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Drowning – Chapter 21
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Previously
“I will. Oh, Al?”
“Yeah?”
“Can we get together before you leave? I mean I know Tina is staying with you. But I just want to spend a little time before you go. Is that ok?”
Alice smiled warmly at Dana, a part of her wanting to so no, but most of her just wanting to see Dana and maybe get her to open up, “Yeah, Dane. We’ll figure out when.”
“Thanks. And thank you for last night. It means a lot to me. It really does, Al.” Dana’s eyes filled with tears as she spoke, “I’m sorry. It’s just been a really rough few weeks.”
Alice pulled Dana into a hug, “It’s ok, Baby. You never have to thank me. It’s a given. OK? And don’t worry, no matter what has you so scared, we’ll work figure it out. You know I’ll take care of you. I’ll do anything. Just please, don’t cry.”
Dana pulled Alice in tighter, “I know you would. I’m sorry. I’m so sorry.”
Chapter 21
Julia and Tina decided opted for the beach. They stopped on the way and got a shovel and pail for Cara. As soon at they hit the beach she went off running.
“Stay where I can see you and don’t go near the water!!”
“OKAY MOMMY!!!!” Cara settles right above the water line with her pail and shovel and went to work. Tina and Julia settled a few feet behind her.
“She loves the sand.” Tina remarked.
“Yeah but she hates the water. Did you really think you needed to remind her to stay away from the water?”
“I know, I know. But it’s in the Mom rulebook. I have to say it.” Tina said, smiling at her friend.
“Nice try! The Mom rulebook is your cop out when you know I snagged you. And Cara does not to be reminded to stay out of the water. Do you remember what happened when we walked her to the waves in Fire Island, just a mere 6 weeks ago?”
“I had never heard her yell like that. She was not a happy child. I never knew my little girl had lungs like that on her. I think it took three days for the headache to go away from that day.” Tina smiled at the memory “But we did have fun that weekend, didn’t we?”
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What?, Who? damn post soon! I have to say that I really like Julia, difficult situation for her. Thanks.
Way with the cliffhangers -lucia! Whatever Dana has done, I think I’m dreading it more than she is. You really write all these characters well; I even care about Tina in your story, which I don’t so much in the show, and Julia is a nice one too. Awesome that you manage to keep this and your other fic going at the same time, so different from each other but both so good.
holy crap! what’s wrong with Dane! I didn’t think it would be anything serious, sounds like it’s gunna be totally awesome. I hope she tell’s Shane. Yoda’s good with advice lol!!! Update soon!
Wow! Great chapter… can’t believe you stopped there. LOL. I love how you are developing Dana. She is my favorite and you are just making me love her more. So Dana has a “stalker”, I knew that she loves Alice to much to simply walk away b/c she’s scared of losing her friendship. But she would walk away if someone has been threatening to physically hurt Alice. Come on Yoda you can get her through this. :)
I am starting to really like Julia a lot, especially after she tells Tina “No, lie to me, please, yes, honestly.” LMAO.
So…how long will Julia have to suffer i slience? Tina could move back to L.A. to be with Julia. Bette could develop a relationship with Cara. All would be right with the world, almost.
man..u know u are on my favorite writers list right? this was a great chapter it was like i was watchin a soap oprea and a big even just happened finally some light on why dana is doing this….thanks for the great chapter lookin forward to anything that u post next cause u talented like that
Hmmm, I wonder which phsyco ex this is…lol
Just when I thought it can’t get any better, it just did! Like lights, Dana is my favorite and you write so beautifully. You got me so curious now about that mysterious letter, please don’t keep us hanging for too long.
Lucia…I’ve read this story from the start, and this is def one of my top 5 ever!!!! Your story telling is amazing, and I love the suspense with Dana. She is my absolute fav, and this is a great storyline for her. Please post soon
Dana what is going on with you…Tina needs to move on i feel really sorry for Julia, I hope Julia is able to tell Tina how she feels about her and Cara adores her…looking forward to the next post.
Thank you.
Can’t wait to see who it is and what the letter says…post soon!!!
OMG what a twist. i HATE cliffhangers. god post soon *****
like others, i wish Julia can solve her “problem” and she make it happen with Tina. i love them together :) Yoda’s help is needed but i think Alice could help Dana too – unless it’s the way lights said.. Alice in danger :/ please, continue soon. *mumbles* cliffhanger after cliffhanger..