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    Breathe- Chapter 3

    Story written on July 17, 2005 by Sox1.
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    Yippee..formatting fixed: The ride to Bette’s

    She was right on the edge, Sir, and I didnt think an interview at the precinct was going to provide her with the safety and security I think she is needing to just maintain her composure, Bette was frustrated that she hadnt painted a more eloquent picture of the heartbreaking scene, but she had done her best and now she remained quiet.

    How long do you propose keeping her in protective custody, Detective Porter?

    Bette smiled and felt immense relief as she realized her Captain had just given his stamp of approval. Depending on Tinas mental state and how long she chose to remain at Bettes, his support would be critical if any outsiders chose to challenge her actions.

    In a serial murder case being closely watched by the entire police department, the media and every elected official in the city, Bette doubted those questioning her ability would remain quiet for long.

    Thank you Captain, she said trying to let her voice fully reflect her gratitude. Returning to a more professional tone she said Since its Friday, I thought we might give it the weekend. If she seems stable, I might start with some preliminary discussions to capture details so theyre not forgotten. If all seems well, I think we could anticipate a full interview on Monday. Bette stopped wondering if she had gone too far aksing for three days.

    What about your crime scene, he asked. Its not like you to leave all the evidence gathering in someone elses hands.

    Bette nodded her head in agreement. I know,” she said. “Its not like I left the scene unattended. Jules Thompson knew to secure the scene until CSI arrived. And Captain, Bette continued quickly hoping to sell the entire package, You have always told me we have the best CSI team on the West Coast and I was wasting my time..what was it you saidloitering around crime scenes, her voice reflected her smile. So I am going to let them do their job, and I am going to focus on something we havent had beforea witness, she finished.

    She knew that this was the moment of decision, and the fewer words he used in response the better.

    You do that Porter, he said and disconnected the call.

    Bette sighed heavily as she pulled the earpiece from her ear.

    Thank you, Bette was startled and she had to remind herself that she wasnt alone in the car. She turned to meet Tinas tired eyes. Her head was still leaning back on the head rest, her body unchanged from when she had been sleeping. Bette wondered if she was simply too exhausted to move her limbs at all.

    Your awake, Bette said quickly. Tina just nodded and repeated Thank you.

    Your welcome, Bette said in a hushed tone. We have another few minutes before we reach my place, you can certainly sleep some more if you want. Bette could not control the slight quiver in her voice as she was overcome with a powerful need to comfort and protect.

    Tina shook her head again saying nothing but her eyes betrayed all that she was feeling. As the first tears began to fall again, Bette reached out and softly brushed them from Tinas cheek. She shared her eyes evenly between Tina and the road, not knowing which one truly needed her the most.

    Reaching for her hand as if it was a lifeline, Tina gently held Bettes open palm against her face. She shut her eyes and let the tears flow. They fell from her eyes, covering Bettes hand in a steady stream of salty tears.

    There was nothing that needed to be said. Tina needed strength and Bette was strong. Tina needed safety and Bette could protect. Tina needed companionship and Bette could be her friend. Tina needed support and Bette would be by her side.

    TBC

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    1. i think i’m first. yeah!!!! soxy i told ya before i loved your posts on twop but dayum girl you are so selling it here. love this story. love the first meeting takes place. does tina ever leave now thats shes home. so glad you decided to post today. i’m sure you’ll figure out the spacing, we’ll all be patient. another post soon please.

    3. totally, totally totally sold on this story…Your description puts me right there with everyone!!! Amazing..the suspense is riviting…GO, Go Go girl…waiting patiently for more….

    13. You’re doing a truly original work here and I warmly thank you for giving us such a powerfull story. No doubt you’ll quickly have a waterfall of new readers after three so excellent chapters !
      Caught between the very living and real detective story’s side of this story and the very sensitive way to depict what will be a very unusual and engaging Bette & Tina’s beginning, I’m a very happy reader !
      Thank you very much for sharing your talent here.

    17. I will comment over and over again if will get you to post over and over again. I am absolutely hooked on this story. Your writing really pulls the reader in. You have a wonderful way of flowing between graphic scenes and tender moments…wonderful. Oh, and we will try to get you some help on the formatting. Although, I get so caught up with your writing, that I don’t pay much attention to that. Thank you!!

    19. Wow, is your other job, criminal investigating? It’s amazing how much insight you have on this kind of thing. Just love how slowly Bette and Tina are bonding. Post more, please.

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