adult life serving and protecting others, and based on todays events, there was little doubt that Tina might need some protecting.

    Her eyes found Tina again. She was sleeping heavily once more, having stirred slightly when Bette merged onto Interstate 5. Why are you all alone, Tina? This time Bettes words found her own soft voice and then the car fell silent once more.

    Bette settled back into her thoughts. So what was this other nagging feeling that surfaced the moment she fell to her knees beside Tina? Sure, she wanted to protect her, but she also wanted to hold her and have her touch comfort Tina and quiet all her fears.

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    1. i think i’m first. yeah!!!! soxy i told ya before i loved your posts on twop but dayum girl you are so selling it here. love this story. love the first meeting takes place. does tina ever leave now thats shes home. so glad you decided to post today. i’m sure you’ll figure out the spacing, we’ll all be patient. another post soon please.

    3. totally, totally totally sold on this story…Your description puts me right there with everyone!!! Amazing..the suspense is riviting…GO, Go Go girl…waiting patiently for more….

    13. You’re doing a truly original work here and I warmly thank you for giving us such a powerfull story. No doubt you’ll quickly have a waterfall of new readers after three so excellent chapters !
      Caught between the very living and real detective story’s side of this story and the very sensitive way to depict what will be a very unusual and engaging Bette & Tina’s beginning, I’m a very happy reader !
      Thank you very much for sharing your talent here.

    17. I will comment over and over again if will get you to post over and over again. I am absolutely hooked on this story. Your writing really pulls the reader in. You have a wonderful way of flowing between graphic scenes and tender moments…wonderful. Oh, and we will try to get you some help on the formatting. Although, I get so caught up with your writing, that I don’t pay much attention to that. Thank you!!

    19. Wow, is your other job, criminal investigating? It’s amazing how much insight you have on this kind of thing. Just love how slowly Bette and Tina are bonding. Post more, please.

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