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    Breathe- Chapter 4

    Story written on July 18, 2005 by Sox1.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=55490
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    Yea..formatting fixed: Bette takes Tina home

    Bette pulled her car into the garage and watched the door in her rear-view mirror until it had securely closed. Since Tina had fallen asleep again clutching Bettes hand to her face, Bette reached across with her left had and shifted the car into park.

    Awkwardly, she tried to reach through the steering wheel to turn the car off and pull her keys from the ignition. Having successfully turned the engine off, she finally decided to leave the keys right where they were.

    She turned her attention to Tina and tenderly stroked her face with her thumb. She applied a little more pressure until she saw Tinas eyes flutter and finally open. Tina realized she still had Bettes hand, but rather than releasing it completely she dropped her hand to her lap, taking Bettes with her.

    Were here, Bette said softly. I want to get you inside. You stay right there. I need to get an evidence bag out of the trunk for your clothes and then I will come get you.

    Tina looked down at her clothes, the memories of the day flooding back. Without saying a word Tina leaned her head back, squeezed her eyes shut and released Bettes hand.

    Bette quickly retrieved an evidence bag, and then was at Tinas door. Knowing the pathology of flight or fight syndrome in victims, Bette cautiously opened the door wanting to make sure she didnt startle Tina. Even though Bette was careful, and Tina knew she was coming, the young womens eyes flew open and her face reflected the panic she was feeling.

    Bette reached for her. Its OK, Tina Im right here. Bette said as she offered a steadying hand to Tinas arm and helped her out of the car. While Tinas face said she was sorry, she still offered no words.

    Bette stayed close to Tinas, almost carrying her into the house. She still held Tina to her side as she crossed and placed her briefcase and evidence bag on the table just inside the garage door.

    Even in her state of shock, Tina couldnt help but notice the stunning waters of Lake Washington out the windows of the kitchen and adjoining living room in Bettes home. Tina finally found her voice, not in regards to her friends death, or the horror of the days events, but simply in response to the view from Bettes home.

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    11. What an amazing style you have… So carefully detailed and subtle…
      I’m simply savoring your story more and more, with its such palpable touch of delicacy…
      All my sincere reader’s gratefulness !

    14. Sox,
      Awesome!
      To have a talent is a wondrous thing but to share it with so many is truly beautiful gift.
      You have captivated me with this fabulous fantasy.
      Can’t wait to see where this leads next.
      Much anticipation for your next installment.
      A Loyal Fan.

    18. Sox girl – you got it going here. Absolutely outstanding. I know you from TWOP too (bfan) and have been missing you there but this story is so so good please keep going.

    19. love this story . it is so engrossing and so well written. I could almost feel the pain, the tension, the possibilities … can’t wait for the next episode.

    23. You are only on chapter four, and already my breath catches when I see that you have posted…I’m telling you, I love this story!!! Oh, and I also can’t wait to hear how a detective can afford to live on Lake Washington and drive a BMW!! PS Try emailing support@l-word.com for the formatting problem. Thanks again for this wonderful story.

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